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Remember my comment and your response in the Chapter 8 comments? Are you going to have a scene where Clovis beats up Brick?Or better yer Denton?......Can you write one🤞 i will give you a Clovis scene, our Grizzly Bear is going to avenge his best friend. Well this highly exceeded my expectations Yes that's me😄
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I'm out of my league when talking about relationships and my history is proof of that. So I won't guess what I think might happen.Emotionally I'm rooting for Jacy. We had a homicide last night. Drug related, most likely. Around here, most of them are. I'm thinking that comment is a clue of some kind .What's that you ask? (And I'm sure most of you asked) Well since you asked I'm thinking Wallace used someone who needed to support their habit to kill someone and gave him a gun to do it with and after getting the gun the back buried it on Indian land before any thought of a excavation happening. Now that there is a dig going on the gun may be found which is the reason why there is evidence of something going on overnight at the site.
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Well progress was definitely made with Kitt and Matt it's still going painfully slow for me but going in the right direction. One thing I came away with was Kitt's impression of Riverbend. This meet got him noticed by coaches who were scouting for talent. If Kitt gets offered a scholarship from a college close to Riverbend I think he would jump at it.BUT guess who will probably have a problem with.
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The way they got rid of Denton makes me recall the old Bond movie Goldfinger for any of you that saw it you know what I mean. Beautiful If law enforcement suspected something like that could modern technology check for that? I believe that's how they got rid of Jimmy Hoffa
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The part Hank knows up to the point of where he busted his ankle Merrick and Brick will be told that part but can they go to the police? Sure the corrupt chief would arrest Andrew on some kind go trumped up charge but any good lawyer would get Andrew off with Questions like "And Why were you and the deceased chasing Mr. Highmore?" etc. Testimony might expose things that lead to Merrick and co. If I have any of this wrong please tell me. OF course they'll use other options but this I think would not be one of them.
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They might think twice about Denton
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Los Angeles Prep and Paralympics
weinerdog commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Los Angeles Prep and Paralympics
This was back in the 90's so things may have changed but I heard there is some kind of system used where competitors from other countries have their travel covered in the Olympics. So I'm curious about the arrangement to get to Brisbane. Good chapter -
Los Angeles Prep and Paralympics
weinerdog commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Los Angeles Prep and Paralympics
This one is a bit longer than the rest in this story, but I think none of you will mind its lengthiness. Even so, I didn't get beyond the LA Paralympics, so I changed the title again. WHAT!!! You didn't go to Brisbane?????? I was so looking forward to that -
While Walter would be involved in the literal clean-up It has to be Tanaka to get rid of the body I would think. I thought Denton would last until the last chapter.This story is awesome
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Do you own a cat? Maybe you're typing while the cat jumps on your desk and you then type Kitty
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Why is Wallace even on the council? Everybody knows he a boorish ass. "Do you have a boyfriend?" what was I getting myself into with Jacy? What was his motive for offering? Was he just being helpful or was it something more? Wow I bet @Summerabbacat is taking those as clues and is running with it. I admit that thought has come to me also. Is there any appearance or mention of Skye in this story? That could be another factor in Jacy's question
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And everything is still pretty much the same I get the feeling Kitt and his dad will have a conversation soon that won't be so calm
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Frosted Hearts: The Talk
weinerdog commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Frosted Hearts: The Talk
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Being the classy guy I am @Topher Lydon I say thisUSA beat Canada in gold medal game. Seriously it was a great game
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‘And a very short one at that,’ added Garrett, which only earned him a look of annoyance from Luther. ‘What?’ Garret asked. ‘We have perhaps twenty knights . . . against the might of the five armies from the Five Lands of Candor! May the gods be merciful, that’s all I can say.’ I am more out of my element with this kind of story than I usually am but the only thing my limited mine can come up with at the moment is there will be some supernatural stuff coming from The Warlord that will be the equalizer
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Bobby's letter is genius in it's simplicity. I guess it will play a part in The corrupt Police chief demise. She'd laughed at his jokes, even the stupid ones....So...All of them? He will be something remarkable when he’s grown.” Well remarkable is ONE word you can say
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Oh my this tells me Andrew's trip home is going to be eventful.
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Looks like we are not getting a new chapter today. I hope everything is OK @LittleBuddhaTW🤞
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I hoped what happened at the end doesn't lead to Shaun saying or doing anything once he gets home. And what will those thugs have planned for the show on Wednesday? “Think we could do a three-bedroom for like… a thousand a month?” That would be a good price in San Diego .......In 1990.
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Gabriel doesn't usually make mistakes of this kind so there IS something different about Sean We eat vegan pastry that tastes like playdough.”...... How does Sean know what play dough tastes like ?
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Many of you may have read the original version (I didn't) The people who like to read gay coming of age stories know why they like these kinds of stories. This one has everything you like in these stories.The Author has an in process story going on as I'm typing this called Out Of The Closet for those who may have read the original version of that he now is adding new never before read content to so I urge all of you reading this review to start reading that
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I have a question with that .....diet??????????🤔 Jason grew up with how was he able to be a hockey player? You would think he would be too thin and malnourished he would collapse I know later Brad gave him food but still it would be a lot to overcome. Perhaps the school had some kind of free lunch program. Here's how twisted my thinking is right now . Part of me almost (I stress the word ALMOST!!!) likes Charlie Levesque and Alistair Merrier for scaring the crap out of Denton.But I don't trust me.
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Unfortunately it was more than a night it was years
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The Quiet Summer Before Everything Breaks
weinerdog commented on Tony S.'s story chapter in The Quiet Summer Before Everything Breaks
“But too much attachment at this age…” He paused, choosing the word with care. “It’s unhealthy.” Oh does Kitt's Dad have a psychology degree now? Except for Matt breaking up with Lindsay ,Matt and Kitt has been in this holding pattern for such a long time now but the last sentence of the chapter implies that is going to change. Not to sound like Kitt's dad (please no ) but Matt does interact with other friends mostly his teammates Kitt doesn't seem to it is a bit unusual. Of course if Kitt did bring other friends around his Dad's vetting process would probably scare them off
