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All I thought about this chapter you have encapsulated in your comment Sir๐
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Whoa..I do not even know where to begin or what to even say ...The chapter speaks for itself . Daisy Bell is a force of nature...you have created some really formidable characters over the years..Adam,Caleb, Nick, Benjamin and Gabriel. Today am adding Daisy Bell into that pantheon of great characters๐๐๐.. That cook-out cannot come soon enough...I am so looking forward to it... Thank you!
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Southwold plans & Mattโs bedroom
Seraph28 commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Southwold plans & Mattโs bedroom
Yet another chapter where we get to see Matt and Gray's metamorphoses. These blokes are just so sweet...and its good reading how their relationship is evolving!..... I wish we could get Bas directly interacting with Gray as Dawn does with Vince.. All in all...this is yet another beautiful update...Thank you! -
I think we can agree to stop calling Asher...Arsehair now๐๐๐.. I am glad Killian finally had the talk with Judy ...now at least he can begin to understand he is not loco..๐
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To borrow from cell block tango... He has it coming..He has it coming..He only has himself to blame๐๐....we have seen it...and we feel the same๐๐
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Now that is not a bad idea..๐
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You Sir know how to make this hopeless romantic swoon๐๐๐ This was beautifully sweet!...thank you!
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That Sinjin twist was something else..I swear....Having our Alec flustered made it even better๐๐
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You might be onto something indeed!๐๐...the top master is back in his element and he is not going to be gentle at all๐
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"Ride That Bull, Jackson!"
Seraph28 commented on CasualWanderer82's story chapter in "Ride That Bull, Jackson!"
Usually when you are reading a story in this universe and a chapter starts with a scene of hot unbridled passion like this one the end is going to break you...Someone is getting hurt or something fundamental changes at the end of that scene -
"Ride That Bull, Jackson!"
Seraph28 commented on CasualWanderer82's story chapter in "Ride That Bull, Jackson!"
We are always going to get served with great writing when @CasualWanderer82 is involved...Do not even get me started on the erotica๐ -
Act III - A Whole New World
Seraph28 commented on Jack Poignet's story chapter in Act III - A Whole New World
Except he could be in a different country..or even off world...so we have no idea if it's indeed free.hihi -
Act III - Any Dream Will Do
Seraph28 commented on Jack Poignet's story chapter in Act III - Any Dream Will Do
Now we go raise some hell...๐.. That vampire dude needs to be pulverised too...as for Mommy dearest ...that one has it coming! -
You know I live for making relationship handles๐๐...and boy do those two make a symphony in private๐๐๐
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Act III - Any Dream Will Do
Seraph28 commented on Jack Poignet's story chapter in Act III - Any Dream Will Do
Deader than dead! -
Chapter 15: Blood, Sweat, and Secrets.
Seraph28 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 15: Blood, Sweat, and Secrets.
My Jace is not cray cray...๐๐....But you are right..They always want to have their cake and eat it...Its the ego thing..Their little egos feel bruised when you move on from their cheating asses . -
Chapter 15: Blood, Sweat, and Secrets.
Seraph28 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 15: Blood, Sweat, and Secrets.
That is cause for panic indeed...If you are also scared of Matteo...then we lesser beings are utterly terrified๐๐ -
"Ride That Bull, Jackson!"
Seraph28 commented on CasualWanderer82's story chapter in "Ride That Bull, Jackson!"
Let me start by saying, it's good to have you back here @CasualWanderer82...These streets have been a little bleak without your particular brand of emotional sappers ๐๐๐ That being said...I somehow knew this chapter was going to be an intense one.. and my do those blokes have staying power..eh. That last scene of the chapter was just so hard to read...and I have this feeling we are just getting started ..the chasm between Daisy and Jackson is only going to get wider...So I think should stock up on hankies because this is going to be bloody and teary me will be letting down rivulets๐๐๐ Thank you...really! -
My Oh My..has cock ring removal has never been this hot๐๐
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Don't you dare delete it...๐๐
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Chapter 15: Blood, Sweat, and Secrets.
Seraph28 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 15: Blood, Sweat, and Secrets.
Well crazy obsessed people like Matteo can do anything....they work outside the bounds of logic๐ -
Act III - Any Dream Will Do
Seraph28 commented on Jack Poignet's story chapter in Act III - Any Dream Will Do
You do know how to make this boy's bland day become lighter๐๐... I wanted Morwenna and her acolytes' karmic debts to be paid.. You definitely delivered....One down , two pesky vermin to go...Am talking about Mother and that Vampire dude๐๐....That dude needs to pay...is it possible to skewered him...inch by inch then roast him alive?๐๐ Thank you...I loved how Morwenna and her ilk got got their just desserts...Next chapter cannot come soon enough! -
Chapter 15: Blood, Sweat, and Secrets.
Seraph28 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 15: Blood, Sweat, and Secrets.
Exactly...learned behaviour can be hard to break.. -
Chapter 15: Blood, Sweat, and Secrets.
Seraph28 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 15: Blood, Sweat, and Secrets.
Well...I am learning from you...You are a good teacher...and am an apt pupil.๐๐๐ The tragic irony is that through this collapse, Jace will be forced to confront what real love actually means, beyond delusion and control. Watching Noah, whether with Chris or someone else, build a genuine family life will eventually become the mirror in which Jace sees both his losses and the truth heโs been running from. That painful clarity may be the very thing that pushes him toward growth. I think am the only one who really finds Jace a sympathetic character Now am not condoning his infidelity.He is definitely a flawed and insecure young man.Am guessing he has abandonment issues ,first from his father and then his 'supposed soul mate'..He is ,as you have rightly stated, someone who yearns to be in control of the narrative because if he is not in control then that insecure,broken and lonely boy we get to see in that scene at Miriam's place is all we get. I reckon he is someone who was starved of love and attention ,at least from a male perspective . I mention this basing on his relationships with Noah and Matteo....Other than his mother, I think Matteo must have been the other person to love him and pay attention to him..That is why that relationship was so intense and when Matteo upped and left him,no contact. it must have been devastating for him. We have no idea what happens to Jace in that time .The next time we meet him,albeit in flashback ,is when Jace and Noah's paths begin at University. Noah is rich,smart ,calm and studious and I like to believe in Jace's mind way out of his level. We see how he pursues him and eventually wins him over.He lets fear overcome him and messes up and they finally find their way to each other. For six years, they have martial bliss..Go through hell(panic attacks, disrespect from the Elijah, and like) together .It is for that reason ,those 6 years that I feel Jace is all not a bad person..He is just an insecure weak man. I mentioned in some earlier comments of mine that Jace is in the mess he is in at the moment because of bad decision making.. Keeping his past with Matteo is the worst decision he made. Would the affair still have happened ? Maybe.Maybe not.I like to believe they would have faced the spectre of the past together and we would not have the train wreck we have now...Then again we would not be having a story๐. That being said I have hope that Jace and Noah will find their way back to each other..There might be a lot of hurt and pain at the moment but there is also a lot of love underneath all that.Even though Jace is currently a prat . Do not take me my word for it though...am just a hopelessly romantic fella who believes folks are not entirely irredeemable....that sometimes a rose can bloom out of muck too๐. -
Chapter 15: Blood, Sweat, and Secrets.
Seraph28 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 15: Blood, Sweat, and Secrets.
Indeed...just know my sisters and I are a little pissed off with our Big brother ..and God the 'sister-in-law' tries to much...Calling our parents ..dropping by to 'check in'....It is so suffocating as hell....Like Matteo, she didn't understand the rules of the game๐๐๐...That is you are never to be seen..
