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Blimey!..what a cliff hanger! Just when you think Josel and Zdain have got some bit of reprieve , this chapter drops..eh. Berron Rigailion is a cautious reminder that nothing ever really comes free...there is always a catch in there..A price to pay...God those two young boys(Josel and Zdain) need a serious break😅😅😅 As for Vargan...I always like channelling Darth Vader...he will choke on his ambition if he is not careful😅😅😅 Thank you!
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I know...I didn't include Jack/Nick because they are end game... I put Nick/Christian together because I know it's impossible...hence my dreams do not come true most of the time but😅😅
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Danny/Jonah Emery/Mark Jack/Danny...because I like mismatches Nicky/Christian....a boy can dream right?..Though dreams don't come true....most of the time..
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He has to earn it...to earn Jack I mean..and that is going to need a lot of work on his part ..He messed up big time..
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He does really have a penchant for bamboozling us😅😅
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So you think Caleb is guilty for going Norman Bates on his father?..I feel that is just too easy...a liar yeah...but I didn't get an unhinged vibe from him..at least not from what have read
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You are brutally honest @Philippe...haha...am sure if you had a chance you would help pack and throw his shit out😅
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Finally someone called BS on Killian...and am glad it was ghost Seth who did it ...Killian has been resentful towards Asher because he Asher dumped him...Hearing him called out for that was good for my afternoon😅
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Just one question....how do you do it Mr.Lydon?..The balance in the chapters...You balance exposition, comedy,action, romance and intensity in such a manner it leaves us guessing what comes next😅
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You are right about seeing the good in people ..In a way reading this story makes me realise am a mirror image of Nick ..It is hard to stop😏 Even I suspected Nick would get Noah flagrante delicto...Good thing he realised he has wasted months of his life ...
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He has screwed up colossally but it's something that can be repaired with time..He did not just hurt Jack...he hurt all his friends so he will have to do a lot of work to repair the broken trust and hurt feelings Noah on the other hand...crossed the Rubicon so to speak..
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Oh God!..this is bad... I believe I owe some folks here an apology...I was one of those who was thinking Noah was not all bad..Now am left with egg on my face😅😅 Nick has a lot of damage control to do with his friends...there is going to be a lot of hurt feelings after this chapter.
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Brotherly support & a full attic
Seraph28 commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Brotherly support & a full attic
This family grows on me with each chapter. The relationships are something else...they are organic..Growing each chapter...It is however Gray and Matt's budding relationship that is my favourite ..reading about how those two are transforming is something to delight in. Thank you...Blessed day! -
Oh you are terrifically sneaky,sorr😅😄 ...That scene between Enrico and Ezra ..was just so terrifically tragic ..it had that Jack-Rose Titanic vibe...only without the death thoug.It was really beautiful...love at its best😄😄... When are the tickets to the Defenestration show of Sinclair and Sir Dafaq coming through...I would like to secure a front seat! Thank you!
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Oh yeah...that explains a lot indeed
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You seem to have encountered your fair share of both..
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Indeed....but then like he asserted why must he always be made the scape goat of our own decisions.. This is ,in my opinion, the best chapter of this book...The other being when Stoker tells Hugo that he wanted him and knew he had to have him 😅😅😅
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Stoker’s eyes creased with worry, he’d grown fond of his gentleman very fond. The idea of leaving the bumbling academic alone was something that just didn’t sit well with him. He considered defying Wojciech’s instructions, after all he was HIS gentleman… There are moments like those when I believe your inner hopeless romantic bleeds through the page😅😅 Then there is this gem below...I do not know how you come up with such stuff sometimes... That was poetry in action...even though it was an insult😅.. That’s fortunate. It means you may indeed have a frame of reference from which to converse with me. And I do enjoy a good discourse, even if it is with an intellectual inferior such as yourself.”
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I am yet to meet someone as eccentric as him..I like to believe it would be fun though😅
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The metamorphosis of JJ begins in this chapter..It has been a long time coming and it's going to be such a delight to experience!
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Personally what made it riveting for me was the sedateness of the locations .Not to mention the characters are realistic and one can actually identity with them . I like to think am a blend of Alarik and Alex personality wise....that's why could identify with them and why I was Team Alarik/Alex at the beginning .😅
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Yeah..you even indicated so in Gregory's thoughts...He was comparing himself to Andrew ...
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When you started this story , I had no idea where it was going...It was unlike the other stories here....it's only at the end that I finally get the message you were trying to get across...It's a tale about personal growth, friendship and transformation...Alarik,Justin and Alex all go through the three and are in better place at th end..If for one feel like have learnt something and grown along with them.. Thank you...and I look forward to more of your work
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You guys really won the lottery... Our populace is uber-religious...they would fit in right with the Right in your nations..
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Imagine that..!..the situation in the US is not just affecting it...it's affecting us a great deal too here in the global South...maybe even more..Most of my people are even supporters of the views of He-who-shall-not-be-named😏
