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  1. weinerdog

    Chapter 11

    That makes him someone to WATCH out for......🙄
  2. For that I deserve a pass for my next groan
  3. weinerdog

    Chapter 31

    @Josh Aterovis Put the complete tag up so people can see the 5 stars I'm going to give it
  4. Did Russell compose? Perhaps through Fabian he'll finish a song he started
  5. weinerdog

    Chapter 31

    Jacy joined us occasionally, his calm, steady presence adding an easy and comfortable layer to our trio. It surprised me how natural it felt, the three of us forming the early threads of a friendship that I hadn’t realized I needed. That sort of fits with something I said in a previous chapter comment.Those three working together on cases.Great foundation for future stories. "It's about time," I said in lieu of a greeting. Kaplan chuckled. "These things take time, Kendall That was one thing when shows like CSI and their spinoffs came on the air.In one scene they collect DNA and then in the next scene they have the results. As if they put it in a machine some lights blink off and on and Viola results.I doesn't work like that it takes awhile "The dead are not powerless. Dead, I say? There is no death. Only a change of worlds." Among Killian's gifts is knowing there is somewhere we go after this existence.(In my case maybe not so good😄) While Killian is sadden he may not see Seth for now he did get to say goodbye and he knows he WILL see him again. That might be the biggest gift of all. As far as Breaking The Mask I'm reading the original version at the moment as this one is going to be a major rewrite and I can tell all of you this story is good And finally best line of the chapter "Kyle Leonard, the talking Sasquatch? I guess you could call it talking.😄 Speaking of Kyle anybody need a place to live I hear Kyle need a roommate now
  6. 6,666 words? in a story with demons in it? You had to of planned that.What did you? After you were done you saw it was 6,668 and then you went "I can change "would not" to "won't" that will make it 6,667" . Now to find one more word to delete"
  7. weinerdog

    Cloud Cover

    Wow I have to admit I didn't anticipate the being watched part. The very idea that those four thugs Kent took care of was some kind of set up is appalling.
  8. weinerdog

    Chapter 10

    The fitting was a surgical procedure. The components of Riley's new identity were laid on the bed with the reverence of a knight arming for battle. A black dinner suit, tailored from wool so fine it felt like a structured shadow. A dress shirt with front pleats like a secret cypher. A black satin bow tie. And the glasses. I'm surprised Riley didn't break out in hives You know I wish I had that terminology when I was a kid. "Where were you tonight"? " I was involved in an data exchange"
  9. weinerdog

    Chapter 10

    Bless me Father for I have sinned I didn't return a shopping cart
  10. weinerdog

    Chapter 10

    Just thought of something you know when parents before they go out for the night tell their teenage kids "Don't burn down the house". With Cecil it would not be a joke. "These are the souls of people who don't return shopping carts." I've done that before......Should I be worried?
  11. I’d been starving for that kind of contact since Ken died and hadn’t known how deep the hunger ran until it was being fed. After that thought I wonder how Kent sees Marvin,Is it as a possible significant other OR as a brother replacement for Ken? If it's the ladder that isn't fair to Marvin. Devon knows Kent has been through some stuff such as Ken dying.But is he aware to what extent? Does he know about the PTSD? I know it's a private thing that Marvin shouldn't reveal but perhaps he should tell Devon about that in case Kent has an episode at dinner.
  12. weinerdog

    Chapter 30

    Not a bad theory but PLEASE NO!!!!! That would put a stop to my Kasy or Jillian fantasy. Your comment about Ricky being in the Wong place at the Wong time reminds me of this Q: Why is it difficult to make a phone call in China? A: There are so many Wing's and Wong's you might wing a wong number
  13. The name of the story is Ruin The Friendship...If Bryan had died that would have definitely ruined it
  14. weinerdog

    Chapter 9

    Who would have thought the equalizer would be Riley's familiarity with gay sex. He was clean. He was safe. He was fed premium, nutrient-dense cardboard. I'm not so sure if that's a metaphor or if it really is cardboard The radio, when found, was preset to a classical station playing something mournful and complicate “I get the code to the Telly, the one that lets me watch what I want.” Riley narrowed his eyes. “270275” Ben said softly. “Deal?” Ben gave him the code to the Telly but notice he didn't give him the code to the preset on the radio. I guess Ben doesn't want to take a chance on hearing Oasis
  15. weinerdog

    Chapter 42 S3

    There is no reason for me to think this since there was no mention of anything like this but I remember a previous trip where they were being followed. If something happens where Devin and/or Mac have to shift it would be very difficult to explain to Lonny,Clint and Daniel
  16. Which means THAT"S exactly what you did😄
  17. weinerdog

    Chapter 9

    I must be losing it missed yesterday's posting without realizing it. I'm disappointed @Topher Lydon you had the deal take place in front of a McDonald's and you didn't answer the question I had in a previous chapter comment "How many souls for a Big Mac"?
  18. weinerdog

    Prologue

    I double checked and I was wrong it was TWO members that died that way.Duane Allman and Barry Oakley, Here the eerie part both ran into vehicles with their cycles.Almost a year apart and less than two blocks from both accidents.If was their record company I would have put a no motorcycle clause in their contracts
  19. I wonder who the ghost is😄 It is way too early to predict what is going to happen but do you think that is going to stop me from doing so anyway?......Of course not I can see the one of the finalists who didn't get chosen trying to kill Nigel and the ghost warning him about it
  20. weinerdog

    Prologue

    A member of the Allman Brothers died that way if I'm not mistaken
  21. weinerdog

    Chapter 30

    Only one chapter left😭 Will it include Killian getting his gun license AND his first gun. I loved to see Kaplan's reaction when he finds out that out😄 You would also have a great scene when Kaplan arrives at a crime scene after the first time Killian uses the gun after getting it
  22. weinerdog

    Chapter 30

    As @Philippe and @Joseph OHara mentioned Seth and I agree with what they said I too would like to see more of Seth but I believe he knew White Deer and to a lesser degree Jacy had him covered so no reason for him to show up. Interesting that Jacy had the same dream Killian had and while I so hope there's a Kacy or Jillian there will be some kind of relationship between those two regardless. Since they had the same dream I wonder if Jacy might be able to see Seth in the future
  23. weinerdog

    Chapter 8

    So that means what?......Be is still a monster ,but he's Riley's monster
  24. Marvin seemed to know all about Kent and what he was doing and not doing. Did Marvin himself go through this or someone close to him who he lost?
  25. Howard Cosell used to do that in one broadcast.....After the first quarter
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