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Great to see some HP fanfic here and an intriguing first chapter.
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Rita is definitely going out of her way to include Rick in all of her events and to make everyone think they are an item. I'm wondering if this is all part of her plan to get the townsfolk on her side rather than because she actually fancies him.
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It was too tempting not to do.
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Some of them are starting to get it. The riders from the past have a lot to learn about the modern age as well. All of them will eventually need to adapt. F'drun is a loose cannon who will never learn.
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Threadfall morning again. D’gar hadn’t slept well. His brain had refused to switch off and he’d spent most of the hours of darkness thinking through the various tactics that might be suitable for today’s Fall, depending on weather conditions. When the grey light of dawn started to filter under the curtain, it was a relief to know that the night was finally over. His stomach was no worse than usual, thankfully. He’d have liked to just get a cup of klah served in his weyr, but R’feem had alway
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Glad that Rick was so insistent to Rita about her outstanding bill, but I guess the lunch meeting will give her some time to talk him round as to why she can’t pay it right away. I wonder if Helene is one of those people who is totally possessive about her partner. Maybe Gus was trying to escape from her when their disagreement occurred.
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The Gather passed without any more incidents and was crowded enough that D’gar managed to avoid bumping into H’sal, or anyone else he’d rather not see. Afterwards, though, he was reminded that although Fort Weyr was home, it also held a lot of unhappy memories. The first day he’d arrived at Benden, it had felt like a fresh start, in a place uncontaminated by the past. That was still true; perhaps more so now that he had H’rek as a weyrmate. He visited J’rud again the next day. The healers ha
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Great ending. I've often thought that if I could go back in time and tell myself of a year ago what was going to happen in 2020, it would sound like a sci-fi nightmare. Looking forward to reading more about Kevin and Steve.
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Don’t worry too much about H’sal. He’s staying at Fort Weyr.
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Yes, they can help each other see the different points of view. Plus they’re both young enough to change.
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Over the next sevenday, he managed to visit H’rek twice more in between fighting the usual Falls over Benden’s area of responsibility. Each time, he noticed the progress underway to make Southern more of an established Weyr rather than a temporary camp. To his northern eyes, it still seemed odd calling anywhere a Weyr if it wasn’t situated within a rocky bowl, but everyone there seemed to have accepted it. Thanks to F’lar’s Threadfall charts and the records he’d perused to make them, they no
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Rita is definitely up to something. She’s got away with it in the past and is assuming she can pull the same tricks again. Hopefully, Rick will see through her schemes.
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I’m getting worried about Beryl, but glad that Kevin and Steve are now together.
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F’drun got knocked back after the failed mating flight with Prideth and Ryth's injury, but now he’s finding new ways to gain influence. T'bor not being a very strong Weyrleader is good for him in Southern.
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‘Mark my words, there’s going to be trouble.’ R’feem refilled the cups with fresh klah. D’gar and B’lin were both in his weyr for a meeting. ‘No-one’s pleased about that mess-up in Southern, least of all the Weyrleader.’ B’lin picked up his cup. ’So what are they going to do? Abandon the place again?’ ‘That’d be the most sensible course, but then Prideth would have to come back here and I’m told that both Ramoth and Lessa are very much against sharing their Hatching Sands with that one.’
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Perfect Halloween fare to give me nightmares.
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Really interesting opening chapter.
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Very perceptive comments.
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Find out in the next chapter!
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‘It was the dragons who warned us. I mean, there were a couple of folk on duty watching the north-eastern approaches, but the dragons got restless before anyone even saw anything.’ H’rek still sat on the firestone sacks next to D’gar. B’lin and F’nor had just joined them. D’gar had no doubt that F’nor would report everything back to the Weyrleader. Tell Rioth to tell H’rek not to drop anyone in it. We aren’t alone now. Will do. Herebeth blew water from his nostrils as if in acknowledgem
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Mauder on the Dance Floor
Mawgrim commented on Wombat Bill's story chapter in Mauder on the Dance Floor
Really glad Kevin owned up about Maude. Yes, he's definitely learned water and electricity don’t mix. Seems like everyone in the household are becoming more honest with each other. -
Great card.
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Heinrich senior is ostensibly retired but just doesn’t want to let go - either of the business or of Rick’s life. I can get why Rick doesn’t want to stir things up with his dad, but sooner or later he will have to make a stand or never get out and live his own life.
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Suderoth’s clutch of twenty-three eggs raised everyone’s spirits, coming almost two sevendays after Valli and Kadoth had gone between. One of the eggs had the unmistakeable golden sheen that meant there was a young queen dragon inside. ‘And thank goodness for that.’ Agarra carried on chopping root vegetables, the knife flashing as she worked. Sitting in the kitchen took D’gar back to his younger days. Life had been so much simpler then. ‘That should shut them all up.’ After Valli had gon
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