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I've really enjoyed the twists and turns these 2 books have brought us. I'm just glad Ethen wasn't the one who was actually having sex with Alan. Glad to see that Jake is finally happy (for now?) and hopefully things work out for his parents. Although if I were Jake, I'd be pissed at them long-term and live my life on my terms from now on. Great story and wow what an ending!
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This has been my favorite chapter of this tale so far. Good for Matt for finally feeling loved and wanted!!! The scene with Aunt Marie was a little weird but it was also endearing and family can be a little crazy sometimes anyway.
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I am speechless for the most part. What a deliciously complicated story this has evolved in to. Looking forward to further developments!
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Thanks for a great chapter!!! LOVED seeing Mom stand up to Cindy's arrogant, holier than thou ass! And I think Henry is coming around finally. I could see Jackson testing, but also getting along with, Scott as his coach. I'm hopeful he shows out at districts and earns that scholarship. I'm interested in seeing how Luke feels being hungover for the first time and also how much he pushes Cindzilla further.
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I'm glad Alan finally realized that Ethen's circumstances were not his fault and is willing to risk his own family's safety to try and make things right. Obviously there are a myriad of questions still unanswered but the romantic in me wants to see things work out positively for Ethen & Jake and for Cody & perhaps Luke?
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The Developing Dilemma
Modified Cub commented on James Matthews's story chapter in The Developing Dilemma
I'm just a mess of emotions over this chapter. I'm having a difficult time processing everything so I can see how Jake, a fictional yet realistic character, is struggling with his emotions. All I can say is wow. -
Jake's parents and Cody are naïve if they didn't think Jake was not going to see if the Ethen on the phone was in fact Ethen. The buildup to their reunion is palpable so I do hope we get some answers soon.
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This plot just gets deeper and deeper! Alan and Colin are such assholes for setting this up. I just can't believe the debauchery. Looking forward to what else happens though.
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Holy crap! I knew it had to be Ethen. I do think Jake needs to at least be honest with Cody if not his parents too. But what the heck is going on? I too am eagerly awaiting further developments! You're an evil genius James... and I mean that in the nicest way possible of course.
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The mystery deepens... seems odd that dad is locked out of files he created and that there's no records... he does work in intelligence though. The letter Jake received is also weird... so basically I'm presuming Colin and Ethen are alive and somehow involved in the CIA or etc.? Can't wait to find out more.
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I enjoyed the story of course although it didn't end how I'd have liked it to, it was still a powerful story full of the teenage drama, angst, love, and hormones I've come to expect from Mr. Matthews.
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For The World is Cruel But You Have Touched My Soul
Modified Cub commented on James Matthews's story chapter in For The World is Cruel But You Have Touched My Soul
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Powerful chapter! Well done
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Such a powerful chapter and even though it drained him emotionally it seems like Seth will find it cathartic to write it down. Where is the blue-haired demon child lol?
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A Warranted Discussion
Modified Cub commented on James Matthews's story chapter in A Warranted Discussion
My youngest bro is a T1D and he's had some scary situations happen so it was normal for Ethen to lose it. Hopefully the guys can get around their mutual attraction without too much going wrong. Maybe Luke can be there for Cody and that will help the situation somewhat. -
Great chapter! Loved that Ethen and Cody were able to spend some time actually getting to know one another. Hopefully Jake is fine. Looking forward to more.
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Great chapter! It seems that Noah's issues stem from his years of hiding his identity and Lil, like Seth and Lia, has figured out a way to calm him down. Good for Noah for giving his asshole brother a taste of his own medicine. I thought for sure Seth was heading towards beating Brock but glad to see he didn't have to. Loving the cuddles and the vibes of this family.
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Great chapter! I hope the guys' relationship endures - JJ needs some happiness and for things to work out in his favor more than it has.
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Friday, Saturday: Kayden
Modified Cub commented on mastershakeme's story chapter in Friday, Saturday: Kayden
GREAT chapter!!! I'm glad that Kayden cleared the air with his grandparents and that they seemed accepting. We can finally see that Trent truly does love Baby Kay. I'm sad this story is almost over but I certainly understand. It's been a hot one for sure. -
Okay so I totally just binge read all of this story so far and I must say I LOVE it!!! Totally looking forward to reading more.
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Great chapter to end an interesting tale. I feel like there are open avenues to explore a second story with these two and their families. Thanks for sharing your story with us. I truly enjoy your writing.
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Only You Can Set My Heart On Fire
Modified Cub commented on James Matthews's story chapter in Only You Can Set My Heart On Fire
Corbin definitely is like a rollercoaster. I don't understand why on earth he thought Leah would stay? The boys' hormones got in the way (not that I minded lol) of Troy wanting to wait until Corbin's emotions were in a better place have sex. Great chapter. -
Corbin's performance issues before they moved surely had to do with his emerging sexuality and Leah most likely had suspicions of such especially since the guy at school put those thoughts in her head. He sure knows how to make a scene that's for sure. Mom's lack of acceptance hopefully was just due to the amount of extreme changes the family had experienced in just a few short days. That scene in the bed was getting good and then boom, I about had a heart attack myself!
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Powerful chapter! Matt will be an asset to the center! I hope Stephanie is ethical in her reporting and doesn't take advantage of Matt.
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When all is Text and Done
Modified Cub commented on James Matthews's story chapter in When all is Text and Done
Jerry to the rescue! It was big of him to step in and offer Karen a way to stay in town and support the family. Hopefully Don is gone for good. Corbin now needs to grow a pair and at least let Leah know how he's feeling - she's horrible but she at least deserves an honest conversation. Will it suck? Absolutely! But it's necessary.
