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In this case I do not even know anymore.😂....In his warped mind he has exclusive rights to Jace's love and mind because he and Jace dated first in the past😂😂...
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No you did not go there @Lupus...Poor Marl(RIP)...he never stood a chance ...but then to have Zdain fall into Renn's scheme was just so hard to read..I.do not even want to think about that..Our Zdain has no chance against Renn judging by the last scene in the lake and the one of this chapter. I have read despicable characters....but Renn Tauganei is just among the worst...there is nothing redeemable about that fella. His zeal for service of the dark is scary....I swear am going to sue if you dare let Zdain succumb to that monster.....in fact have given my attorney a head up😂😂😂...File a suit for emotional torture and hope dashing😂😂 That being said this chapter just raised the stakes, no one is safe in this fight against evil ...even our big heroes. At this rate am going to start thinking you just like torturing us😂😂.. Thank you!
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"The Dog He Fed (And The One He Starved)"
Seraph28 commented on CasualWanderer82's story chapter in "The Dog He Fed (And The One He Starved)"
I especially like the symbolism at the end when Blake does not put his hat on and instead holds it's to his chest...It was indeed like @CasualWanderer82 portrayed it. ...it felt like that moment when one is about to receive holy communion in church... -
[Memory, March, Sophomore Year] – You Are My Friend
Seraph28 commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in [Memory, March, Sophomore Year] – You Are My Friend
When you put it that way, it does really feel less sad...His defence of Brad was just to make peace so that his friends don't quabble...- 36 comments
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Well ..one can take their chances with reindeer...guns and sadistic men on the other hand are hard to deal with...
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My God can Dmytro ever get a break😂...At the rate it's going we should just call him Hapless Dmytro....in Breach his life was at peril...caught up in a sting mission...same thing is happening to him here.... Maybe he should consider moving to more sedate climes😂
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The chinese have a phrase for it ..they are both in the light...so they will see each other coming
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[Memory, March, Sophomore Year] – You Are My Friend
Seraph28 commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in [Memory, March, Sophomore Year] – You Are My Friend
I mentioned in my previous chapter comment that it was an episode of unraveling. I feel this chapter is like a foundation of what happens in the previous chapter.. We get a brief glimpse of Alexander's insecurity and his longing to be solely seen by Lyn when he asks him if Lyn always defends everyone.. I felt sad reading that scene because it was a testament of Alexander's longing for Lyn. Here is a bloke who has yearned for his friend to notice how he feels about him and feels elated that Lyn stood up for him even though it was not warranted. In that moment Alexander feels like he has finally got his wish of having Lyn's attention and affection solely fixed on him. only to have his hopes dashed when his object of affection passes of the moment as simply being his usual altruistic self..It was crushing to read that to be honest. -
Tempus fugit - a home, a family & a boyfriend
Seraph28 commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Tempus fugit - a home, a family & a boyfriend
Do you reckon the Philipott gay commune is almost complete with Maxi and Jacob? -
"The Dog He Fed (And The One He Starved)"
Seraph28 commented on CasualWanderer82's story chapter in "The Dog He Fed (And The One He Starved)"
I have waited 13 chapters and a few weeks give or take to get to Jacks and Cash finally consummating their relationship...and my God was it worth the wait.🤩..I am reading this chapter on a loop. Reading the first part of this chapter was like literally being at an orchestra performance....Each line hitting a part of me😂...and by the time they came from their orgasmic bliss it was like hearing a symphony come to a close!.. So beautiful words cannot describe. Not to be outdone, you have us 'watch' the unflappable Blake witness our two fellas in Holy Coitus and even he could not help but be awed by the sight...that scene made a believer outta Blake. You have made me come undone @CasualWanderer82😂😂🤣..... Today I realised that I have mostly put so much stock into Daisy, Jackson, Cash, Blake and the others....and neglected one of the most complex and well written characters in this story....Colton!....There are times when you come across a character who is in equal measures detestable and yet so pitiful. I do not know whatever happened to Colton to make him turn up like that.. Maybe @Cane23....and the Big man himself @CasualWanderer82😉 can help. Thank you! -
Oh Steve ...you have gone done it!...you are so in the doghouse mate!😂
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You forgiven Sir😂
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Oh God..no🤣...Maestro is in a class of his own...can only learn from him🤣.Not compete with him .. Questions mean I get more perceptive which is a good thing..
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Is it possible for someone to get worse from moment to moment?..Matteo is just becoming something else each chapter!...Even Izzy called him out for it.. Someone in the previous chapter comments said he needs psychological help urgently...but I think he is beyond help. The behaviour in this chapter is something scary!....Like what kind of delusion is that....does he think when he is done Jace will come back to him?..Jace and Noah might be done...but even Jace would not be that stupid to get with someone as crazy and spiteful as Matteo...
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That is what I meant ...he is always inventing ways to have his way!
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Oh Steve...you cannot help yourself😂...
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I like to believe that is Hugo at his core...he sees,well used to see the good in people...even the most shitty ones.
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Some of us do feast on his offers too😂
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That's why I also believe in Billy...even though am worried about him at the moment...He is easy picking for manipulation ..the part below got me even more concerned for our lad The gift was a shield for him from the ravages of the temporal reversal, it permitted him to remember. The agent that had given him the watch, Miller, entered the lobby fully integrated, his arms folding and looking at the young agent. Am going to be thinking about that particular scene till we come back from the break😂
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No..I meant on a more emotional/mind level... Oh Alec would literally initiate Armageddon if anybody so much as looked at his Hugo funny...and that includes a disillusioned and angry foster son😂
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You had this planned out from the go😂...this makes it even sadder....Father pitted against son because technically Hugo and Billy are so..father and son I mean. It reminds me of a movie that came out years ago.. The Hunted...Tommy Lee Jones's character trained Benicio del Toro's character and treated him like a son...and years later he has to bring him down...Reading this chapter was sort of foreboding ..like Hugo having to bring down Billy in the future..
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I hope not...it would be a double tragedy...
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Like that irritating rash that one keeps getting during the cold..
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This chapter drives the point home..when it comes to war, victory is bitter sweet. Dottie was vanquished sure, but in the process Hugo has lost himself. The compassionate and empathetic part of him is probably lost forever .He has lost Billy, who might probably become his enemy in the future. Basically when you come to think about it...Hugo has lost.
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OMG!...you sure you are not some otherworldly being Sir?.That is a lot to have on someone's plate..eh. 3 Shows, 4 books?..that seems herculean. We are all the more honoured ....Thank you!
