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    Chapter 7

    CincyKris commented on Palantir's story chapter in Chapter 7

    Things might start heating up, literally! This was a very exciting chapter, so fast paced. It looks like we get a head to head matchup with the Usurper next chapter!
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    Chapter 3

    CincyKris commented on Mark Ponyboy Peters's story chapter in Chapter 3

    If Chandar actually has this magical sword, he will hopefully lend it to Luther. Was that a normal bird or a special bird?
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    Maybe Marcus should have his parents contact James' parents for a conversation about unconditional love. I'm a little confused on timing. The confrontation happened in March, but then after that James' parents wanted him home for Thanksgiving, which is in October in Canada.
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    I love seeing Slav's and Rory's relationship grow like this. I bet his sister would be impressed and comforted by him living with an "adopted" family, and will probably not be very surprised at his coming out.
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    Chapter 2

    CincyKris commented on Mark Ponyboy Peters's story chapter in Chapter 2

    We are meeting new characters who will hopefully be included in the opposition to Septimus. I hope Willem keeps any bad news to himself, Septimus seems the type that would kill the messenger!
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    Prologue

    CincyKris commented on Mark Ponyboy Peters's story chapter in Prologue

    I am very much looking forward to this fantasy!
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    Chapter 6

    CincyKris commented on Palantir's story chapter in Chapter 6

    The trip through the portal will be exciting! I think that Kieran's best feature is his insatiable quest for knowledge.
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    I look forward to their response when Gavin and Jason have that conversation with Grandma and Grandpa. The whole extended family will be so pleased.
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    Marcus is settling in to his new life, but his past is lurking in the background. Hopefully his new friends will have his back when he needs them.
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    I will listen later but that looks like it will make me cry! Thank you for writing it.
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    Wouldn't it be wonderful if Aunt Daphne and Uncle Graham get caught up in the legal wranglings that will undoubtedly occur in the aftermath of Thomas/Frank getting arrested! Graham might lose his dodgy clients and Daphne will get kicked off her charity boards.
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    Chapter 5

    CincyKris commented on Palantir's story chapter in Chapter 5

    This mirror realm seems to be an ocean world, but structured similarly to our Realm. This Usurper sounds like a real bitch! That she uses and abuses animals is a sure sign of evil. Hopefully their new ally will be helpful in deposing the Usurper. I wonder if Ranevargar knows there are other realms?
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    This murder mystery is tension-filled and gripping, but written in the personable and heartfelt style of our author. Full of love, humour, and life, you won't regret reading it.
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    Chapter 4.

    CincyKris commented on Palantir's story chapter in Chapter 4.

    So someone is stealing animals from earth and controlling them, I wonder why? Without competition they have evolved to grow much larger. This implies the animals have been in this alien world for a very long time. Did our group get taken by accident because they were with the pod? Bet that's going to come back and bite the thief in the butt!
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    Chapter 3

    CincyKris commented on Palantir's story chapter in Chapter 3

    The boys were fortunate to have the time to do all their experiments. I think they will come in handy during their trip to the island. I hope Nathan gets to go to the realm, Ranevargar will enjoy meeting him!
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    Chapter 2

    CincyKris commented on Palantir's story chapter in Chapter 2

    I finished this at work a few days ago and forgot to come back and leave a comment. I love how well Nathan is being incorporated into the group. Even though he has loving parents, he's been missing the inclusion from peers. I wonder who sent them to this world. I have no doubt they will figure out how to get to the realm, then back home, but they're learning a lot about their powers on this adventure.
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    Chapter 1

    CincyKris commented on Palantir's story chapter in Chapter 1

    I missed this in a deluge of notifications, but was so excited to see this! It's fantastic to get acquainted with our old friends, again.
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    Hopefully the next time Thomas Englert barges in, Eileen will be visiting. That'll put him right!
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    Chapter 33

    CincyKris commented on Mark Ponyboy Peters's story chapter in Chapter 33

    I wonder if Trinity de la Creme will be appearing with the Twisted Sisters? From Traditions: Pippa had discovered that our cousin, Patrick – a.k.a. Trinity de la Crème – would be performing at the Imperial Hotel
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    This is a great thriller that will keep you guessing throughout. Complex, but not convoluted storyline and amazing characters.
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    JQ-060109

    CincyKris commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in JQ-060109

    I think you captured Caleb's anger very well. He is, perhaps literally, a ticking time bomb. He is obviously aware of everything going on with Josh. It doesn't appear that Josh was aware before the crash. In a way, he was born that night. Caleb has to feel resentment that he did all the work for 17 years and has lost both his parents and his identity. For now he is protecting Josh, is he just waiting to take his life back and get revenge? Against Cerberus? Thanks for not making Walter the bad guy!
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    This was a fun chapter for all! So good to see Rory and Slav so happy.
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    Wow, it seems that Adam sometimes knows that Jamie is only in his head, but other times he truly thinks he is still alive. Sometimes, on my walks through campus or along the waterfront, he would be beside me, even when he had an exam coming up, or a deadline he had to meet. He never brought up seeing someone else again. No one ever mentioned Jamie’s name, not in texts from home or calls from family. They always asked how I was doing, how my exams were going, how life was holding up. But they never asked about Jamie. I asked Jamie, and he never answered my question. Instead he said that I should just focus on the things that I can control, and not worry about other things.
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    Access Granted

    CincyKris commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in Access Granted

    I have no doubt that Cerberus will be watching Caleb/Josh all the time, everywhere. But, for now, Josh can move forward with his new family. I hope Caleb can find comfort with them, also.
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    Encrypted

    CincyKris commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in Encrypted

    Josh remembered a lot more than I thought he would. The fact that his "father" used a trigger word to immediately erase his short and long term memory, leaving his working memory intact, proves that Josh is a designed project. His AI has suddenly left him alone, even during the simulation. I find this very interesting! I still wonder at whether the impetus of the Chimera shutdown was to stop a bad guy or to stop Chimera. If Josh remembers the pass phrase, should he hand it over? Walter, we need to hear from Walter! And how the hell is the douche from the school connected, and according to Josh's AI, helpful?
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