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Chapter 2 Life and Death
CincyKris commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 2 Life and Death
I'm excited to hear the back story of Mitch and Will. Sorry to find out it is probably lung cancer, that was my guess as well. Mitch acted as a matchmaker for Boone and Coy, now it's time to return the favor. Mitch deserves to be happy for the time he has left.- 60 comments
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Poor Jack. Poor Dean. I feel for both of them. They think more of their families than they do of themselves. Joey has become their confessor. He must feel like he's got the weight of the world on his shoulders. Does he protect his friends by betraying their confidences? What happens if the next time is the one that kills them?
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I'm hoping that Greg will convince the bosses to make Craig redundant, Craig will get his going away check, Greg will be made supervisor, and the whole division will go pear-shaped. Tits-up. Total crap-fest. Regardless, I think Craig is getting closer and closer to pulling the plug on his old career and starting his new life in the country. And I still don't like Archie.
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The last line indicates that Dean had a bad experience when he was 14. Up to now, I'm not a fan of him or Maddie. I agree that Jack's dad needs some jail time.
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Perhaps if M'rell had paid more attention to wingsecond training, some of their future animosity could have been avoided.
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Chapter 25: Eerie Employment
CincyKris commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 25: Eerie Employment
Great chapter, we got to check up on a bunch of characters. Looking forward to the mage dance (and the mating dance).- 37 comments
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I'm with some of the above commenters. I think there is a big difference between building the tension and frustrating inaction. I'm about ready to give up as well.
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I don't honestly know whether Puppy and Hunter will end up together. And I love that! A story that actually leaves me guessing! With all the changes and trauma that Puppy has been through, it's easy to forget that Steven has been through trauma as well. He is 17 and hormonal and he is closer to Puppy than he is to anyone else. I hope he sorts his feelings out in a more appropriate way.
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Wow, that was quite a homecoming! I hope Bouncer leaves the rest of the house in one piece because there will be no supervision for a while!
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I googled the Bond movie, it came out in 1999. Is this story set 22 years ago?
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Well, I guess I was wrong with my prediction that they are twins!
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I agree, I think his dad kicked him out for being gay. I hope Jason is not too badly injured.
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I am tempted to go back and look at the tags, but I won't, I am predicting they are twins. Jason is adopted. I will not read ahead, so I guess I'll find out eventually.
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A four-year degree earned 30 years ago certainly does not make me an expert, but I would give Josh a less than even chance of refusing Kai in the near future. When Josh stops loving and hating, forgives himself, and starts feeling indifferent towards Kai, he stands a chance.
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Right after graduating with a degree in psychology I worked with victims of domestic violence. So many blamed themselves and excused the abusive behavior because blaming the abuser meant ending it and being alone. A very scary prospect considering the abuser always made the victim dependent on him (or her). The dependence was financial, physical, social, and/or emotional. We don't know yet how Josh broke away, but surviving this ordeal is an achievement.
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I can't help but wonder if Hunter's aggression towards Puppy was a defense mechanism. He was carrying so much guilt and self hatred that he lashed out at Puppy, trying to either drive him away or fight back, because he thought he didn't deserve love. On a side note, I'm hoping that Cindy's viewpoint will convince her new father into making changes to the kid prison.
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I couldn't agree more! I was hooked by the first paragraph, concerned for Daisy. I'm so happy to have my Monday obsession back! Can't wait for more Boone, Coy, Daisy, Blue, Duke, and now Mitch and the new colt. Thank you!
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You have us on an emotional roller coaster! Last chapter I felt a little sorry for Hunter, but mostly I was angry at him and wanted Puppy to stay as far away as he could. Now I feel sympathetic towards Hunter, Taylor, and Puppy. But not towards Cassie! What kind of best friend lets someone they care about go down a destructive path and just enables and eggs him on because trying to help would not be cool. She cares more about being the "edgy angsty teen". Please don't make me feel sympathetic towards her in the next chapter.
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I so hope Puppy ends it with Hunter. Maybe Hunter will pull himself out of the self destructive and dangerous lifestyle he's been living, but probably not anytime soon. If Puppy stays with him, he will be dragged down also.
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Craig needs a lot more of these types of weekends to get used to the "new normal". What's up with Archie? He seems the jealous type. Did he and James have a fling? I enjoyed the pub scene. I like the idea of Craig making himself at home with the locals.
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So, Michael is the author of the screenplay. Have we met Hunter yet? Michael and Patrick come from opposite sides of society but are in similar positions. How much fun would it be if this was the same P.I.? Hating Ford. Can't wait for his viewpoint!
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Always Stuff to be Learned
CincyKris commented on James Matthews's story chapter in Always Stuff to be Learned
I have to agree with the others, it feels like there was some intentional drugging for behavior control. I hope this is not an extremely accurate representation of private group homes in England. I know that Americans (and probably any large overpopulated country) have issues with the foster system, but most kids in group homes would go to public school and have access to popular culture. I would assume this is the same for state run homes in England. I'm loving this gripping story! -
The dinner from hell is finally over! Time for dessert!
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Just had a thought reading Danners' comment -- could Ford be the author?
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I realize we are still collecting clues this early in the story, rather than discovering answers, but you keeping us on our toes! I have so many pieces of the puzzle floating around in my head already and now I have the surreal dream. Looking forward to reading more of the script and hearing from the P.I.
