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Truth, Dare, and Consequences
weinerdog commented on LittleBuddhaTW's story chapter in Truth, Dare, and Consequences
Even if this Truth or Dare kiss didn't happen most of this chapter was Hunter talking about Carlos so I saw this happening anyway. Ricardo doesn't seem to have anything devious about him so I have to wonder what the hell was he thinking with that dare? Sure he thought it was just a game but he still should have realized what could happen. “Why aren’t you sitting with Miguel and his amigos?” That tells me Yeison already knew Carlos somewhat. -
Well they were beating around the bush for a long time finally. Oh and Happy New year to you
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I get why Uli is doing what he's doing don't agree with it but I get it. Fidel on the other hand saw that kickboxing sign. Well it's too late to do anything for the private school problems but I'm guessing he's planning on how he will handle future problems but I'm not sure this will do it either
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OutstandingYour cup runneth over
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Well that depends on what exactly is "too straight " if it's Colt I agree if it's the other thing I'm thinking of there is no such thing as "too straight "
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, then called me a dumbass. I ignored the text until he told me that he needed help with Calculus Uh Roy why are you asking a "Dumbass" to help you with calculus Perhaps Jax isn't as dumb as your usual football jock he was very pragmatic about it. BUT he did make the excuse about being drunk so there was some macho pride there. So do people think Joel is gay because he sits at the gay table? “Since most of you are failing my class, it would do all of you good to focus on your lessons.” Hey Mr. Swindell have you considered that it's because maybe you're not a good teacher
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Right now based on his last comment in the previous chapter comments I'm seeing @Jeff Burton doing this
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Made your day didn't it
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Chapter 11: Spring Out Of Middle School
weinerdog commented on RichardWrites's story chapter in Chapter 11: Spring Out Of Middle School
The Principal sounds like a moron The bully wanted to pick on the one white kid in the reform school. Only one white kid? That right there tells me the system is corrupt and I bet no rich kid was there -
Last Year? My how times flies I seems like it was just last week?
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Since nobody really dies in your stories it could be JFK or John Lennon for all we know
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I'd like to see who you all think our mystery guest is, we have met them before. I'm probably wrong but I'll guess TJ
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“You’re a coward,” he said out loud. “You’re a fucking coward.” The first step is admitting it to yourself. I normally would say Ulises has a long way to go but this story is only 5 chapters😄
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Chapter 11: Homecoming
weinerdog commented on RichardWrites's story chapter in Chapter 11: Homecoming
“Oliver, you’ll be a man in six months. It’ll soon be time for adult things like work, college, and marriage. Things I have tried to prepare you boys for. You’ve come a long way, but now you’ve broken my trust again. You’ve got to make better decisions. I expect better from you.” And I bet Ollie's dad NEVER!!!!!! had "had underage sex in his parents house Oh and would they have grounded Toby if he had straight sex in the house? My kisses then went down to his erect eggplant. Cody eagerly allowed me to deep throat his banana. Well what is it an eggplant or banana?......I guess it doesn't really matter😄 -
I have a feeling the capture of Corcoran will be at the actual Mardi Gras event after all it is the name of the story. Helen has the feeling they may not get a third chance but Cochran is obsessed with Rick so maybe they'll come up with a plan using Rick as bait. but I sure wish you could have seen the look on your face when I whipped it out.’ wha?.....OH! OH! his gun, when he whipped out his gun......never mind
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Cool...so 10 stories by @kbois eh?
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Call Kieran on 0415 555 555 Ah the U.S. and Australia have something in common their fictional stories and Movies etc use 555 phone numbers You know I'm glad this is set during the holiday season after Charlie spoke to Matt from from the other story I was thinking if this story wasn't set in December when they get to Sydney we won't have to worry about them walking into The Mardi Gras Murders
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Frosted Hearts: The Christmas Present
weinerdog commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Frosted Hearts: The Christmas Present
Why do I get the feeling Michael is not going to like the food?If he does complain they could always come up with a special ingredient for his plate “Ever had sex while you’re driving before?” oooh... I guess Percy hasn't seen The World According To Garp -
Frosted Hearts: The Christmas Present
weinerdog commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Frosted Hearts: The Christmas Present
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I suspect all that is happening is leading to something that will happen in Pheonix
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Yeah we were never that stupid were we........
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Happy New year to you also So WHAT???? Do you have planned exactly? You're not going to have Lyn wait until "If anyone can show just cause why they may not lawfully be married, speak now; or else forever hold your peace." Are you🤔
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As already mentioned Nick has done a very reckless thing but it could be the thing that catches Cocororan. I wouldn't be surprised If Corcoran is aware of Nick tailing him perhaps he is seeing this as a way to find Rick
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I was thinking the other day if libraries still used microfilm or if they transferred all the info to an. more advanced storing system. Did Devin or Mac first try to Google Johnny? I don't remember if that was mentioned. If they did and didn't find anything that would be surprising. I can picture Devin and Mac coming back home from patrol and just as they are transitioning back to human and being naked Louella shows up and calls the cops
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Frosted Hearts: The Gay Bar
weinerdog commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Frosted Hearts: The Gay Bar
6,666 words... does that mean it's an extra sinful chapter?
