Seraph28
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Me neither...so the quirk I took up is making sure they are the same colour..just with differing patterns
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There should be a thesis on that indeed..like who does that😂
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Art imitating life ,huh?😂
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You know sometimes I imagine you chortling when you write some of these scenes......today we had a lot of gems in this chapter...... The Steve/Kenny/Lydia bedroom scene.... The Sally/Kenny/Steve scene... The Lydia slamming everyone for not being bitchy enough during the Jason/Sally/Blake confrontation..... Basically Lydia is just teeming with sass😂
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I mentioned before that Sally reminds me of Bree van Der Kamp...that scene when she slaps Jason and calmly walks and introduces herself to Blake validates her point... I am fastidious but even I must admit Kenny is on another level..eh😂 Liddie...is just something else....that gurl has no censor in her body...God..it's like her mouth goes before her brain😂
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Now that is freaking awesome..haha
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Chapter 1: River meets Zayn
Seraph28 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 1: River meets Zayn
Was starting to wonder if your invite to party got lost in the mail😂😂 -
Chapter 2: Let the game begin!
Seraph28 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 2: Let the game begin!
My bad....it was Gael and Adam...just remembered... Matteo only invoked murderous Intent....Gael and Adam on the other hand...that was pure emotional torture on you @vanalas😏😂 -
Chapter 2: Let the game begin!
Seraph28 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 2: Let the game begin!
Oh no...that madness of legal threats passed...😂😂....that was back when Matteo was invoking wrath in me -
Oh...so long beautiful coffee maker ..We hardly knew you😂
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Chapter 2: Let the game begin!
Seraph28 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 2: Let the game begin!
Well...you have to first apply for the copyright licence Sir😂 -
Chapter 2: Let the game begin!
Seraph28 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 2: Let the game begin!
Oh dear...hopefully it has a good serving of slaps...I like it when some of these uppity characters are slapped around..😂.Please have River serve those...some of these characters need to be brought down a peg😂 -
Whoa....that was epic!..how long did that coffee maker last?..You really went out for it..Judging from what you have mentioned before am guessing that was years ago..😂
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Chapter 2: Let the game begin!
Seraph28 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 2: Let the game begin!
Indeed...you do.I like to believe you outgrew subtlety eons ago😂😂...when you became a father of felines. Those do not do subtle so it musta rubbed off on you. -
Chapter 2: Let the game begin!
Seraph28 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 2: Let the game begin!
For a moment there I imagined you were listening to our Lady Toni's 'He wasn't man enough for me'.😂😂.. Somehow am not surprised by your bluntness....some of your comments are pretty borderline murderous ...I especially remember and am fond of your comments in Swing For the Fences....Noah😂😂 -
Oh sorry ...cannot even begin to imagine how stressed you must be feeling presently...You are a mighty champ for what it worth!
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Well you do come close second....lately you have a knack of leave those bloody cliff hangers Sir😂😂😂....Now I am going to get mi self flustered till tomorrow morning .... If you were not so nice, I would file an emotional upheaval suit against yours truly! P.s...Please go slow on that coffee maker....it has 'feelings'😂😂...You wouldn't want it acting up on you ...lest you want a piss poor concotion passing off as a coffee tomorrow and the days after.
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Chapter 2: Let the game begin!
Seraph28 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 2: Let the game begin!
Whoa...you are certainly not pulling any punches mate. For what it is worth, you are not alone. If you have read his previous stories , there is always that female character who just invokes one's murderous Intent...I can't stress much enough, How I wished was in the story at that dinner...I would have swirled the contents on my plate in her well set make up. Then there is that Harry...I think he is the really the gold digger that Veronica was accusing River of being...he must have dated Zayn and dumped him when Leonardo cut Zayn off. I know, and we know that Zayn will grow up and become a better person as the story progresses but it does not negate the fact that he is currently a spineless twat 😂 -
Chapter 2: Let the game begin!
Seraph28 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 2: Let the game begin!
Looks like Veronica is going to be the Claudia of this tale....I think we need to revise Zayn's character traits ..besides arrogance and snobbishness, am adding spineless...God is that bloke an utter wuss! I like that River is not going to put up with shit...pardon my French......looks like he is going to have to contend with Veronica and Harry .- 33 comments
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In my head, this chapter mirrors the opening scene of Star Wars:Force Awakens in that there has indeed been an awakening!. It may be early days yet but I believe this is the moment that Lyn starts to really 'look and see' around him. I especially liked the fact that he sort of gets an epiphany that the 'flame' that once strongly burnt for Brad seems to have been doused over time. It may not have been open declaration @Cane23 clearly mentioned earlier but I like to believe those two mean subconsciously 'marked' each other.. By making themselves vulnerable and forfeiting control, especially Lyn, they have laid a foundation of what is to come and I cannot wait to see more.
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He already told his Mum in Chapter 16...that he loves both of them...he reiterates that in this chapter to Cash.. so I reckon the throuple is on... Chapter 19 is the last as @CasualWanderer82 mentioned..maybe the big man will do his magic and splendidly surprise as he is wont to but I believe this is it.
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Whoa...you are like the V Advocate @HHP67😂😂....well Jackson seems to have the B card down pat...I mean he was so with Blake as well .
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NO!...that is not fair....😂😂....You cant leave a boy hang with that cliff hanger😂
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That's the whole point @CasualWanderer82 makes with his work...they are meant to elicit emotion in us ..The fact that you can pinpoint what you feeling exactly is good enough...It means you were touched in a way...I share something with you😂...I was initially Team Jackson/Cash.. but after episode 16,...have been coming to terms with the fact that love has no logic...Jackson loves those two men ..and they love him back....so we got a throuple on our hands ..hopefully!😂
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Amen..indeed... For me personally the biggest joy for me in this story has been the transformation of Cash. He was a very angry young man ..but he has turned into a mature,calm and empathetic man....It reminds of that scene of parting ...when Jackson was leaving with Blake...he was right ..they would have gotten ruined had they stuck together back then.....I feel like besides Jackson ..he is the one who understands Daisy's Philosophy of 'doors, no locks'
