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"Atonement (Part One)"
Seraph28 commented on CasualWanderer82's story chapter in "Atonement (Part One)"
Pretty please, you giving classes ?..am fixin' to join😂 -
"Atonement (Part One)"
Seraph28 commented on CasualWanderer82's story chapter in "Atonement (Part One)"
Me too...don't forget gravy....I imagine she does make mean gravy to go down with those biscuits😂 -
"Atonement (Part One)"
Seraph28 commented on CasualWanderer82's story chapter in "Atonement (Part One)"
Oh give yourself credit Sir...when have you ever disappointed?..Personally I have no doubt where you are concerned ..been with you since the beginning and you always outdo yourself with each offering...😂😂. Now am sad....we are heading into the sunset ...but like they say..all good things must come to an end... You Sir deserve ......😂 -
It sure does...it seems like every queer person has their personal brand of trauma. Curtis Buckley really did a number on Blake....I imagine a therapist would not even know where to begin with helping him.
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That last scene....was something else...I am waiting to see how Killian is going to handle this...he usually has a judgemental streak in him
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I understand @Philippe...and that's why it sucks tits..I know it's a random thought...but this chapter is exactly why I feel validated when I say one of the biggest scams of humanity is adulthood.😂😂...You have to keep making decisions ...all the time.
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To borrow Lydia's Gen Z lingo ...they are adorable😉😂
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Chapter 1: River meets Zayn
Seraph28 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 1: River meets Zayn
You can only edit stuff within a minute or so of posting it ..otherwise it sticks. 16 hours is a lot...take some rest! -
Chapter 1: River meets Zayn
Seraph28 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 1: River meets Zayn
Oh @LeeSA....you could use some rest mate😂😂...You confused Xavier and Zayn....I think you are referring to Zayn..and not Xavier.....Xavier is superficial too sure...but he does not tear down people the way Zayn did to River. -
Am I the only one who thinks their agreement is sometimes a millstone around their necks?..Imagine how much they could be of support to each other at this moment were it not for the 'Do not Ask' .. Poor Will seems to be dealing with a lot on his mind..
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That was long before I was born...I do not think had ever heard about it .
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Chapter 1: River meets Zayn
Seraph28 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 1: River meets Zayn
Oh dear....good thing you have not read prior stories...that way you start on a clean slate when it comes to making your opinion...Zayn is indeed an asshole...I mean even Xavier,who is equally an asshole, called him out on it.....I liked that you noticed the smart assery too -
Pray tell...which year did that air..?
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Chapter 1: River meets Zayn
Seraph28 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 1: River meets Zayn
He is just like Louis...you remember that mofo from your first story.. -
Oh God...no.. @Cane23😂😂...You are going to open the flood gates with your comment😂... That being said....Ms.Fox has a knack for writing guys with above average schlongs....for some reason they all seem to be large😂😂😂...Spare a thought for little Jack...that boyo is going to need that miraculous ability indeed....reminds me when was reading the Potter-verse fan fic here...I think there used to be a spell...Lubos...if memory serves me right 😂
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"Atonement (Part One)"
Seraph28 commented on CasualWanderer82's story chapter in "Atonement (Part One)"
Last chapter I mentioned how I had run out of compliments for Ms Daisy Bell.... This time round it's your turn @CasualWanderer82.....I always feel that you cannot surprise me anymore but then you go and pull a chapter like this and throw a curve ball at me😂... This chapter had everything...suspense, sadness and then joy.At least for me.....and at last my misery of trying to guess which southern state Willow Creek is finally abated...You have no idea how many times have Googled American town called Willow Creek😂... Personally Colton was a juggernaut in this chapter for me..that lad is stronger and braver than he gives himself credit..... Thank you!- 16 comments
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Chapter 1: River meets Zayn
Seraph28 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 1: River meets Zayn
I.mean anyone could see Zayn is all about putting on an act...good thing Xavier called him on his bougee whores😂😂....For a moment there you came off like an African-American😂 -
Chapter 1: River meets Zayn
Seraph28 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 1: River meets Zayn
Damn!...another tale begins...Chaos(River) meets fake order(Zayn)😂...This story harkens back to the first stories you wrote ...a rich ,stuck up and morally bankrupt guy and a grounded, noble poor guy meeting...I like that you brought back the trope..am so thrilled 😂😂- 29 comments
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I was thinking the same thing ...when was reading that part...Remember he seems attracted to both of them...so guess we shall have a tool measuring contest at some point...to determine who goes first😂😂
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Eh...Jenny-lyn and Sally Jensen remind of Lynette Scarvo and Bree van der kamp from Desperate Housewives respectively ..One is used to dealing with and being in charge of chaos prone people ..The other one thrives on order..😂😂... I like Jenny-lyn....I imagined she was doing that finger tap thing as she was assigning those tasks at the end of the chapter😂
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To channel Gen Z...they should do look adobs😂😂
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You are right ...that fella has mustered the art of playing dumb....good thing Lyn is now beginning to see through his game...at least from that inner monologue he was having earlier in the chapter concerning Brad!
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The golden excuse...haha
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He has already noticed the closeness between them like Alexander mentioned to Lyn...am sure he will know
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When was reading this chapter...It was like was literally in the room witnessing one of those infamous press conferences.You know the ones where that fella who cos-plays as president rumbles and says really inane things...You captured it so well . I was like good thing that fella does not read or have any other idea of the existence of GA. You would be ripe for picking on X or Truth social 😂😂😂....and then he would let loose his crazy hounds after you ...just because!
