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The plot continues to thicken. Jeremy is lucky to have family looking after his sons.
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Chapter 7: Revelations leave Carter broken
Doha commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 7: Revelations leave Carter broken
The maze becomes increasingly complicated. But it seems that Elena is Grace; Ethan is Nathan; Carter is Jason. Dexter is Carter's half or step brother. Is Jeremy still Jeremy? -
Chapter 6: More revelations from the past
Doha commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 6: More revelations from the past
I thought Elena was Dexter's mom. He is calling Laura mom again. Is Eric the guy looking for Carters mom? So why is the aunt here? Poor Jeremy. -
An excellent description @Philippe. Dexter is precisely like a Hyena. Sly and bloodthirsty.
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This is becoming very entangled. Jeremy needs to stand up to his family and the rubbish they are teaching his children. We also need to find Carter's mom. Who is torturing Elena and did Ethan really die from leukemia?
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Wow, Dexter is a real lunatic. Poor Elena. Laura needs to calm down. Where is Jeff? I hope he isn't the bad guy and Dexter the red herring. But there is a bit of rivalry for mum's attention, so perhaps...
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To whom could Elena be referring? Jeremy is unlikely. Dexter is obvious. Could it be Jeff? But why?
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Same questions as above. Also I notice Exter is calling Laura aunt, where he used to call her mom. Delighted to be back in the story.
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Silent Heartbeats is a story about two heartbroken men who find each other through a series of disasters. An excellent holiday read filled with exciting moments and crazy cliffhangers. It is well-written and engaging.
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This was a great story, well written and engaging. I'm looking forward to loving onto the installment. Thank you for writing.
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Agreed. Excellent story and I loved it. We need Carter to stop crying.
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Chapter 18: Jeremy's life is in danger. Will he make it?
Doha commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 18: Jeremy's life is in danger. Will he make it?
That Dexter really needs to brought down a peg or two. Same for pseudo-mother Laura. -
Chapter 17: Danger is close. Will Carter and Jeremy escape?
Doha commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 17: Danger is close. Will Carter and Jeremy escape?
Where did the other 2 baddies go? -
On the run to safety but not there yet. Keep running guys.
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Chapter 15: Carter is in deep waters. Will he survive?
Doha commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 15: Carter is in deep waters. Will he survive?
This is a close tussle. -
Well this is going to get very violent. Who is Carter looking for? Jeremy has got a lot of making up to do.
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Carter has 2 people intent on destroying him. 😳 My hope is that Dexter amd Elias collide and Jeremy saves the day.
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Jeremy is starting to let go of Ethan, because of Carter. He is so confused by what is going on that he is lashing out at everybody, including Andrew. Now, more than ever, Carter needs to be strong and take charge.
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The plot thickens.
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Now we see the reason for Dexter's animosity. What a piece of work he is.
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Dexter and Jeremy's mom are a bad combination. Jeff seems to be the sensible one.
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Interesting that Jeremy went to find solace with Carter and not Elena or Jeff.
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Hopefully this is the watershed moment for Jeremy.
