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  1. Seraph28

    Chapter 5

    Good morning Sir... I like your version of the mustang logo๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚
  2. Duh...am a Virgo...we folks are steadfast and when we like/love ...we go wholesale...no half measures. We take the ugly and good together..to the end๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚... I don't hate Matteo per se...he is a pitiful creature..
  3. Seraph28

    Ancient History

    I don't like eye rolling....but reading that line almost got me doing so....Good thing Alexander called him out for it.๐Ÿ˜‚
  4. This song embodies the chapter so well๐Ÿ˜œ
  5. This is among the saddest finales you have ever written ...Everyone is left in a dark place emotionally . Noah with a broken heart yet free to start a new chapter ..I like to believe he will heal eventually and learn to love again Matteo ..has doubled down on his self-delusion and obsession...I do not hold much hope for that one!..He has held love captive and in a way corrupted it...In trying to hold onto Jace at all cost, he lost him for good Jace...my tragic hero ....in the end he is the most transformed. He finally understands what love is. He understands that real love is not holding on too tight but letting the one you love free....Now we just have to pray that he has earned enough good karma to survive that accident!..this world would be dull without his beautiful chaos in it That being said ....thank you for this gripping tale @vanalas..
  6. Seraph28

    Chapter 6

    My oh my....nostalgia is a gem indeed
  7. Seraph28

    Chapter 6

    Damn....this chapter belongs to the Dads...Clovis and Jason are one of a kind.... My Dad would clobber me, re-animate me then clobber me again for good measure if he even as much as got a whiff that I don't walk on the straight path..
  8. Seraph28

    Chapter 4

    I cannot wait....wanna see Andrew go mano-o-mano on him ๐Ÿ˜‚
  9. Seraph28

    Chapter 18

    Damn...that last scene was brutally heart wrenching .
  10. Good to know it's manageable...
  11. Seraph28

    Chapter 5

    My swoon-fest starts right now ...that was something else...something shifting and being spoken by the comfortable silence, the looks, the touches..... hmmm...look am even text sighing ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚
  12. I thought only I was cackling ...I had to re-read that part ...thrice.Just to make sure was seeing right๐Ÿ˜‚ Sorry about the hay fever..hopefully it passes.
  13. Seraph28

    Chapter 3

    Thank you!...and yes It makes sense now..
  14. Seraph28

    Chapter 3

    Damn .Dmytro is one tough nut,eh..He is laying the groundwork for being the MVP of this story for me๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚. Hope you don't mind me asking Mr.Lydon..how much time has passed between Breach and now?.. Thank you!
  15. Each chapter, I get more immersed into the Higgins household. This week's chapter is just so feel good. Things are in the right place so to speak... Jock giving Slav the blessing was just so heart warming!
  16. Seraph28

    Chapter 16

    I am starting to think you have a knack for writing detestable mothers....Lisa is just something else .You cannot just give up on your own child just because he is different from others. Celia was right...she is going to lose Cody as well all because of her bigotry and hate! Cody sure does have gumption,eh๐Ÿ˜‚
  17. Seraph28

    Chapter 2

    Oh Jake....what have you got yourself entangled in?
  18. Seraph28

    Chapter 4

    Jesus!....that's a 'terrible' combo.....Trainwreck and dork I mean๐Ÿ˜‚
  19. Oh God๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚....whom are you hanging out with Sir?..they are definitely running off on you!
  20. Seraph28

    Chapter 4

    Whoa..this chapter was like watching a pendulum bob... Before it comes to a stop(the lads' agreement)๐Ÿ˜‚
  21. Seraph28

    Chapter 20

    In this case I do not even know anymore.๐Ÿ˜‚....In his warped mind he has exclusive rights to Jace's love and mind because he and Jace dated first in the past๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚...
  22. Seraph28

    Chapter 18

    No you did not go there @Lupus...Poor Marl(RIP)...he never stood a chance ...but then to have Zdain fall into Renn's scheme was just so hard to read..I.do not even want to think about that..Our Zdain has no chance against Renn judging by the last scene in the lake and the one of this chapter. I have read despicable characters....but Renn Tauganei is just among the worst...there is nothing redeemable about that fella. His zeal for service of the dark is scary....I swear am going to sue if you dare let Zdain succumb to that monster.....in fact have given my attorney a head up๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚...File a suit for emotional torture and hope dashing๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚ That being said this chapter just raised the stakes, no one is safe in this fight against evil ...even our big heroes. At this rate am going to start thinking you just like torturing us๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚.. Thank you!
  23. I especially like the symbolism at the end when Blake does not put his hat on and instead holds it's to his chest...It was indeed like @CasualWanderer82 portrayed it. ...it felt like that moment when one is about to receive holy communion in church...
  24. When you put it that way, it does really feel less sad...His defence of Brad was just to make peace so that his friends don't quabble...
  25. Seraph28

    Chapter 1

    Well ..one can take their chances with reindeer...guns and sadistic men on the other hand are hard to deal with...
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