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I agree, The author has a wonderful way with words. The story flows and we are hooked in. This would make a fun movie.
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I strongly hope that you are wrong. But, you may be right, oy vey. The boys will have to endure the fire of refinement.
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😆 🤣 yes Maddox would enjoy the video and probably give a running commentary. I get that Jonathan is embarrassed and wants to spare Maddox the same embarrassment. I just don't think Maddox will react that way.
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I'm so glad that Jonathan and Maddox get to finally spend some time together. The fact that it is at Moddox's home which has proved so welcoming is an added benefit. Jonathan must allow Maddox to stand with him through the madness of the Xpress. I hope he decides to stay for Christmas. I've had enough of the uncertainty. A beautifully written chapter as always. You have a way with words Mrs Fox.
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The Consequences of Violence
Doha commented on Mawgrim's story chapter in The Consequences of Violence
I wonder if D'gar letting Hortaimin stay will turn out to be a good decision leading to Hortaimin's flourishing, or if it will be something we all later regret. Let's see. I have a horrible feeling we are going to see some future tragedy linked to Hortaimin being Hortaimin. I hope I'm wrong. -
The Consequences of Violence
Doha commented on Mawgrim's story chapter in The Consequences of Violence
Hortaimin will need to do a lot of changing before he is good at anything. He is a real little shite. I agree with you - no sex while the dragons are little. -
The Consequences of Violence
Doha commented on Mawgrim's story chapter in The Consequences of Violence
Whorevitamin!! 😃 😀 😄 a very good adaptation. 👍 -
So Trevor popped out to do his little scare dance. He is clearly not very observant or just plain dumb. The laptop was within his grasp but he was too busy doing his "cool scary dude" thing. What an arse. I'm glad Tyler is going with Elijah. It's too soon for Elijah, but perhaps Tyler will meet a hunky wolf. 🐺 I like his financial planning. 👍 good job.
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I think we will see that inner strength that Elijah has blossom now. I think Tyler will be a great help in that process.
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The war is taking a toll on Karl. The thought of losing Kristian and then Jorgen is a lot for him to manage. Nevertheless, he will have to as there is no viable alternative. A great day for the Danish pilots.
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The Power Of Long Letters
Doha commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in The Power Of Long Letters
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The Consequences of Violence
Doha commented on Mawgrim's story chapter in The Consequences of Violence
I'm glad the thing with Hortaimin came to a head and that he has been deserted by his cronies. Perhaps he will learn to be a little more human. D'gar is a good leader and especially for young people. I miss S'brin.- 28 comments
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Chapter 28: Remarkable Reception
Doha commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 28: Remarkable Reception
I'm glad Vincent is enjoying his new role and learning the ropes. Using his naivete as a cover is a good idea. Jake 8s a good mentor. 👍- 17 comments
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What a horrifying chapter. 😳 I cried. 😪 Magnificently written. Awful content. 😖 I hope that in some way it I not the end of Kage and you have some shifter resurrection in mind. Elijah needs to go somewhere for a while and recover, regroup and then come back and take Huntingdon down!
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The Power Of Long Letters
Doha commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in The Power Of Long Letters
Ray is the best kind of best friend. He will find a way through this mess. Maddox's mom has just become a heroin. So Jonathan and Maddox have a whole lot of good people on their side. The Xpress makes me think of Bridgerton and Lady Whistledown. The ragged excuse of a school paper will be shown up and the writers shamed as they ought to be. Maddox, Jonathan, Ray, Rusty and the boys have to find a way soon. Hopefully Hanna will be with them. Such a well written chapter. Thank you. You have elicited a range of emotions: anger, smiles, laughter, rage, more rage ... -
Nope. Hortaimin is quite thick.
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Thank you for a super chapter. Hortaimin is revealing more of his true nature, which is pretty foul. Jevikel did what he needed to, to prevent Turmevon being thrashed. I loathe characters like Hortaimin. D'gar is nobody's fool and I'm certain he is fully aware of what is going on.
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Hortaimin is an arse. I am interested to see how he gets on and whether he will impress the brown at least, expected by his father. I'm glad Kadin has impressed the Harper. Kadin is a good guy and a perfect mate for Jevikel. I am sure D'gar is aware of the candidate politicis going on and will sort it out on due course.
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Wow. Elijah will have to pull a rabbit out the hat on this one. I'm sure he will come to the rescue somehow. As for Trevor, he needs to go.
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Chapter 27: Joyful Joining
Doha commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 27: Joyful Joining
I had forgotten about the impending marriage. Thank you for a lovely chapter with many moving moments. 😘 That wedding night is going to be a riot. I am pleased that Vincent's parents were there, even in spirit. -
I can accept that 😃. We shall wait with baited breath.
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The real danger starts. Let's eee how this pair does against a lion alpha. I hope a by product is work for Ty.
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Clean Up Your Act, Rusty Parker!
Doha commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Clean Up Your Act, Rusty Parker!
The Express is a rag that is hurting people for the entertainment if others. The editor is someone who is a sadist with some kind of narcissistic elements as well. It could be Conor, or a new character we haven't met. I don't rhink it could be Ray, or Kane or any if the "bros". I'm glad Rusty got Maddox to see reason. Maddox was enjoying his anger dar too much. We do that sometimes, nurturing our righteous indignation, long after the event. It NEVER does anything but prolong the pain. I hope Maddox will hunt for Jonathan and find him. -
Well that chapter had me laughing and crying. I hope that Kage will reasses his thinking about Elijah. His life is a dangerous one, but love doesn't come knocking every day. Take it when you can and fight for it fiercely.
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Home is wherever Elijah is. Love it!
