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Oh God!...there is evil and then evil...MocVann gravenhild is so dastardly.....I worry for Josel the day he finds out his mother is an evil hag😏...You are really making a good case for how power and ambition can lead down a dark path. That she would not even spare young innocent children shows what a vacuous person she is!
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A notification email ping woke me up(almost 5am here) and was surprised ...I usually get those between 7am -8am local time.. Have some rest indeed....we need you in top form..
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Moving Saturday & sexy knickers
Seraph28 commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Moving Saturday & sexy knickers
Am just here ..reveling in the fact that the Philipott commune has gained another member..😂 -
I called it in the last chapter...Its like I had a premonition that Killian was going to go all negative and judgemental on Micah....I sometimes wonder how you restrain yourself from screaming, eye rolling(if you can😂), pulling your hair or banging something when you are writing Killian....That lad is frustrating as hell😂😂
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You had to and say DILF 😂😂 Those two siblings see dollar signs in everything 😂
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Oh dear!...how had that one skipped my mind?.
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Interlude: Nana's House
Seraph28 commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Interlude: Nana's House
Oh no..that seems like a lot you got on your shoulders Sir. Hopefully all shall be resolved soon. -
Interlude: Nana's House
Seraph28 commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Interlude: Nana's House
It sure is...I for one thought you had 'given' up on us when it came to this story😂😂 -
S2 E13: The Fitness Ad Campaign
Seraph28 commented on StoriesByTroy's story chapter in S2 E13: The Fitness Ad Campaign
I would not want to be in Troy's shoes at that moment....I always maintained emotion particularly lust and love don't work within the bounds of logic😂 -
Who is the business equivalent of Niccolo Machiavelli?..I like to believe Lydia has taken up lessons quite seriously when it comes to business scheming.. that her parents pay rent to her for the same house she is staying in beggars belief😂
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Maybe now that he had his V card punches ..he will be more open minded and less uptight...literally 😂😂
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You Sir, am going to report to culture authorities for 'misappropriating ' Patois😂😂😂.... Well rested or fixing to I bet
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Like you can't wait long enough for Saturday's chapter update.. I do not know if am alone who has noticed the pattern but it seems like each past chapter has a direct bearing on the present chapter...Case in Point ..this one is clearly a prelude to the talk that is happening next....As Brad wants Lyn to 'give' him his place as the Best friend...he tried to re-assert that at the dinner in the previous chapter...he did in the past in this chapter. It is indeed going to be bloody interesting. ..the meet up I mean
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Chapter 3: Meet the Monroes!
Seraph28 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 3: Meet the Monroes!
OMG!...that was magnifico!..That scene between Leonardo and River I mean...Dare I say Leonardo is the dark horse of this tale..? I liked how River wiped the smirk of Harry's mug!...That dudette needed to be brought down a peg...I imagined he nearly exploded when he got served by River at the beach scene....Keep them coming ...like @Summerabbacat mentioned in the previous commentary...Harry needs a lesson... Dare I say Veronica is being weird because of menopausal blues?..Because you can't be salty like that hag .eh😂 -
Me neither...so the quirk I took up is making sure they are the same colour..just with differing patterns
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There should be a thesis on that indeed..like who does that😂
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Art imitating life ,huh?😂
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You know sometimes I imagine you chortling when you write some of these scenes......today we had a lot of gems in this chapter...... The Steve/Kenny/Lydia bedroom scene.... The Sally/Kenny/Steve scene... The Lydia slamming everyone for not being bitchy enough during the Jason/Sally/Blake confrontation..... Basically Lydia is just teeming with sass😂
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I mentioned before that Sally reminds me of Bree van Der Kamp...that scene when she slaps Jason and calmly walks and introduces herself to Blake validates her point... I am fastidious but even I must admit Kenny is on another level..eh😂 Liddie...is just something else....that gurl has no censor in her body...God..it's like her mouth goes before her brain😂
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Now that is freaking awesome..haha
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Chapter 1: River meets Zayn
Seraph28 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 1: River meets Zayn
Was starting to wonder if your invite to party got lost in the mail😂😂 -
Chapter 2: Let the game begin!
Seraph28 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 2: Let the game begin!
My bad....it was Gael and Adam...just remembered... Matteo only invoked murderous Intent....Gael and Adam on the other hand...that was pure emotional torture on you @vanalas😏😂 -
Chapter 2: Let the game begin!
Seraph28 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 2: Let the game begin!
Oh no...that madness of legal threats passed...😂😂....that was back when Matteo was invoking wrath in me -
Oh...so long beautiful coffee maker ..We hardly knew you😂
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Chapter 2: Let the game begin!
Seraph28 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 2: Let the game begin!
Well...you have to first apply for the copyright licence Sir😂
