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I called it last time Sir..ππ...I knew the detective in Blake would be the one to know about Steve,Kenny and Lydia's business..Mystery authors are smart nuts..ππ
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At last...I called it..knew Davin had some sort of unrequited love thing with Colt .. These two lads have been headed towards that kiss ...it was coming ...and am all for itππ...at least we have a beginning of the JoDa shipπ
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Why am I not surprised?..bird of the feather flock together and all ...both you have really wild wild thoughtsππ
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I understood that sometimes back @Cane23...about their personalities like you have clearly stated them. I mean...what was referring to was some of the busy bodies and holier- than-thous who think they have the moral mandate...you know that kind exist everywhere in our society.
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Good to have you back on these streets Sir...it's been a little bleak on GA without youππ That being said...you have encapsulated all our differing opinions in your comment...
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Jesus!...this chapter was such an intense one .eh. Basically we are now somewhat dealing with the metaphysical ....That is even more scary than plain boring murder mysteries...I can't help but feel pity for Judy and Killian...having those gifts is a poisoned chalice.
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They donβt need rainbow flags or Pride marches to validate their bond. Oh dear...if they dare to raise those in Willow Creek, am quite sure the Head of State in this universe would declare a state of emergency in that town...some folks would certainly have terminal conniptions .πππ
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Explains why...for a moment I thought you had gone and sent me on a mental topsy turvy Sirππ
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Oh God...this boy cannot survive that @CasualWanderer82πππ.... Mi mum will send the therapy bill to you Sirπ
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You knowπ....kenny nearly committed murderπ
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I guess it takes one to know one ..I mean when it comes competence .... To think she is only 15....and bossing around folks who are older ...that lass is scary as hellπ
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Are there degrees to putty? ..Because I would wager Kenny was gone but for Brian's interruption ππ
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I would imagine that after what happened with the sheriff and his acolytes that Willow Creek is somewhat progressing . I like to believe they can survive .Let us wait and see what happens ...right?
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I am going to sound a bit naive and maybe judgemental...but I have never really understood the fixation gay folks have with the club culture... I couldn't help getting frustrated in this chapter..Like I found myself wondering like RΓ²kus what exactly does Thomas want?..when he is introduced he wants to relate with someone ..he meets RΓ²kus but still wants to hit the clubs and hook up ..Someone make me understandπ
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You really are not happy .π.I would advise you to read this chapter like twice or more. You will realize that there is actually attraction between Blake and Cash...I will specially point you to that scene in the bathroom when the two of them are showering and then kiss.. That kiss was an acceptance of each other .They were both turned on...Underneath it all Cash and Blake are somewhat alike ...men who are burdened by trauma and anger. It is why they are able to finally connect.....Not to mention with the way the chapter ends ...Blake will definitely be popping Cash's cherry...if that is not a clear testament of their relationship dynamics then I do not know what else can convince you. As Ms.Daisy...that woman is insightful ...She subtly blessed that union by having Jackson take Cash with him to look for Blake..She knows that her son loves both men..to quote 'completely on each own...Not half '...So she tells him to be honest in his feelings and let them both know....It's in Chapter 16.. As I finish, I know some folks are not on board with the throuple deal but I believe @CasualWanderer82 would not have gone that route just for the sake of it....At its core this is a love story, it maybe unconventional sure but it's beautifully chaotic. It is meant to teach us that sometimes ,convention and logic get in the way of us truly living. Do not forget too that it's just a story at the end of the day @Jjeffalch.. It is entertaining and teaching us ..Whatever lessons or opinions we get at the end of the day are on us..That is whole point of it all ..to enjoy and to learn something .
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Bloody hell..that is old...Uganda got independence from Britain in 1963...damn...We really do not have those international franchises here ..I think KFC is just starting to penetrate here ..but stuff like Tim Hortons, Starbucks...those we don't have!
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You father must have been equal parts livid and worried...it reminds me of something that have always felt bad about ..When I was in Primary School(1999)..I was in Boarding ..and I remember there was this older boy he was two years ahead of me...Now that boy would always get the Matron's daughter(She was 5-6yo then) and then he would fondle her on my bed...I was on the bottom bunker..what pains to this day is that even at that age I felt it wrong and disgusting and I raised the issue with his older classmates but no one would take it serious ....the mother saw nothing untoward in having a teenager fondle a young girl ..I do not know what happened to that lad or the girl for that matter ..but it made me a bit wary...If I see an adult acting shady around a child...my 'hackles' rise.
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Blimey!...are not you just the epitome of enlightedness πππ
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This chapter reinforces a point for me....sometimes there is no reasoning with stupid...Bruizer is just stupid...like how on earth did he think FM Carter would be alone?π Whoever Father is ,he just crossed the Rubicon by going after Andrew's family. It reminds me of a scene from John Wick for those who watched when Winston and John Wick are discussing what happens next after the latter kills Santino D'Atonio, a member of the High Table, on Continental grounds this deconsecrating ..John Wick only says Consequences...Looks like Father and his acolytes will soon have to face the music for their actions...Make me wish Enrico was in this seriesππ
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Tim Hortons is a Canadian franchise?
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And my is it a good one for thanks to you...π... Quick personal one for you Sir.....were you aware of yourself like Tommy and possibly Jacob ...are at that age? Myself ..it was at 14..
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Love and lust are beyond logic @Okiegrad....if it helps look at this way ..Jackson ,our hero, would be unhappy if he did not have both of them ..Like they both complete him. That is why he cannot choose...because if does choose..he loses something. Am like you too.. it's not my cup of tea(the throuple deal) but I recognise that Jackson loves these two men completely even though they are both different . I like to believe that your 'skeptcism' is because this is the first time @CasualWanderer82 has written a throuple ...It takes getting used to...I also was not onboard ..but I realized in Chapter 16...that it was headed there because Jackson would be incomplete and miserable if he didn't have both Cash and Blake .
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Damn!..that was the best piece of erotica ever had the fortune of reading ..and it's not even overπ... Looks like Cash will be taking the plunge ...someone's π is getting popped big timeππ Thank you @CasualWanderer82...Now I can head off into slumberland ...π
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Damn...that's one hell of a routine.. which is why I feel you are actually a bit of both Kenny and Steve...Kenny is all about order and routine...which from what you have just shared above is orderly
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I would give @LeeSA a little leeway when it comes to his reaction to Brad @Cane23ππ...Brad does not exactly do himself any favours with his juvenile antics.. That being said..I agree with you with Brad's 'kindness' there. I like to believe that Brad lied on Lyn's behalf because in his mind he has got one over that 'pompous' Alexander and will have Lyn all to 'himself'. So in a way it's a form of one one-up manship to Brad
