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We have not yet 'met' Father but he already casts such a big shadow of menace that he has got our unflappable Andrew all unsettled ..That is scary as hell..eh

Whoa...like the four horsemen of the Apocalypse vibe you channeled up there Sir.

The syntax differs sure....but you are right..At least personally I understood the point you were making

No..Brad and Lynton met at College...they shared adjacent rooms in the same dormitory..

I don't why I keep calling him that...I meant Dan

Hopefully one of them was not an ending like the one Brandon got....you remember him....that boy got such a nasty ending...I almost felt ..sorry for him....then I remembered his brand of crazy and my sympathy fizzles so fast

Eh...that bad...😂....you created him after all....I think I lost my anger towards him about 3 chapters back and only started feeling pity for him

When you get to think about it's a good ending too...these men come out transformed and I like to believe better people .. Jace is now more mature and introspective ..Noah is now pragmatic which helps much of you are going to be co-parent.Matteo finally understands that love cannot be forced back if it left and that actions/choices come with consequences.

Hmm...I like to think that version of Matteo is gone and buried ....The Matteo we see at the end is a man who has matured...and finally understood that holding love hostage is a futile undertaking..It never ends well. I believe when Noah saved Eros, it sort of broke through all the madness and and made him realise that Jace was never really his after he got with Noah. You are the author and this baby is yours..whatever you choose will definitely be the right path..I like to hazard a guess that if there is a book 2, there will be another threat ..Someone who is even more unhinged that will be a problem for Noah,Jace or both if Providence wins and they do get back together..and that Matteo might be an ally. That's just me though😂

Ms Daisy Bell...that woman is a marvel..I have all about run out of superlatives to describe that woman. In the end ,Colton is just another broken scared boy. Reading his interaction with Daisy made me feel pity for him. It drove home the point that love can make such a big difference in a person's life.

Are you insinuating am a meanie @vanalas😂😂😂...Matteo did not exactly do himself any favours in the chapters before the finale...But it is really nice to know that underneath all the obsession...he is a good man who had lost his way because he never got the love he needed from the one person he wanted....I like to believe his 'love' for Jace was just to fill a void Adrian left behind. @Cane23 aptly stated it.When you look at ...at its core this story is really about fatherhood and sacrifices that fathers make...We see it in Noah and Jace....and the at the end in Matteo.

At least the last scene calmed my bothered self from yesterday!!... You have suddenly developed a knack for leaving beautiful spoilers Mr.Lydon!...I for one like it very much........😂😂😂

And we are the more blessed for it 😂

Feels like day 5 to me..at least that's what I think

Well Steve already told.us...he is the one with the talents, while Lydia won the lottery on the smarts...and I must add the sass

That's among the most beautiful bitter sweet moments have ever had the fortune of reading.... Everyone gets their well earned ending ...Am especially glad that Matteo finally steps from the precipice...I like to believe he has the best happy ending of our protagonists . It was a nice to see him finally realise he had lost himself and he is making an effort at the end to become a better person and a better father...That was a nice touch @vanalas...Good to see one of your 'villains' reform and choose the light😂 I have been Team#JaNoah from the beginning and I am so happy you made the decision not to let those two end up together...at least at this point.. there is so much pain and hurt from both parties to have let them get together . I am glad that Jace survived that wreck and from it like a Phoenix , he rises a better and mature person. The maturity and growth that Jace embodies in these last two chapters is impressive . I like to think the car crash is when the naive man boy , who throws around my love like low value currency, finally gives way to the man who understands that the cost of accountability . That being said ..this tale about marriage and love has been a riveting one for me.Thank you!

Exactly...plus this chapter and the previous one are all taking place on the same day...if memory serves me right

You know!...this chapter is still part of the same day..if memory serves me right..they had their intimate moments during the day and it's now only evening...

Evasive ,teasing meanie😂😂

@Cane23 and @LeeSA...have pretty much exhausted everything ..One thing I can say is that in the present day chapters Lyn is exasperating... One cannot be that emotionally stunted and oblivious..It has become a case of one step forward , 3 steps back when it comes to him. That last scene between Lyn and Alexander was just too much for me...I never wished so badly to enter a story and whoop a character's ass so badly like I felt in that moment....... What makes it even more annoying is that Lyn is not a shallow and self absorbed person....but in that scene...God!

Clovis....you mischievous bear!...😂😂Now you Mr.Lydon have managed to get me all flustered with that ending scene 😂

I always thought politics is an abyss....this chapter, especially that scene with the Prime Minister validated that....That PM is a snivelling coward!

I think you meant to say Alexander here

For being dolts?😂

I cannot wait to see how that is going to pan out indeed