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A positive chapter with many small steps forward for Galen. Dr Snowden will hopefully help him on a cognitive level. Galen's connection with Dragon and Josh may be the start of healing emotionally.
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There is definitely light at the end of the tunnel.
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Yeah, same. What the right horse can do for kids on the spectrum is simply amazing.
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Galen is in a really bad way. A lot is dependent on Dr Snowden. Let's hope he knows how to treat this. Galen is still in that shell and connects with Buck. Animals are amazing therapists.
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I'm surprised that Galen is living alone. He needs to he with people who love him. Liam and Jody in particular. Or in some kind of retreat house for therapy. This kind of ptsd isnt going to heal itself. Buck will definitely help.
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My mother used to say that to us kids all the time There are none so blind as those who do not wish to see Or There are none so deaf as those who do jot wish to hear.
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This story is gripping and I've enjoyed every word. Some of it I've read with gritted teeth and steam coming out of my ears. This is where the old fashioned me says the death penalty is not a bad thing. Galen is going to carry the physical scores for the rest of his life. As for the emotional scars it is hard to tell but he has the devils own job ahead of him to recover fully.
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Well Roger is a serial killer and a psychopath. Josh, Josh, Josh. I hope you knew nothing of this. Poor Galen. I'm glad Liam has him safe now.
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He sure is. But people married to serial killers often have no idea.
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Wow. A great chapter. What an ending. The best week is going to feel very long. It hinkle that Tyoer's family is going to find out about the supernatural in double quick time. Keeping their hands off their mates is going to be really hard. Let's see how they go. I'm glad they are invited to join th pack. 👏 👏
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Wow. Another cliffhanger that is a repeat of the first one. 😳 I hope they can trace his phone.
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That's quite a cliffhanger Val. Let's see how it goes. 😏 I'm curious as to why Galen will later regret whatever I read in the next chapter.
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Galen is pretty self-absorbed at the moment. I agree. He needs to take a step back and really sort out his head.
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Yeah Josh is frustrating. There is obviously something that binds him to Roger in some way despite knowing he is being played with. I wonder what it is. 🤔
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Hey, what a fantastic surprise. I'm so glad these characters have overlapped. Can't wait to read the next story! Thank you for writing.
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Oy vey 🙈 So much love and so much heartache. Some of it already seen more, soon to be seen.
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Well that was a big chapter. Josh does try to live his life in little boxes, all segmented and neatly packed away. I think it's a man thing. Ethan is going to be jettisoned I think. He needs to grow on confidence. I suppose being unacceptable to his family erodes his confidence badly. Right, let's see what the next chapter has in store.
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Yeah, this is the end for Ethan.
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Well this was a moving chapter. Josh behaved terribly, shamefully even. I fully appreciate Ethan's reaction when he saw Josh and Galen together. That realization that you love more than you are loved in return is mortifying.
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Yep, he will be paying the price. Josh will only choose Galen when he realizes that Roger is not an option. That is not a good basis for the choice I think he will make.
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Yes, to everything you have said.
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Karl is feeling Jorgen's disappearance so badly. They were dear freinds and Jorgen was a strength to Karl. I do hope that he is OK. I cant help but feel Jorgen is a better match for Karl than George.
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All your stories do this Mrs Gnomie. So thank you.
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The third part of a trilogy of stories, this Epic-logue concludes the tale of Loe, Jay and the gang. You will be smiling, laughing, crying, shouting and smiling again as you are drawn into their stories. Mrs Gnomie has an engaging style of writing, that invites the reader into the action, and once you are in, you will not want to leave.
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