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  1. Do you own a cat? Maybe you're typing while the cat jumps on your desk and you then type Kitty
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    Chapter 5

    Why is Wallace even on the council? Everybody knows he a boorish ass. "Do you have a boyfriend?" what was I getting myself into with Jacy? What was his motive for offering? Was he just being helpful or was it something more? Wow I bet @Summerabbacat is taking those as clues and is running with it. I admit that thought has come to me also. Is there any appearance or mention of Skye in this story? That could be another factor in Jacy's question
  3. And everything is still pretty much the same I get the feeling Kitt and his dad will have a conversation soon that won't be so calm
  4. Well somebody is going to be hurt when none of them deserve to be hurt.......Why couldn't Michael be the one to get hurt
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    Chapter 13

    Being the classy guy I am @Topher Lydon I say thisUSA beat Canada in gold medal game. Seriously it was a great game
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    Chapter 9

    ‘And a very short one at that,’ added Garrett, which only earned him a look of annoyance from Luther. ‘What?’ Garret asked. ‘We have perhaps twenty knights . . . against the might of the five armies from the Five Lands of Candor! May the gods be merciful, that’s all I can say.’ I am more out of my element with this kind of story than I usually am but the only thing my limited mine can come up with at the moment is there will be some supernatural stuff coming from The Warlord that will be the equalizer
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    Chapter 13

    Bobby's letter is genius in it's simplicity. I guess it will play a part in The corrupt Police chief demise. She'd laughed at his jokes, even the stupid ones....So...All of them? He will be something remarkable when he’s grown.” Well remarkable is ONE word you can say
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    Chapter 13

    Oh my this tells me Andrew's trip home is going to be eventful.
  9. Looks like we are not getting a new chapter today. I hope everything is OK @LittleBuddhaTW🤞
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    Chapter 40

    I hoped what happened at the end doesn't lead to Shaun saying or doing anything once he gets home. And what will those thugs have planned for the show on Wednesday? “Think we could do a three-bedroom for like… a thousand a month?” That would be a good price in San Diego .......In 1990.
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    Obfuscation

    Gabriel doesn't usually make mistakes of this kind so there IS something different about Sean We eat vegan pastry that tastes like playdough.”...... How does Sean know what play dough tastes like ?
  12. Many of you may have read the original version (I didn't) The people who like to read gay coming of age stories know why they like these kinds of stories. This one has everything you like in these stories.The Author has an in process story going on as I'm typing this called Out Of The Closet for those who may have read the original version of that he now is adding new never before read content to so I urge all of you reading this review to start reading that
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    Epilogue

    Thank you sir
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    Chapter 12

    I have a question with that .....diet??????????🤔 Jason grew up with how was he able to be a hockey player? You would think he would be too thin and malnourished he would collapse I know later Brad gave him food but still it would be a lot to overcome. Perhaps the school had some kind of free lunch program. Here's how twisted my thinking is right now . Part of me almost (I stress the word ALMOST!!!) likes Charlie Levesque and Alistair Merrier for scaring the crap out of Denton.But I don't trust me.
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    Chapter 12

    Unfortunately it was more than a night it was years
  16. “But too much attachment at this age…” He paused, choosing the word with care. “It’s unhealthy.” Oh does Kitt's Dad have a psychology degree now? Except for Matt breaking up with Lindsay ,Matt and Kitt has been in this holding pattern for such a long time now but the last sentence of the chapter implies that is going to change. Not to sound like Kitt's dad (please no ) but Matt does interact with other friends mostly his teammates Kitt doesn't seem to it is a bit unusual. Of course if Kitt did bring other friends around his Dad's vetting process would probably scare them off
  17. I hope it's not the case but it looks like Oliver might need to use his self defense skills. I hope Dylan doesn't have a big mouth. After class, a couple girls came over to flirt with me. They wanted some coding help from me. I notified them about my lack of experience coding and that disappointed them ,Well they went to him because everybody knows Asians are good with computers right?......Right?
  18. Wow Brisbane this is really getting exciting
  19. Oooooooh in astrology.I thought when people said you were a Cancer I thought....never mind (sorry couldn't resist but anything you say back I'll deserve😄)
  20. It has been raining here in San Diego this is what San Dieagens act like when we get rain No wonder they don't drive good in the rain
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    Chapter 11

    Clovis and Fitzy kept the talk light and local—the price of diesel, the sorry state of the Ottawa Senators, That must have been early in the season .I used follow the NHL until my city no longer had a minor league team. If I remember right the Senators had a good season in 2001 and it was a start of a good 5-6 year run where they were once in the finals
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    Chapter 11

    Well I'm sure since Walter's lesson that took up most of the chapter wasn't so Andrew would not use the gun in this story he will . The only question is who and I think we all have a pretty good who'll that will be.
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    Chapter 11

    I love that Picture
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    Chapter 11

    Well in a roundabout way he was to Orel
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    Chapter 4

    Okay first I'll get my crazy irrational predictions out of the way .How about for the secretary.......ASHER!!!!! The only reason that won't work is probably his school schedule. Another hopeful one for me is Jacy's younger brother he would be old enough now and it would be a good way to have him in the story.Just think @Josh Aterovis you can write a scene where Jacy's aunt has a scene with Novak I'm sure you can think of a good line for Novak to say to her😄 Unless I'm mistaken Jacy didn't have shoulder length hair in the previous story on the right person long hair looks hot so I bet Jacy looks like that. I'm glad Killian met the family. What's that? Oh the story you say? My first impression is the thefts are from someone in the council who was against this. Looking forward to more
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