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"Liars, Cheaters and Traitors, Oh My!"
Doha commented on CasualWanderer82's story chapter in "Liars, Cheaters and Traitors, Oh My!"
Nick is playing this very, very well. I am intrigued as to what his next move will be. Richard may well end up being Nick's Harbour in the storm. As for Bobby and Adrian, it could go any way now. Your writing is really gripping and I'm loving the quality of description and choice of vocabulary. -
That was a deceptively dark start. 😳 I'm fascinated though and interested to see where it goes.
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Keith needs a dose of common sense and courtesy. Cammie showed real leadership in this situation. Let's see how Jon and Jim go in the face of Keith's rage.
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Very sorry that Cammie has been diagnosed with cancer. This will be a turning point for Jim and his family as well as for Jon and how they all blend into the mix over the months that Cammie is in therapy.
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I totally get where Jim is. With years of marriage, kids, coming out later in life everything is a little scary. But, he will emerge stronger and more secure through it, with Jon and Alex playing a major role in his development.
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Jon is providing a rational argument and Jim cannot really argue against it, nor does he want to. Alex is a mature kid. Keith might be a challenge but will come around eventually.
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Jim's response to what he would do differently, is exactly the one I have as well. Just braver and more honest with myself and those close to me. This was a fantastic day for father and son. Alex will accept Jon very happily.
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And the heat in the room goes up another notch.
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What a fun start to the story. Cody and Brad could get very hot and bothered teasing each other.
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It would be ironic if James and Jon broke up just as Alex gave his girlfriend the boot for not accepting his dad. Alex is revealing himself to be one awesome kid.
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These two would make an amazing couple. I hope they both see it soon. The sex is also going to be mind-blowing.
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Late Nights with my Hot Boss is an exploration of eroticism and the build up of attraction between a boss and his intern. Blake and Troy are attracted from the start and we enjoy a voyeurs view as theu get closer, culminating in a night of mind-blowing sex. A quick, and exciting weekend read.
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The Night With Mr. Maddox (Finale)
Doha commented on StoriesByTroy's story chapter in The Night With Mr. Maddox (Finale)
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Well that is a good start to renewal of their relationship. Slow and steady and before they know it...
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What an ingenious way to get Tony an Aaron to actually engage. Well done Scott.
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I'm glad the lads are all together and that Ben, Sam and the kiddos will be joining them. Let's see what will get Aaron to soften.
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Nope, tofu in any form is diabolical.
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I'm glad Troy was in charge of that session. 😌
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They're mopping up the mess 😆
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First Touch, First Hunger
Doha commented on StoriesByTroy's story chapter in First Touch, First Hunger
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The True Touch of a Lover
Doha commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in The True Touch of a Lover
And for the record, I love your writing and feel, as you do that GA is a safe and warm gathering place.- 31 comments
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The True Touch of a Lover
Doha commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in The True Touch of a Lover
Well that makes me happy! If they can have this evening together, ironically at the top of a tower, I am hopeful that Ryder will see that his dated mate is Danny while Pembroke is his mortal enemy.- 31 comments
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The difference in age and stage in career is definitely allowing Troy to be wooed in a way he would not have with someone his own age. I wonder if the feeling will still be the same when the novelty wears off. For both of them. Just me being cynical having lived this kind of thing fairly recently. As the older partner naturally. 😆
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Well that first response was to be expected. I'm glad to see that Aaron and Tony have bothe filled out as they have matured.
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That might be the first comment but I hope the ignoring if an extended hand is because there will be an embrace instead.
