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We've seen what this team can do working together to build their compound, which reminds me of a medieval castle or walled city, just with wood and solar panels instead of stone. Now we see the whole group work together to assault rather than just defend. Great chapter, very gripping.
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Featured Story: The Jerk-Off by JLynch
CincyKris commented on wildone's blog entry in Gay Authors News
To @centexhairysub and @Headstall and anyone else who decides to give this a try, this story is all about the quirky characters. My favorites so far are Thayer, who is a really cute, nice teen that doesn't understand just how desirable he is to almost everyone who meets him, and "Inspector" Shamus, an intelligent detective who writes gay fiction novels on the side. But you will probably have your own favorites amongst the wide array of inventively named oddballs. -
Featured Story: The Jerk-Off by JLynch
CincyKris commented on wildone's blog entry in Gay Authors News
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South-West France, sonatas & sex advice
CincyKris commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in South-West France, sonatas & sex advice
Great "slice of life" chapter. I think the last line is good advice for almost any touchy personal topic: “It’s out there, let’s not pretend otherwise, but it doesn't define me.” -
I agree fully with everything @Summerabbacat has said. Keith is a selfish, free loading brat. If he actually cared about his mother and brother he would have stopped his childish behavior years ago. Jim and Cammie let it go and now we have the big baby that is Keith. I like what Jim and Jon are doing now and truly do not care whether Keith gets past this or not. You created a completely unsympathetic character.
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@drsawzall said it best! I loved this little story of a young man finding the happy inside himself!
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Maybe buying and moving in to the house will give Aaron more “realness” to the idea that he and Tony are back together forever.
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I'm all caught up! I love the direction that the distraction (Tak) is taking this story! Sev is pretty far into his own head right now and he really needed a confidante/listener to unload some of that internal chaos.
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I can see this as Tony's cause celebre, because with those movie deals he will be a full-fledged celebrity. He can truly accomplish some good, with his friends' help.
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Matt gets an offer & Kjell is annoyed
CincyKris commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Matt gets an offer & Kjell is annoyed
I wonder if Kjell experienced something or someone in his past that is influencing his current thinking? Or he's just a closed minded jerk. At least Bella seems much more reasonable, maybe she can talk some sense into him. Peter was wonderful at mediating the incident. I was a little surprised at Gray's internal response to Vince's news about Peter, but not surprised at his ruminations. Gray is very self aware, befitting a poet. Great news for Matt, he will be able to take a breath! -
There are heavy chapters and then there's this chapter! Wow, poor Henry has lived an extremely sheltered lonely life. I think the old Henry died in the cold, I think the new Henry will have more love in his life. Through the bleakness there is hope on several fronts. Theo, Walter, Henry, Teyshawn are all looking at massive change in their lives.
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I wonder if Jim's brain might actually explode? Jon has the patience of a saint. Alex will be gutted at this news, I hope Jim can pull it together for his sake. As for Keith, my opinion of him is so low that I really don't care about his well-being, other than the effect his douchery has on his family.
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I think it's Val and Marina that need the dildos! I doubt they have any more time for each other than they have for their sons.
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This chapter was so heavy, so filled with suspense. Poor Henry is a lamb amongst the lions, he will be lucky to get away just getting robbed and bruised. Teyshawn and Devon are running for their lives. At least Damir didn't succeed, and he's starting to crack.
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I hate his dad Soooo much right now! I hate his mom for supporting his dad. How can she even sleep at night?! I hope Luca can figure out a way to help Jamie get through this.
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Alex has so much support from his family. When he gets over his hurt, he will show the car company that mighty things come in small packages!
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Whispers and Wanderlust
CincyKris commented on E K Stokes's story chapter in Whispers and Wanderlust
The Crusades and the reign of the Stuart's were separated by several hundred years. Is this an alternate reality story? -
Liam is showing us he still lacks confidence in himself. He is remarkable, but can't accept that as a fact. Everyone that really knows him likes him. How can you not?
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I guess 2 out of 3 ain't bad, to quote Meatloaf! No sympathy from me for the selfish, idiotic Deirdre. She could have chosen her son over Jasper when he started verbally attacking Toby. I will admit she is not a monster or a complete disaster, she does love her son. I don't think she is naturally a mom-type person. I am happy that Jasper is out of the picture, glad that Toby is a happy kid, and glad that Deirdre will be a permanent long-distance parent.
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I did not like that Jim chose the automatic "lying his way out of it" as his first response to Alex dropping the bomb. I'm trying hard to like James and see in him what Jon sees. But he has a very long way to go for me. We'll see if he can redeem himself from the lying, indecisive, over thinking guy to someone his son can actually look up to.
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I have to admit, I'm really confused. Alex had one session with Jon. I looked back at previous chapters to make sure I wasn't wrong. This is Alex's second lesson: He’s a bit disappointed that Jon isn’t there, but the stand-in instructor is just as good. They went hiking the following every other week session. So why has Jim invented some deep relationship between Jon and his sixteen year old son, after they have spent a total of one boxing session together?
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I admire Walter's mom for disregarding her husband's wishes to stay by his side. She probably saved his life. I have faith that the taskforce will figure this out. The elder Walter is sloppy and there are a lot of smart people trying to catch the Wolf. I have a feeling that his wife and/or his "spare heir" will be the source of his undoing.
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I'm hopeful that the bikers are just supportive, I doubt predators would have allowed Daniel to attend the meeting in the first place. Daniel's lack of reaction to Joshua now makes more sense. I can't wait for the reunion!
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Deirdre’s idiot boyfriend
CincyKris commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Deirdre’s idiot boyfriend
My gut is telling me that Deirdre knew all about the smuggling, but rationalized it was ok since it was only handbags. I don't think she is smart enough to link smuggling handbags with an organized criminal organization and what else might be smuggled. Maybe she guessed at it but put her head in the sand because it was convenient? I appreciate that you are, yet again, showing us the effect of bad press and gossip on the unintended victims, the family of the culprits. While my opinion of Jasper is unchanged (he has always been detestable), Deirdre started out bad, slowly rose, now she is back in the toilet! -
To the Range! - Part 3
CincyKris commented on Late to the party's story chapter in To the Range! - Part 3
Alex keeps showing what a great dad he is, through his actions.
