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Jeremy is starting to let go of Ethan, because of Carter. He is so confused by what is going on that he is lashing out at everybody, including Andrew. Now, more than ever, Carter needs to be strong and take charge.
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The plot thickens.
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Now we see the reason for Dexter's animosity. What a piece of work he is.
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Dexter and Jeremy's mom are a bad combination. Jeff seems to be the sensible one.
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Interesting that Jeremy went to find solace with Carter and not Elena or Jeff.
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Hopefully this is the watershed moment for Jeremy.
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Well done Jeff! 👏 👏 👏 I'm glad Jeremy is going to have to deal with his own injustice and abusive behaviour. As for Dexter, a total gobshite.
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Jeremy is behaving like a total arse. Dexter is just a little bitch and Carter needs to stop sniveling and grow a pair.
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Chapter 3: A scary situation turns into Carter's favor.
Doha commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 3: A scary situation turns into Carter's favor.
Lots of thoughts already mentioned. Dexter is bad. He has a weird energy. Carter is a bit of a cry-baby and needs to grow up fast. But, he reminds both Jeremy and Oliver of Ethan, so let's see what's in that mix. 🤔 -
First 2 chapters are intriguing. I think I'm going to enjoy this story. Dexter is out, Carter is in, but they all need to grow up a bit. Carter should not have cried in front of Jeremy.
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A quick little investigation, a quick return of Larry, which we hope will not last too long. 😀 This obsession with cleansing will need to be looked into, especially as Ken describes it as "maniacal".
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Agreed. Larry is a tart.
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The scorned wife. It makes sense. What did she do with the penises? Hopefully Ken gets over Larry quickly and finds a real love. Still holding out for Jason. Thank you for entertaining us so well.
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With 1 chapter to go, we are still none the wiser. This is really good.
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So this plot has become very thick indeed. Are we dealing with a contortionist, or some kind of spirit? Norm is becoming an obvious answer but rhis might be a red herring. This is really well layered. I'm looking forward to the big reveal.
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This is an angle I've been thinking about as well. Could there be some kind of malevolent spirit involved in this. Some of the killings seem impossible.
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Alphabet killings. An interesting twist. What has the killer/s so intent on killing in alphabetical order? Now even when all are in gaol we find E has been murdered and cock cut off. I wonder why some have had them severed and others not? Is it a top/bottom thing? Let's see how this progresses.
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Lol, can you imagine Poirot or Miss Marple at an orgy.
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Wow! This is moving along and Ken and the Chief are deeper in the hole with each minute they don't report this. I hope they can solve it and resolve it.
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I'm hooked. 👍 I like Jason for Ken, but who knows. Quite a party 🥳 🎉 but who did Abel piss off?
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Second Shot is a remarkable story of two young men, who find each other against the odds. From start to finish, this romance had me riveted - engaged in a way that few stories have achieved. This is the perfect holiday read.
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I loved this story and putting it down to sleep was a hardship. I felt part of the story and included in the action. Thank ypu for taking the time to bring these characters to life and to include me in their life together. ❤️ 😍 💖
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It was just what I needed at this point of the story! I also loved it 13 years later.
