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    I'm finding it difficult to feel sympathy for Joey. His insecurities and lack of trust are destroying his relationships with Jack, as well as with Olly and Roman. Jack had put up with it longer than I would have. He deserves better. If Joey doesn't bother to put in some effort to try and get himself some help, I hope Jack moves on and finds someone better for him.
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    Recuperation

    CincyKris commented on Mawgrim's story chapter in Recuperation

    We know that Herebeth has many successful years of fighting thread ahead of him, but neither D'gar or Herebeth knows that. Must be tough to be sidelined for so long when the rest of your wing is active.
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    Perfect candidate for a sequel!
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    At least Joey will finally make more than 85 a week! I hope Olly doesn't cause problems with Joey and Jack. I feel bad for Roman, I've never had kidney stones, but a relative has and he was in agony.
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    Chapter 6

    CincyKris commented on James Matthews's story chapter in Chapter 6

    Adam is being lied to and his only "ally" is a user and rapist. He is trapped on the aliens' ship in the middle of space. Freaking out will do no good, I hope he can keep calm better than I could.
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    Chapter 5

    CincyKris commented on James Matthews's story chapter in Chapter 5

    Adam is a better person than me. I doubt I would have saved Sage from death, certainly not by possibly endangering my questionable position. He has a lot of crap to make up for before I will feel any sympathy for him.
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    Chapter 53

    CincyKris commented on Cia's story chapter in Chapter 53

    I realize that Essell is a biologist, not an historian, but I would have thought he would have studied up a little more while he was on the ship. When he wasn't busy with stuff. Priorities are important for newly mated couples.
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    If Joey could get out of his head long enough, he might feel more secure and less impulsive. We are all built differently and can't really help our gut reactions. I remember that as a teen everything seemed so much more extreme than now. Sometimes hormones suck.
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    Chapter 3 Willard

    CincyKris commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 3 Willard

    Maybe Coy will mention the new colt Willard to Merrick at the mill. You know, just small talk about horses. As an aside, the mention of the ladder back chair brought back a 30+ year old memory of an episode of Little House on the Prairie. It started and ended with a modern family buying a piece of furniture made by Charles, wondering if there was a story behind it. I have a few old, rustic hand-made chairs. I've wondered about the hands that made them. What were their stories? Chairs and tables similar to the ones made by Coy exist today, going from one family to another.
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    Chapter 4

    CincyKris commented on James Matthews's story chapter in Chapter 4

    Ok, lets bring a 110 people in your room and tell you that you are our savior. No pressure. I think that human nuances are going to be difficult for the Puritans to learn. I like the juxtaposition of same sex (and lots of sex) being the norm, and unmasked no sex being the hated minority. I'd like to know more about the effects of the 8 different sub-species mating.
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    Such a happy chapter! Joey is like an 8 year old before Christmas. Joey (and Jack) are so lucky they have Roman. If Shaun had a Roman, I don't think he would be dead. A support system, whether it's a great brother, or in Dean's case, crazy, embarrassing, loving parents, keep you from wallowing in self-indulgent misery.
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    Chapter 3

    CincyKris commented on James Matthews's story chapter in Chapter 3

    So many questions! I feel like Adam. All my questions will be answered in time. I wish I were more patient.
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    Great ending to a very satisfying story! I'm going to miss the guys!
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    I was afraid that Shaun would hurt himself or others, I guess we should be relieved that he didn't take out anyone else with his knife. I think if his mom had been more like Joey's or Dean's he might still be alive. I guess her bigotry went so deep, she only wanted her son if he was straight. She was so focused on one aspect she didn't like and didn't get him the help he so obviously needed.
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    Shrovetide

    CincyKris commented on Mawgrim's story chapter in Shrovetide

    I'm very sad we only have one chapter to go, but I'm so happy that Craig and James are going to get their HEA. My favorite line: He’d looked it up online and had a slightly clearer idea of the rules, which included no murder or unnecessary violence, no carrying the ball in a motorised vehicle and no playing after 10pm. Sounds like fun!
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    Also Okiegrad was right, Shaun is a psycho obsessed with Jack, not with Joey!
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    I agree with the above comments. Shaun has had a mental breakdown, more than a typical teenage hormonal outburst. If he doesn't get real psychological help, he is going to hurt himself and/or Joey and Jack. Who would have thought a couple chapters ago that Dean would be the stable one?
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    Chapter 2

    CincyKris commented on James Matthews's story chapter in Chapter 2

    The Puritans were a bit sloppy on the extrication. I don't have much sympathy for Sage or the 3 boys that were killed. I'm hoping Adam can be cured physically and mentally.
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    Chapter 1

    CincyKris commented on James Matthews's story chapter in Chapter 1

    Great start. I'm already hooked on poor Adam's story, as well as the aliens' story. Although, one has to wonder at the compassion of a species with the ability to cure a disease, but choose not to. I'm sure we'll get more of the backstory that may explain this conundrum.
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    Thank goodness for mom and Roman, they are the stabilizing influence in Joey's life right now. I believe that Shaun is after Joey, not Jack.
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    Thread Damaged

    CincyKris commented on Mawgrim's story chapter in Thread Damaged

    Great work keeping the suspense up, even though we all know how it will turn out eventually!
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    Ok, so Shaun is secretly in love with Joey and has possibly been so for years. He made some very immature decisions to try to break up Joey and Jack. Jack had a crush on Joey for at least a couple years, the feelings are now reciprocated, but he has experienced unimaginable trauma and is having periods of memory loss. Joey let his anger get a hold of him and attacked his former best friend, who I imagine is now at the lowest point of his young life. Dean is still dealing with his molestation and not doing well. This is teen soap opera at it's best. I'm loving this story!
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    The Deception

    CincyKris commented on James Matthews's story chapter in The Deception

    Good question! I hadn't thought about Shaun possibly being in love with Joey. He certainly isn't acting rationally, his lies were so easily found out.
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    I believe it was stated earlier that the uncle is now working on a cruise ship. Where they have lots of unattended teens.
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    Wow, this wasn't the way I thought Jack would break free of his dad! Jack is going to be devastated by the news his mom is dead. If Joey hadn't called the police, Jack would probably be dead too. On a happier note, I really liked Roman.
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