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Billy, The Lake, and That Damn Movie
Modified Cub commented on James Matthews's story chapter in Billy, The Lake, and That Damn Movie
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A truly enjoyable story from start to finish! There are memorable characters and a unique plot to keep you on the edge of your seat throughout. I would enthusiastically encourage you to dive in to this heartwarming tale!
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I have so many superlatives about this story rattling around in my brain that I'm not sure where to start. I appreciate the time and energy you put forth in producing this story that felt at times so real. I absolutely love Jett & Kyle and the rest and am glad I got to experience their journey (thus far - I echo the calls for a book 2!). You have a gift for storytelling and I appreciate the ways you worked in so many themes - suspense, comedy, drama, romance! And the ER character names were a great creative touch. I am in awe of your talents and applaud you for sharing this with us all. Much love!
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Chapter 150 Smile and Think of England
Modified Cub commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 150 Smile and Think of England
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Great chapter! I always look forward to reading more of this story!
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What a chapter! I went through various emotions and tried to read slowly as to savor it. My heart was pounding when Bruce got shot (and as I stated in a comment on an earlier chapter I'm not an animal person) and I thought for sure he was dead. I'm glad that Kim will finally get closure and that everyone is on the mend. And congrats to our guys who finally professed their love - I suppose a near-death experience like that makes you really appreciate what you almost lost. A tremendous story!
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Excellent chapter...hopefully Simon/JJ gets some more good things coming his way.
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Excellent chapter - the tension was palpable!!! As long as we get a HEA ending, I'm content to wait until Tuesday if I must. Good for Nikki in finally contributing something.
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Wow, just wow! I really can't conjure up anything else to say... what a twist! Great writing.
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Ha! I could somehow "feel" that a cliffhanger or something bad was gonna happen as the chapter unfolded. I don't know why just an ominous feeling. Hopefully Jett & Bruce will come to the rescue! Kim definitely didn't need any more trauma but life's like that sometimes. Great chapter!
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Another powerful but impactful chapter! Some drama between the guys was bound to develop at some point but man that was tough to read. I'm glad they worked it out though! Love these guys! Stay safe in Florida!
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Great beginning and I'm looking forward to more of Dale & Hunter and the gang! The twins sound precious.
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Wonderful chapter full of sugar and spice and everything nice!!! The opening was particularly... nice. The splinter story had me rolling and the Christmas Eve chaos brought back sweet memories of time spent with my family at my grandparents. Jett's gift to Kyle was a nice touch. Loving those 2 more and more!
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Powerful chapter! I hate what the "pastor" is putting Charles and now Matt through. It's probably more common than we think. Hopefully Ricky and his family will help Matt escape the hell he's about to endure.
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Great fun chapter! Looking forward to seeing #Boah develop and the Christmas Eve chaos ensuing!
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Great chapter! What a way for Bo to arrive home for the holidays! Excited to see the shenanigans unfold!
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🔥🔥🔥 whoa, is it hot in here or is it just me!? A much-needed collaboration that was off the charts good! What a chapter!
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Poor Matt! Know wonder he hates his parents!
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Easily one of the best stories I've ever read on this or any site! Mrsgnomie has an amazing gift for storytelling that grabs you from the start and makes you want to continue until the end of time. This story is addictive and rich in character development, has an intriguing plot that keeps you guessing, and is paced just right. I loved the humor especially and the culinary delights were a nice touch as well. Honestly I could go on and on. This is quite simply a masterpiece and I'm honored to have gotten to enjoy it as thoroughly as I have.
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Epilogue - 4 Years Later in Mexico
Modified Cub commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Epilogue - 4 Years Later in Mexico
Totally enjoyed this wonderfully written romance! I'd have preferred 100 more chapters but in actuality the way in which you ended it was appropriate (I guess 😥)and perfect. Thank you for sharing your amazing talents with the world. Now I've got to find time to dive in to some of your other tantalizing creations! LOVED it from start to finish!- 79 comments
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Thurs, Fri: Kayden and Trent
Modified Cub commented on mastershakeme's story chapter in Thurs, Fri: Kayden and Trent
Poor Baby Kay! I knew Maggie was up to some bullshit but wow, I didn't see that coming. Jacob is a POS and I too thought Trent might kill Jacob or rape him even. I think Kayden will definitely need some counseling for sure. I'd love to see Trent crash the family dinner and I too foresee a very dramatic evening for the family, -
Wow, what a chapter... that's all I can say. Great writing.
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Damn, what a bombshell! I was almost right about Kim being Kyle's mom. I can't imagine how Kim and the 2 others lived through that hell. I loved ER and the Marc Green name threw me for a loop for a minute. Wow, what an interesting plot twist! Great great writing!
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The Anderson's were hilarious and seem like an awesome family. Nice to see Jett & Kyle building their relationship without rushing. Poor Kim has quite the number of issues. Great chapter!
