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The writing is superlative. You are developing the characters in such a skilled way that we don't consciously see it. Just brilliant!! Adam and Kai are getting to know each other in the way you can from a distance with time between each piece of correspondence. By the time they meet, it will, as others have said, be a reunion rather than a meeting.
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A Decision for Jarren is a story of two men fighting their demons and finding each other. By doing so they discover that unity is strength and that together they can defeat their uncertainties, come to terms with their loss and move forward with love. I have read this story twice and give it a massive thumbs up 👍.
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Oh boy, sending a photo in a letter. This is grand. For whatever reason these rwo men have been drawn into a correspondence that will allow them to become part of each other's lives. It is as though the Fates have willed it.
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As a conscript into the South African Defence Force in the late 80s, I remember all too well the excitement of receiving letters from friends and family. These two are both quite formal, old-fashioned gentleman types. I'm intrigued and look forward to seeing where these letters take them. 🤔
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What a magnificent story. Thank you for taking the time to write it, for responding to the comments and inviting us into Jarren and Nash's world. I've cried, laughed, smiled, bitten my nails and lived alongside our boys. I hope that 5 years on, they are living their best lives, that Keon's scars have been disguised under magnificent tattoos and that Liam is playing baseball. Thank you ❤️
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I have thoroughly enjoyed reading this story again some years after the first reading. 😊 A double wedding, followed by a double adoption. Classic.
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Presentation to Their Majesties
Doha commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Presentation to Their Majesties
Another wonderful chapter in the story of George Granger and Co. Calvert was wonderful with the children. When he and George were in attendance together for the children's presentation to the king, it felt like a family. Calvert's advice to George was spot on. A wonderful opportunity for Elizabeth awaits. As always, I can hardly wait for the next chapter.- 17 comments
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As others have already said, rhis is a brilliant chapter. Opera is certainly a "like or don't like" artform with little room for uncertainty. Keith and Thomas have come such a long way together. They have grown and molded into one another. It is beautiful 😍.
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I'm glad that the claims have been sorted out and our guys will be well compensated for all the damage that has been done to them.
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Everything is falling into place. ❤️
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That was a lovely service and Liam's surprise brought tears to my eyes.
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A lovely light-hearted chapter. Looking forward to a wedding. And, yes, a straight boy doesn't spoon his gay friend all night. The boys will figure things out over the years. No rush.
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Nash is a legend and Kyle is a loser. Cassie did an amazing job with the gala and hopefully raised a substantial figure. I was very proud of Nashville Johnny Cash Hawkins 😆 🤣 and the way he dealt with Kyle. Jarren was also amazing and poor Donna will need to take some tranquilizers. Or, perhaps she will feed them to Kyle.
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Do not skip past this short story. You simply must read it. It is masterfully written and will leave you gasping.
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OMG! I was caught hook, line and sinker! And then the ending knocked me out the park. Brilliant writing! 👏
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Another calm and delightful chapter. 😊 All aspects of Thomas and Keith's lives are moving forward and they are becoming more and more of a highly functional team. Jonty may need a story of his own.
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@Paladin you've certainly summed up everything very neatly. Those questions are insightful and I'm guessing that @Laura S. Fox is going to drip feed us the answers. 😆 🤣 😂
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Caroline is a wise woman and at this rate will have 3 boys to look after. Gay conversion therapy, wow. Tbh, if I had known about it at 20, I would have put myself on it. Thank goodness I didn't know it existed. 😅 Some old scabs are being picked in this chapter. I'm glad Keith and Thomas have each other.
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Well, we get to see a new side to Jamie - Jamie the online for pay peep show! He also has started realizing that his lines are rehearsed and that this labels him as a nice "rebound fuck, but not boyfriend material". Some trouble lies in Jamie's future I think 🤔 as he begins to consider what all of this means. He needs a bit of Jonathan.
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A quick zip through the summed with a variety of loose ends tied up and a few brought closer to conclusion. I'm hopeful that the settlments/court rulings will be substantial, but in the meantime there is a wedding to attend.
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What a Brady Bunch type of feeling the Daltons have. Liam is going to be looked after so well. Loving this story!!
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That was a great meeting between Cassie and Nash. Cassie and Liam will be very strong allies. 😆 Keon and Liam are still kids. But in the 5 years since this was written, I reckon they've fallen head over heels for each other.
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Calling in grandma is like sending on the marines. 😆 🤣 😂 well done Jarren. 👏 This new family just feels right. Knowing your people and being with them. Love ❤️
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So the house is being transformed into a home. It's great that they can do the work themselves. I'm interested to see how Keon and Liam get on and also what the outcome of the legal case will be.
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Keon is a looker. 👌 Our guys are setting everything up for Liam's arrival. This is an exciting new start for them all. 😀
