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Welcome Back❤️ Hope you are well
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I may have asked this before but is Arya still alive and will she make an appearance in present time? “Who’s your daddy?” Didn't Alexander say that? I didn't know he was in this chapter......OH! OH! never mind
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A lot of readers have come to similar conclusions and I thought that also when I first read it ( Although my mind isn't all that great @Cane23😄) After everything was settled and the boys were packing up their things, Juan Camilo pulled me aside. "Have you talked to Miguel lately?" I hesitated. "No. Not since... you know." He raised an eyebrow. "Might be a good time. It would be better if things were... peaceful between you two." That exchange I think is more evidence of Hunter being used as bait to get close to a DEA target Miguel as @akascrubber says. Otherwise I see no reason why Camilo would even care if things were good between Hunter and Miguel? Why would Hunter go to Ferney? After what Ricardo showed him what he is packing Hunter could do some oral on Ricardo .It would probably work better for Ricardo then the painkillers😄 As far as Hunter making it to Ferney's I'm picturing Santiago Ramírez intercepting him before he gets there. I have to believe once they realize Hunter is missing they probably have his online activity monitored. Depending on how they react to this they might have to tell Hunter more then they are telling him now. and the air smelled faintly of antiseptic, overripe fruit, and old ladies who hadn’t had their diapers changed in a while. I love the story and you're writing @LittleBuddhaTW but that was TMI😄
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Since everyday is Monday for you then you won't miss it.
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And how does she know that I guess we know where @Krista eyes go during a date
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“Oh, uh, I’m really sorry about never answering any texts you sent me. My pear phone fell into the creek one time while I was herding goats across the stream. Unfortunately, smartphones aren’t waterproof.” He chuckled nervously. Doing a victory dance now @Lee Wilson
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Flat White and a Fat Wad
weinerdog commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in Flat White and a Fat Wad
Kyle the perfect character in So many ways.If you get stuck on a chapter just have Kyle do something...very Kyle like. Not the appearance so much because I'm sure made himself at least fair looking but his personality I picture him like Higgins from Magnum P.I the original one not the reboot with the hot babe -
The Cartel Strikes First
weinerdog commented on LittleBuddhaTW's story chapter in The Cartel Strikes First
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Instead of of 11 or 12 pages of comments like the last two chapters I think we'll now have 15
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Hey Skye can still be flawed as long as he wears that @Summerabbacat
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The Cartel Strikes First
weinerdog commented on LittleBuddhaTW's story chapter in The Cartel Strikes First
Now I want to see the other pic you switched it out with. In a way I wish I hadn't seen the pic . Based on the descriptions you have given the characters I'm guessing that is Miguel in the cover pic .I'm team Yeison. And with the gun in the pic it gives a clue where this story is going -
The Cartel Strikes First
weinerdog commented on LittleBuddhaTW's story chapter in The Cartel Strikes First
After what you said I'm going to stop having Google AI do my football picks -
Not much to say since @Seraph28 stole my thunderBut I did imagine things going worse for Joel trying to ride while still under the effect of a hangover but Raven dunking Joel is rather mild. Actually sounds like fun
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That was going to be part of my comment gee thanks.... kidding😄
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You should have had Lacey wake up Joel like that sleeping off his hangover. × Quote
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At least you didn't say first
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hidden bombs and explosions?
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I remember coming across some information about two-spirt they consider themselves LGB2TQ+ I also seeing as 2SLGBTQ+. So yes if Daisy a fanatic about her religion she WILL have a conniption. Jacy says he can't lie well so expect fireworks perhaps even Jacy leaving the house. I think @Summerabbacat comments about Daisy in the chapter comment are too kind. “You didn’t clap,” he said. That comment and Lily's comment of Skye being smug would imply he has a huge EGO. That in and of itself is not a reason to be careful maybe Skye is a player type but perhaps Jacy will ground him there is definitely an attraction there I lucked out and she was on the phone gossiping with one of her church friends, There's a lot gossip at the church I go to I'm sure they are oblivious to what the Bible and The Church says about gossip.Another one is when our Pastor end the mass by saying "Go in peace to love and serve the Lord" Then minutes later he hears angry horns in the parking lot......sigh people
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A Wizard and a Wet Sock
weinerdog commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in A Wizard and a Wet Sock
Morgan up to this point in his thoughts hasn't said anything about having a mate of any kind and I guess he wouldn't on Earth this would not only be mixed race it would be mixed planet. Morgan might be from a place where there is no such thing as gay/straight so if some feelings for Kyle comes up it may very well be a first for him at least on Earth. He was jittery in a way he hadn’t been since the Wars of the Roses, Why would that make him jittery? It was a funny movie...What's that?....OH! the actual war...never mind -
As you can tell I didn't look anything up. Was one of them Randy Rhodes?.....BTW what can we do with these bonus points
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Great chapter❤️ @CincyKris thought about Rick's dad? My very first reaction was with so much going on in the story Rick confronting his Dad would have to wait for a sequel. But actually being involved? Well right now it looks to be overwhelmingly Corcoran to the point that it's a no brainer.So Rick's dad would a perfect twist. Did you mention how old his parents were when they got married? If it was early in their twenties then that would make his dad late forties or early fifties and if he kept in shape certainly capable of committing the recent murders. I don't rule it out. ‘Whoo hoo! Coop’s got a boyfriend!’ Jimmy taunted. ‘Coop’s got a boyfriend!’ Uh.....are you sure Jimmy is 16?
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Thank you for the chapter❤️ I knew my parents would go right to sleep, since they had to work the following day, Is this set in 2025? Because New Years is on a Thursday unless they work in a hospital or something like that give them Friday off also geez. I'm assuming this is the last chapter of the year so Merry Christmas and Happy New Year and please get better
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But I’m not that guy. I have a girlfriend. I don’t want to be that guy That and many other comments in this chapter seems to be foreshadowing
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You know everywhere he goes he's the centaur of attention
