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Chapter 16 Roped and Tied
CincyKris commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 16 Roped and Tied
Beautiful ending! I loved the sexy and tender moments between the two. I can see them having many years together.- 98 comments
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The Man with Butterscotch Hair
CincyKris reviewed Cole Matthews's story in 2021 - Fall - A Winding Path
This is everything I want in a short story! We get a great little mystery with an unsettling undertone. Perfect the way it it is, but would be a good starting point for a full novel if the author wishes to pursue it.-
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This is a wonderfully fresh take on shifter stories. Our hero is a young deer shifter who is thrust into the human world he has rarely experienced since childhood. We get a character study, a romance, a fish-out-of-water comedy, as well as a really good shifter story.
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Great ending (for now?) to a fantastic story! I laughed at Cyn's experience at the airport, I just flew a couple weeks ago and saw a human with the same reactions! I can imagine our couple running through the wooded trails in their animal forms. I hope we check in on them again some time in the future. I appreciate the rich, unique character-driven story you created. Thank you!
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This is my favorite anthology entry! Loved the mystery, so many unanswered questions.
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Eric keeps adding new accomplishments to his scorecard. This was a big one! Timing is everything. A few months ago, Eric would not have been well equipped to meet with Rob. But now, the Pygmalion-like transformation is far enough along for Eric to manage a conversation. Hopefully a face-to-face meeting will follow.
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I wish I could see their faces when they see all those arms!!! Interesting that the Sonez didn't report him missing. Apparently a certain captain was hoping Essell would disappear.
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I'm just reading this story for the first time having just finished (so far) Damian's Wolf. I can understand Dylan's reticence towards other Nekos because of Damian's experiences with his own non-calico kind. I don't understand Margaret's attitude towards her own son. I wonder if she hates being a wolf as much as Jordan and is taking it out on him? I certainly wouldn't mind if she fell off a cliff, other than the effect it might have on Jason.
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I loved this joyous chapter! I enjoyed Coy's self-imposed suffering, it made the good news even better. I'm sad that we are close to the end, but am hoping that this little slice of paradise called Larkspur will be the setting for some future stories? I don't want to be greedy, I'll take any nuggets you decide to toss us whenever you want!
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Seeing Key get the better of a smug Eike was very satisfying! Good to see that Cyn and Sam are ok. I'm so jealous that a shift takes away their aches and pains!
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Always Regretting Yesterday
CincyKris commented on James Matthews's story chapter in Always Regretting Yesterday
I love the realistic aspects of this story. Obviously there is a lot more drama than would happen in real life, we do want to be entertained, after all. But we see what really happens with couples that get together when they are so young. A few stay together forever, but most do not. People mature a lot in their twenties, I know I'm not the same person now that I was in my early twenties. -
Chapter 14 Crossing the Bridge
CincyKris commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 14 Crossing the Bridge
I had a glitch! It wouldn't let me type. maybe I should've said that you left me speechless! I loved the chapter! I could smell the sage, spruce, and fresh cut wood. I can't wait till next week when get to experience the boys' joy caused by Mitch's great news.- 70 comments
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Chapter 14 Crossing the Bridge
CincyKris commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 14 Crossing the Bridge
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That was one brave bunny rabbit!
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Next week will be pivotal, both for Essell and for the four-arms species. Hopefully the Sonez crew doesn't try to take them prisoner, I don't think that would go well.
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Reno 911. A very funny parody of Cops.
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Love me some Lt. Dangle!
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Chapter 13 The Ride Home
CincyKris commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 13 The Ride Home
I just got home from vacation and the first thing I did was read this chapter. Best welcome home ever!- 66 comments
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Eike is probably assuming the deer and rabbit will get spooked and run off-trail. I hope not!
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I wonder what Vegas is like in Halloweenland?
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Now we're really getting somewhere! A whole town of witches! No wonder they're trying to keep this on the down low.
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It feels as if we are approaching a convergence, not just of Eric and Rob, but of good fortune for Eric. So which disadvantaged youth is Rob's next project, hmmm? Small world.
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I love the idea of "spirits of place"! I like to hike in the woods and I definitely get the feeling that some spots are a little more special than others. The Kinniston phantom seems like a fun spirit. I think it will get along well with the elves.
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I'd love to be a fly on the wall in Horace's house for that party!
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