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That's why I keep re-reading every week....you learn something new each time..have read this episode twice now but have failed to understand it....it's that complicated...there is so much said..yet unsaid ..does that make sense?
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[Memory, Freshman Year, February] – Sharp, Bitter, Sour
Seraph28 commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in [Memory, Freshman Year, February] – Sharp, Bitter, Sour
God ..grant me time travel abilities that way 'the much later ' comes soon 😂 -
Oh God ...I was just about to reach out to you ..😂
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Poor Caleb indeed!..what a rotten fate for one so young!
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It beats thr tongue twister that is the original spelling😂
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I kinda disagree with you on that scene.. This bit I mean Jordan's lukewarm reaction to Calvin's full-time employment barely registered with Calvin...... It was not a luke warm reaction...He told him he was glad.😂 ..He was briefly sad. not to mention both were interrupted by someone...Jordan had to talk to Malcom while Calvin was interrupted by Melissa ... I mentioned in my previous comment...the reason Calvin is not so torn about it is because he had Alan to fall back to...I like to believe he would have tried harder were it not for whatever he has with Alan...That's the point Jordan raised when he was ending things with him..remember?..They work together ,so am sure they can be friends.. Btw...were you that naive,impulsive and self-centered at that age? I would call it a prodigious heat seeking piston...since a piston doesn't explode and can be used many times😂😂😂
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We really should form a Bashers' club...and on our hit team : Sir Mason Dafuq Lachlan Sinclair. Oh and Bravo Team member
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Oh dear !...I am a crazy Toni Braxton fan too....not a stalker though😂...My old phone's song gallery had 75% Toni Braxton music ...Am a millennial, so those are folks we grew up on... I was talking about the Anne Wilkes from Misery..
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Maybe this exchange can give you the answer you seek. Dad: Do you think you love Alan? Me: Hmm. Well, I care about him. You know, I want him to be healthy and happy. And I love the … intimacy. And he treats me good. I paused to think but Dad was silent. Me: I think I love him but not like he’s my boyfriend, more like I love Joe Escondido or Carrie and Cody.
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Now that you mention it...this is the first time am reading Historical Sci-fi....it's usually Historical Romance, Action....fantasy...but never Sci-fi
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Unfortunately folks seem to have become more bigoted...they would consider that 'wokeism' and that is something that ruffles theirs sensibilities to no end
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Now that doesn't seem a bad place indeed😂
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Problem is there is a bit of one up- manship going on(Remember that eel,Mason Dafuq,someone called him that😂) between the security agencies...so that might impede coordination
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Where is Jellystone Park😂😂...you make it seem like it's full of average loving wild animals
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Manipulating...exploiting ..Abusing them...all things....Unfortunately that mostly happens when young ones with dreams land in the hands of a predator like Chris..
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I agree with you...keeping secrets is sometimes not a good thing...these guys are literally his family and the only friends he has..Imagine if they found out from somewhere else that Ryan and Jasper are a thing...that would be a lot of hurt feelings and a betrayal... Now Imagine for a second if that smarmy Chris bastard finds out .
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OMG!...I do not even know what to say....your music videos say everything and more..😂 Carrie would be the more better choice ..indeed...someone needs to go loco on them... As for the parents...I feel like the Menendez bros are tame...they need unhinged treatment, a visit from Anne Wilkes or better Anton chigurh 😂😂....Look at us letting our inner darkness come to light😂😂
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After this chapter am torn between Gregory and Ezra on who should be the MVP of this tale😂😂.. Notice I don't include the main players (Will, Andrew ,Enrico) in this context?.. That being said, I knew in my heart that Ezra would wake up....there is that nurture vs nature thing...Ezra might have found love but he still has his moral compass.
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Well Xue told him Ezra was his undoing...we all knew Ezra is just a lonely, attention starved boy.But at the end of the day, he was still his mother's son. She might have not noticed him much but in a way she cared about him. A child will always yearn for their mother.
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..with a thud.
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Chapter 10: Roses and thorns
Seraph28 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 10: Roses and thorns
I agree with you.The nastiness that is bound to come from Elijah is what I feel will 'destroy' him ..Remember he has always felt like a failure where that prick is concerned...Always made him feel like a disappointment.. As for Noah going on with another guy,I feel like it would be taking away his agency .It makes it feel like he is only good because he is partnered with someone...In my opinion, the best win Noah could have is being independent because you notice he has been heavily dependent on someone since the story began ..First his family, then Jace. As for Jace and Matteo..I do not think they can last...what makes infidelity attractive is the thrill of being with someone you are not allowed to have...Once that novelty wears off, the affair tends to peter out naturally. Granted they had unresolved feelings for each other but Jace does indeed love Noah and Rain...I have said it before people get caught up in passion for a while but then once the passion sizzles up..they wake up. The other reasons I believe they cannot have a happy ending is because the guilt and shame of their actions would never leave them...Regret can be a nasty bitch .The fall out front this affair is bound to be really big. Lives will be destroyed .Plus in this universe ,cheating is social suicide and especially bad for the instigator who in this case is Matteo..It never ends well for the mistress😂...You should check out @vanalas's other story, The Mistress.. Basically I believe the message this story is trying to deliver is Infidelity destroys lives. That people cheat because they make a choice to do so...Chris rightly called out Jace for his excuses...and in this chapter Jace and Matteo both make the choice to start the affair...knowing fully well it's the wrong thing to do. -
Chapter 10: Roses and thorns
Seraph28 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 10: Roses and thorns
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Chapter 10: Roses and thorns
Seraph28 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 10: Roses and thorns
Eh..I thought am the only one feeling so..but that is passion for you. Once you yield to it...there is no going back. This episode highlights the lightness of the emotional ties that bind Noah and Jace ..If he truly and wholly loved him as he claimed, then Jace would have been able to fight the temptation that is Matteo.. He did not put up a fight the first time,as Chris clearly told him. He chose to cheat...Usually people who romanticise infidelity always quote all is fair in love and war..I always thought it's bullshit...I believe if your love is at the expense of others. If it has a deleterious effect on others...then that is not love at all. Love transforms people and those around them in a positive way...what Jace and Matteo have is a warped version of what love is...The fact that they need to sneak around ..to lie about their past....that is how limited they are....Love doesn't limit...it is all encompassing! -
This chapter was the death knell of my Calvin-Jordan dream😂😂.. It's nice to have you back @KKirk....the Literary Diety must have given you a boon....Inspiration😂 Thank you for the update!
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This is a surprise!..I mean the update coming on Thursday...It's very delightful indeed.. I like the fact that Jamie has finally seen the light.. This story has been about personal growth. And boy has Jamie had his share of it...From the sulky, emotionally detached and impulsive person we meet in the first chapter...to this mature person we get in this episode... It's marvelous!..Now if only he could try to make amends for his nasty behaviour towards Hearst! I always wondered how Wencel and Hearst can be like that...Am not close with my brother but our relationship is at least a good one...These two don't even care about each other! Thank you!
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