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    Chapter 49

    CincyKris commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 49

    They might want to skip the "country rustic" restaurants that have antlered buck heads on the walls!
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    I have just finished this story from the beginning in a couple days. Great job! I'm looking forward to more.
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    Mitch's stubborn need to be noble is hurting everyone, including us! I really hope he gets better news from this doctor than the last one.
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    Chapter 48

    CincyKris commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 48

    Great chapter! You made me want to like running. You would have to be a mage to actually make me like running!
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    Monday

    CincyKris commented on northie's story chapter in Monday

    Tyler is in a vicious circle of poverty and emotional neglect. He is acting out to get attention, hopefully it will end in at least one person (Eric, Emily, Andy?) taking a big chance on getting to know him. His mom has given up, his dad is not involved and wouldn't care anyway. I feel so bad for Eric and his beloved flowers.
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    Chapter 60

    CincyKris commented on Cia's story chapter in Chapter 60

    I hope that the yellow-eyed beast gets along with Bouncer. We know that Bouncer will protect Essell with his life, if necessary. I wonder if the rebels have a plan, or do they just have an end goal? Garjah strikes me as a very good planner. Essell not so much. But he's really good at surviving.
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    Chapter 46

    CincyKris commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 46

    I don't know if you intended it, but the other alphas remind me of heads of state. The negotiations and political jockeying are reminiscent of "allied" countries that don't fully trust or like each other (with Donovan's Milwaukee) or mainly friendly (with Ken), with Interpol keeping an eye on things. The big difference is these dudes turn into wolves and can rip each other's throats out.
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    I think my fellow readers have summed up all my feelings so I'll just leave you some emojis. 🐟🍴🙏😣😠😢😘😍💔😢😵
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    Wow, those were 3 life changing days! It seems like he released so much pent-up anger and guilt that he was able to move on finally. New beginnings have a way of consuming us to the point that we forget how important those old grudges seemed to be. This chapter felt like a rebirth for Mitch. I look forward to their after dinner conversation.
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    Reactions

    CincyKris commented on northie's story chapter in Reactions

    It's hard for me to understand, even harder to sympathize, people who are hateful to anyone who doesn't believe and look like them. I suppose there are a few who hate out of ignorance or one bad personal experience, but most of the haters seem to honestly feel that they have a god-given right to decide how everyone should look, act, and believe. The internet has had a dramatic effect on our availability to information. People can have a community online, which can be a life-line to the disaffected, or a pulpit for haters. I think that Eric is strong enough now to survive his 15 minutes of fame.
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    I have a machete used exactly the same amount of time!
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    I was just getting ready to mow the back 40 (actually only 2.5 acres) with my zero turn (thankfully not a scythe!), but I sat down and read this chapter first. You'll have to try harder next week!
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    Thank you for a big dose of happiness to brighten my day off! I think that the two older stubborn men will eventually have a long overdue talk. But the best part of this story is the relationship between Coy and Boone.
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    Him

    CincyKris commented on James Matthews's story chapter in Him

    The son of an intelligence officer dropping out of school sounds highly unlikely to me. I'm confused, how is a 17 year old drop-out in the army? And at his father's base? This is not how the current U.S. military works.
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    Should Cody feel guilty? Hell yes! He was unnecessarily cruel. Is he responsible for the attempted suicide, no. Are Jake's parents responsible, of course not. Could they all have done a better job of communicating and support, absolutely! The problem with 16 year olds is that they are so hormonal and self absorbed that they see everything as the best thing ever or the end of the world. As their brains and bodies develop and they have more life experiences, they even out and adapt to change. I would not live through that age again for anything!
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    I think we all agree that Will and Mitch need to take that long walk together and talk it out. I'm hoping the repeated mention of the neighboring property is actually foreshadowing!
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    Mating Flights

    CincyKris commented on Mawgrim's story chapter in Mating Flights

    I'm sorry to hear that the end is near, both because of the pain of losing S'brin and the pain of losing this saga. I know we got closure on D'gar's story, but a book on his experiences as weyrlingmaster would be much appreciated!
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    If Corbin gives in to Leah, as he seemed ready to do before she stole his phone, then he has lost any sympathy I had for him. I feel sorry for Troy (and Jerry) for getting mixed up with this screwed up family.
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    Finally! Corbin has been wanting to do that for years! Now, a difficult conversation with Leah. I don't think she'll take it well.
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    I'm trying to feel sympathy for Corbin's mom. She has finally admitted that Don is a violent abusive asshole and wants to divorce him. But she still wants her sweet daughter to have a relationship with a violent abusive asshole? Don tried to murder her son! Why wouldn't she want him locked up?! Mom seriously needs some psychological help.
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    Please don't let Mitch leave before Will talks to him. Both men have been in love and alone for so long, and that is way worse than just alone!
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    I feel so sad for Corbin. I couldn't hate his father more than I do for causing Corbin to feel like he is at fault. Can you please cause a storm that capsizes his new boat?! With him in it of course! Too bad that fat floats! Please let Troy and Jerry intervene, because it's obvious that his mother and Leah will do nothing. Zoe would do anything for him, but she is only 14. Corbin and Zoe deserve so much more than they are getting out of life.
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    Chapter 42

    CincyKris commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 42

    Their attitude reminds me of European explorers from hundreds of years ago. Indigenous peoples were viewed as less than, therefore expendable. Wild prey shifters were seen by Eike as lesser beings and he got some creepy thrill out of killing other shifters. He's a serial killer.
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    Chapter 55

    CincyKris commented on Cia's story chapter in Chapter 55

    I'm not too surprised that the Kardoval are not very trusting, any technologically advanced race that has managed to remain secret from the rest of the known universe has got to have some paranoia and trust issues. I think Sonez is looking for his plaything. I hope he finds a cerops instead.
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    Clueless Corbin alone on a boat with besotted Troy. Sounds like a story written by Zoe!
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