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  1. Seraph28
    This story reminds me of what I went through back in 2007 when was in boarding school..I had a similar Lyn-Brad dynamic ...only difference I got touch and play some 🤭 and the Alexander was a Barbra instead...they ended up together...for a while anyway😂😂
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    I would be devastated as well....I don't think would forgive either.
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    You know sometimes I feel like you are Alexander ..the way you don't rate Bradley's intelligence at all 😂😂
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    That is why will always maintain that adulthood is a scam....like you have to be able to read and understand people...while children are just carefree..there is openness..no nuance
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    So you think it was a test of sorts?like Brad was testing how far Lyn could go in that scene?
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    Good to have you back in these streets @Cane23....You have been greatly missed... I know...it would indeed be heartbreaking....but then again one can hope... You think Jace is redeemable?...That there is a way back to Noah or it's done for good...he has crossed the Rubicon
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    That so messed up @Cane23...why can't people just take risks and talk openly😏
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    Come on!...Not another bloody cliff hanger when it's just getting interesting😂😂
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    There is one thing you have mastered matey...the Art of the cliff hanger😂..Your stories have three spices.. 1...Relationships...all the different types..Loving, toxic, abusive ,family,friendship 2...Drama...you are the embodiment of drama...boy do you live for.it😂😂 3...The Forewords and the cliff hangers....each time I read a story of yours it reminds me of Desperate Housewives..if you ever watched it...there was that Narrator at the beginning and the end of each episode...Mary Alice Young..well at least her spirit.. your cliff hangers and forewords have that vibe...that's why I keep coming back for more...am addicted!
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    Well...you do indeed have a writing pattern in all your stories ..at least the ones I have read so far😂
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    Thank goodness you cleared that...now we can indeed speculate theories....am sure some are in Camp#Quickie in the bathroom....others,like me, cannot for the world theorise so will remain at your mercy😂
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    Oh you clocked him too? 😂...See how your reputation precedes you Sir..
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    Now you see why I call @Cane23 ...Maestro?😂...he adds dimension that one would not have perceived whilst reading on their own
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    I do not remember if it was you or @VBlew who hinted at Bradley having some sort of addiction(s) in the previous chapter...This chapter subtly hints he could be a heavy drinker Of course, Brad knew the answer. He wanted Lyn to keep his concern in mind..... Of course he is aware...Here it comes off as manipulative and also seeking validation .
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    Do you have any idea how 'messed up' I get each time you 'tease' us with future events of this story?😂😂..Like the one above... It makes me wish would make time run fast such that the Saturdays speed up..like in a moment😂😂
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    That dialogue up there pretty much finally gives us a little glimpse into Bradley's psyche . Insecurity and need for validation never been so outlined before!
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    Chapter 18

    Seraph28 commented on LittleBuddhaTW's story chapter in Chapter 18

    That was a good psychoanalysis of Nick ..I thought the same when was reading the scenes at the beginning of the chapter...For him to react like that, to think like that is an indication of deep seated issues that are not privy too..
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    Chapter 18

    Seraph28 commented on LittleBuddhaTW's story chapter in Chapter 18

    I don't know what I enjoy more ...the chapter updates or the Toni clips😂
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    Chapter 18

    Seraph28 commented on LittleBuddhaTW's story chapter in Chapter 18

    That Noah had the temerity to come to Nick and tell him they need to talk was an indication of his arrogance .I almost feel sorry for him...he might be a shitty lying boyfriend but no teen deserves to be treated as a pariah, however warranted it may be!
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    Chapter 19

    Seraph28 commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 19

    Oh my!..that is bonkers!..really looking forward to.it
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    Chapter 19

    Seraph28 commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 19

    Haha ..are you also channeling stoker away from your PC...I mean in real time?😂 I guess I will pitch myself for not being observant enough .
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    Chapter 19

    Seraph28 commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 19

    This type of writing is extremely experimental for me, an exercise in growing my ability, and I hope that it is working. I asked you yesterday if you are some form of meta-human😂😂...If this is your 'prototype'...then I can only imagine how better the final product(s) are going to be...Like this is really good stuff for someone who is experimenting with this genre. Time travel is always hard to pin down ..there are always going to be naysayers..Those who claim to police the genre and God forbid if you step out of line, even slightly!😂 Personally am all for it...this is really good stuff Mr.Lydon...oh did I mention you 'accidentally' added spoilers, something you never ,ever do😂😂😂....am talking about
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    Chapter 18

    Seraph28 commented on LittleBuddhaTW's story chapter in Chapter 18

    A pity it doesn't happen much in real life...we could use such friends . Noah...is not dumb....He is just so self-absorbed and nonchalant...A dumb person would not have been able to cheat for that long..
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    Chapter 18

    Seraph28 commented on LittleBuddhaTW's story chapter in Chapter 18

    I had to re-read that part where the student said that just to make sure was not imagining it 😂😂😂
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    Chapter 19

    Seraph28 commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 19

    Well Kate does call it as it is with this 😂😂 “Getting done regularly by the country boy?” The Bride smiled broadly hand on her chest like the Dowager Countess. “Scandalous.” Our Hugo has suddenly become our intrepid hero in this episode ...I cannot wait.. What I like about Hugo is that he is very introspective. He acknowledges in this episode that it is his hubris that has landed him and Alec in this situation...It is always good to read characters who are so beautifully complex like this one....Thank you!!
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