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  1. Doha

    Twenty-Nine

    Wow! Keith has come a long way. From living with his mates, to getting his own place, coming out publicly, a boyfriend, presenting to school boards and lady's groups. Keith's growth has been phenomenal. Loving it. ❤️
  2. East London, EC, South Africa
  3. A nice chapter or consolidation. Mark and Sebastian together. More info about Chronos and the Contructs. We see Sebatian with a new and raw power so is the Triad a Quad? Clara finally get some sleep. 😃 😊
  4. I'm so glad this story is back on track. Really enjoying it. My mind is certai ly ablaze keeping track of all that is going on. I understand Mark's response to Chronos and as @drsawzall suggested, something chaotic happened to him in the time travels to evoke this response. I'm glad he and Sebastian are reunited.
  5. Harlem, NY, USA
  6. Ethekwini, KZN ,South Africa
  7. This is a short read, perfect for a weekend afternoon on the sofa or back porch. A feel-good story, Down the Shore will leave you delighted and wanting more.
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  8. Doha

    Chapter 1

    What a fabulous read. Just 10 minutes and I don't want it to stop.
  9. Doha

    Twenty-Eight

    This was a great chapter and opened our eyes a little to Thomas' experiences in Africa. Although homosexuality is as real in African cultures as it is anywhere else, it is frowned upon and in some places criminalized. Thus will have been hard for Thomas and we haven't heard the end of it yet. But Keith and Thomas are a delight!
  10. Doha

    Twenty-Eight

    That is a sweet, sweet line!! @Summerabbacat
  11. Doha

    Chapter Fifteen

    Like the others, I worry that Rabiah, is more interested in having a pet demon than getting Theodrik home. She may be helpful or self-serving. It could swing either way.
  12. Doha

    Chapter Fifteen

    I'm so sorry that Nathan finds himself in this situation. I'm flat rhey got the crystals. I had quietly hoped that ma6be the tentacles could offset the gobling bite. I'm holding out for a hero. Maybe a specialist wizard doctor.
  13. Llandudno, WC, South Africa
  14. Doha

    Chapter Fourteen

    Like those who have already commented, Rabiah is not to be trusted. She is definitely interested in keeping Theodrik as a kind of tool/servant/weapon. Our guys are going to have to be very careful. I'm still hopeful for a cure. Perhaps one of these fractal dimensions will hold the solution.
  15. Doha

    Chapter Thirteen

    This was a very exciting chapter. I hope that between the daemon and Rabiah they can save Nathan.
  16. Doha

    Chapter Thirteen

    I do wonder how they could have made reservations at the hotel in a land of horses and no phones? 🤔
  17. Doha

    Chapter Twelve

    Indeed, they do have consequences. I've certainly seen that in my own life. I'm sorry for Nathan and Brohm, but hopeful that solution will be found. Nathan MUST tell Brohm. He must!
  18. Doha

    Chapter Twelve

    Yes. I'm also hoping for a miracle. Morgana maybe, or the healer they are going to visit.
  19. Scarborough, WC, South Africa
  20. Durban, KZN, South Africa
  21. Doha

    Twenty-Seven

    A fascinating chapter with networks appearing that are smaller and more close-knit rhan one would imagine. I wonder how Jonty will turn out. I'm glad Thomas is moving in.
  22. Hennenman, FS, South Africa
  23. Kingston Town, Jamaica
  24. Doha

    Twenty-Six

    Another super chapter. Tying up loose ends can be a messy business but it's best to get it done. Thomas is a very good foil for Keith. This works so well.
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