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A great start to what promises to be an engaging tale.
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What a beautifully crafted short story. 😍 Thank you for sharing this gem.
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A nice bonding kind of chapter, setting rhe scene for what is to come next. Vanessa is emerging as a strong, loving mum prepared to extend tat love beyond her immediate blood family.
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Fan-bloody-tastic!!! I'm delighted.
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Another brilliant chapter. Josh is going to flourish as he deserves to.
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OK, so that got dark amd deep very quickly. Child safeguarding is a major imperative and Jords is going to have to disclose this to the authorities at some stage whether Josh likes it or not. I'm hopeful that they will all get to that point together.
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What Brings Us Together Part One, is a love story that made me smile, laugh and cry. Beautifully written, it tells the story of Jordan and Cameron, and a love that blossoms literally overnight. We sense in this pairing something solid, warm and filled with hope. i could not put it down.
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Not just tears but sobs! You are so evil @Paladin. Mein Gott! This is all falling into place and I love itlowill move on to Part 2.
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More tears in my eyes. Damn! Another brilliant chapter. 👏 I think we have the making of a little family right here.
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An amazing chapter and I have tears in my eyes. Josh will become a permanent part of their lives I hope. These guys need to have a second home in Stingray Heads. Adam must have been that special guy in Jordan's life.
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Something big is emerging through the fog on the horizon of Jordan's past. Everybody knows except Cameron, and Jordan simply has to tell him.
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Well a very positive and successful road trip and family gathering. These two are totally accepted by one another's families. As for Stingray Head, it's a great name. It reminds me of a little place in Nusa Penida, just south of Bali, called Manta Point. Jordan has something on his mind and heart. Stingray Head has something to do with it. Let's read and see.
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Well a very positive and successful road trip and family gathering. These two are totally accepted by one another's families. As for Stingray Head, it's a great name. It reminds me of a little place in Nusa Penida, just south of Bali, called Manta Point. Jordan has something on his mind and heart. Stingray Head has something to do with it. Let's read and see.
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Meeting the parents can be a harrowing experience. I've got a feeling it will go well but who is the mystery man from Jordan's past and when will he show up?
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So Pembroke and Ryder are not fated mates. That leaves the other bloke who lives at the top of a tower. Go Danny. I wonder what research our rodent clairvoyant is doing? And for whom?
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Well let's see how these 2 get on. I thinkum is going to be pushing hard as well. This is better than Hallmark. ❤️
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Same as @Daddydavek. Saw part 2 and thought ooh, lets check out part 1. A great start with a super fun couple. 😀
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I love Ryder. Your scent is offensive. 😆 🤣 😂 A drama queen 👸 won't like that. Kat is a real little b*tch. Go Team Danny&Ryder!
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A quiet reflective chapter for James and a great bonding time with Alex. I'm looking forward to James taking his own advice with Jon.
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So nice to see Granger again! He is a master diplomat. Caroline on the other hand, is not. I am quite certain that Daventry knows Granger exceptionally well and realizes that it was not the Countess that caused Granger's heart-break. A wonderful chapter, informative, exciting, fun. Thank you.
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Better than all the rest
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Jon and Jim are getting to know each other and enjoy the playful innuendo. I'm looking forward to seeing how this develops. 😄
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Jim is understandably nervous. Jon is young, fit and would feel out of his league. Nevertheless, all the signs of interest are there.
