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    Chapter 32 S3

    weinerdog commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 32 S3

    Wow you new chapter is in sync with Martin Luther King day and the NCAA championship game.Has that ever happened before with any of your chapters? You could have edited the chapter to mention the actual teams in the game 😄
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    What clean up? If one of their properties blows up they just get a new one
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    I won't lie when I was 16 I would have probably envied Hunter for all the action he's getting.But if he's really isn't using a condom and he's supposedly a good student he must have been asleep in the US schools about having multiple partners without a condom or his US school was just lame.
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    DE stands for defensive end there is also a position on offense called TE Tight end and I'm pretty sure you can think of the double entendre's in that
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    I'm glad to see Leon say if Asha had any trouble with gays he would drop her.But it seems like she's cool Cut this one a little shorter, kinda stuck on where to go right now. That's where musician have an advantage over author's if they get stuck they can just do a cover of an oldie
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    Chapter 36

    weinerdog commented on Mark Ponyboy Peters's story chapter in Chapter 36

    The security cams didn't show anything .They said they would check too see if other possible cams caught something.Could another cam show that Corcoran did the murder? Wouldn't it be something if it turns out Benevetti stops Corcoran from killing Rick. Or perhaps even the other way around
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    Hah!!! Name One of us.....OH except @chris191070 of course
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    Apostasy

    weinerdog commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Apostasy

    Another thing I could see happening is Gabriel and Lonnie having a confrontation due to a misunderstanding or even Lonnie assistance in something
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    Apostasy

    weinerdog commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Apostasy

    Oh I'm sure readers will like this. So it's safe to sat Gabriel will interact with the band......He may want to kill Sean while doing so
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    Did Brad perhaps hire a P.I. .Which would then be a whole other issue
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    Chapter 1

    weinerdog commented on chris191070's story chapter in Chapter 1

    Good story Thank you
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    I really think Hunter does love Yeison but not on a BF level. I think it's a no brainer that he should break it off .Is there a good way to do without Yeison being hurt? Damn I sure don't see it. But Hunter should really take to heart what Rory said and not do that to Yeison. Because Hunter WILL cheat if this continues. Cheese in hot chocolate? You know that doesn't sound so bad. Maybe one day they would turn my life into a telenovela. Why not @LittleBuddhaTW has already turned it into a GA story
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    Chapter 36

    weinerdog commented on mastershakeme's story chapter in Chapter 36

    Well if Kyle remains in custody then there is no concern about what could happen Ethan will probably continue to lay low.Everything will be nice and orderly and no drama. Something your stories NEVER are.(But that's good)
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    Chapter 36

    weinerdog commented on mastershakeme's story chapter in Chapter 36

    My angry reaction isn't at you it's at the situation that Kyle may(will) be out on bond. My first thought when I heard the police have Kyle was just that and then of course Shaun and Kyle crossing paths.But I guess if Kyle had stayed in custody it wouldn't be a @mastershakeme story would it? Monica rounded on Jesse again, voice sharp and bitter. “So this is what happens when you shirk responsibility—” Winner winner chicken dinner ...Winner of the most hypocritical comment of the year
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    Chapter 32 - End

    weinerdog commented on Krista's story chapter in Chapter 32 - End

    You forgot: Found On Road Dead
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    How did I miss this chapter being posted? I guess it's because you missed your Monday deadline. Thankfully you were able to post it on Monday
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    Oh shoot what did Oliver come down with? I bet his mom will blame it on Cody You both will shower separately, will have lockers on opposite sides of the locker room, and if we travel, you two will be in separate hotel rooms. Am I clear?” The separate hotel rooms I get but the lockers and showers stupid ,stupid ,stupid.What does the coach think? That they won't be able to control themselves and have sex then and there? If I were on the basketball team and Oliver and Cody are showering separately I would have to ask myself who do I want to sneak peeks at Oliver or Cody Logan and Kyle were chewing on popcorn watching the scene unfold. Why not it's way more entertaining than anything they can watch on TV
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    Chapter 32 - End

    weinerdog commented on Krista's story chapter in Chapter 32 - End

    I seen a bunch of lobbying for a sequel on this.As far as I can tell @Krista has never done a sequel before and I respect that. But If this one becomes an exception I'll be more than fine with it
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    Chapter 11

    weinerdog commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 11

    I was going to ask if the Christopher Eccleston encounter was based on something that happened in real life. He really does sound like a great guy. I'm Glad you're doing a Finn story.I'm guessing Garrett and Kyle are making an appearance in it. And why is it thirty degrees in here? Are they trying to melt the spandex?" being a typical arrogant Yank I was momentarily confused then I thought oh he must mean Celsius.Was I wrong to assume the story was set in the US? It hid the collar of his stupid yellow shirt. Does Garrett ever wear anything besides yellow shirts?
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    Chapter 32 - End

    weinerdog commented on Krista's story chapter in Chapter 32 - End

    Thank you so much for this bonus I'm so happy the Cody issue go resolved. Oh and @Jason Rimbaud ? @Krista kept the dogs alive in this one ,What more can you ask for?
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    Chapter 32 - End

    weinerdog commented on Krista's story chapter in Chapter 32 - End

    Yeah,yeah ,yeah you said that on the last chapter comment
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    Bailey did more than flirt she was lying her ass off trying to blame Aedan and probably lied to Kevin. BUT Jake's going to give her another chance.....Jake is whipped
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    Chapter 10

    weinerdog commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 10

    Well it certainly looks like things are solved but with the way these guys think I'm not taking anything for granted. The picture you have on the story page is of Garrett and Finn so I'm still considering a twist coming
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    Oh!!! so when your boss is gone for the day that's when you write got it Let hope nobody screenshot this.
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    At least you were not there in 2015 after it was done the last snow from that didn't melt until June 20216
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