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Well that went quite well all things considered. I suspect that Rick will accept Marc without hesitation. There is a story there. Rick was really upset about having been left out if the conversation based on assumptions of how he might react. Tim is a nice guy. Rachel is a classy lady. I hope they will find suitable partners.
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Hear hear 👏
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Matty is slowly inching his way into Rusty. Well what a picture that creates. @Raven1 you devil you.
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You won't be disappointed. It is an excellent read. It is also where we first meet my Rusty.
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Yes, Rusty is afraid to admit it, because it will change his whole view of himself and the world around him. 😉
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Well that was a scary moment. It certainly has had an impact on Jase and the way he handles his "numbers". Now to find Macy.
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Yep, nothing to add. So many possibilities. One thing is for sure- this story is a real page turner. Perhaps Lucas is Number 40 and not Macey.
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Yeah. Anybody could be rhe dark agent. It might be Connie, or Scott or any of the police officers. And just as Swift might be the bad guy, he might be rhe good guy too. Who to trust???
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Well there are certainly a lot of ideas in this thread. I think it's safe to say that Swift, while he might be a detective, is far more than that. But is he a power of good or evil? And why is Lucas immune to Jase' powers?
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A great chapter. I'm glad we got a bit more of Jase's back story and the additional information form Philip.
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Hmm. Yes. That ring indentation. Could be for anything but it might also be a symbol of commitment of some kind.
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Well I think Lucas is in for an interesting tale but I think he will be fine with what Jase tells him, befuddled but fine. It is interesting that the drama at the police station has not been reported Who is powerful enough to keep something like that quiet? 🤫
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Libby, I do have faith in them. Can't wait to read the next chapter. Have a safe flight.
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This chapter brought a tear to me eye and a smile to my lips. Thank you. Wonderful writing. I hope Marc and Sawyer can sort this out now that Marc is half way out rhe closet. Poor Rachel. The 'beard' can be left in an awful mess. I do hope you find someone for her Libby.
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Oy vey 🙈 I hope Marc had it in him to forgive Sawyer and I hope Sawyer realized that he has been a really self-indulgent idiot.
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That's a good point about May and the hospital. It makes sense to me.
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I think that Marc and Sawyer are progressing. Sometimes you have to take a step backwards in order to move forwards. You know, that darkest hours are just before dawn...bla bla I really like these guys and look forward to them figuring this out. I think, at some level, Rachel understands what's going on.
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I disagree @gdaniel. I think Rusty does love Matty but he's still a teenager so probably just full of bravado.
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Shhh. You know not what you say.
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No doubt. They're heading in that direction. They will both give their V Card to each other.
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Oh Joie J. That looks does suit you so well. I'm more this kind of model.
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Well certainly to me. I'm not sure about Joie J.
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Another great chapter. In a way I'm glad Marc and Sawyer were interrupted. Prolonging the gratification. 😆 The sooner Aunt May stops screeching about the doctor the better. Marc needs her still. And she still has a lot of enjoyment ahead. 😉 I think afinn and Karen are a match 😆
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So Reba is totally aware of Marc and Sawyer. I think Tim is too. He has made 2 comments that indicate he is aware. Rick is switched on enough to notice that something is ip with Marc but not what it is. Let's keep an eye on Aunt May and not forget about Bruce and Rachel.
