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  1. Modified Cub

    Chapter 11

    🔥🔥🔥 whoa, is it hot in here or is it just me!? A much-needed collaboration that was off the charts good! What a chapter!
  2. Modified Cub

    Chapter 5

    Poor Matt! Know wonder he hates his parents!
  3. Modified Cub

    AOC 4

    Great chapter!
  4. Easily one of the best stories I've ever read on this or any site! Mrsgnomie has an amazing gift for storytelling that grabs you from the start and makes you want to continue until the end of time. This story is addictive and rich in character development, has an intriguing plot that keeps you guessing, and is paced just right. I loved the humor especially and the culinary delights were a nice touch as well. Honestly I could go on and on. This is quite simply a masterpiece and I'm honored to have gotten to enjoy it as thoroughly as I have.
  5. Totally enjoyed this wonderfully written romance! I'd have preferred 100 more chapters but in actuality the way in which you ended it was appropriate (I guess 😥)and perfect. Thank you for sharing your amazing talents with the world. Now I've got to find time to dive in to some of your other tantalizing creations! LOVED it from start to finish!
  6. Poor Baby Kay! I knew Maggie was up to some bullshit but wow, I didn't see that coming. Jacob is a POS and I too thought Trent might kill Jacob or rape him even. I think Kayden will definitely need some counseling for sure. I'd love to see Trent crash the family dinner and I too foresee a very dramatic evening for the family,
  7. Modified Cub

    Chapter 8

    Wow, what a chapter... that's all I can say. Great writing.
  8. Modified Cub

    Chapter 7

    Damn, what a bombshell! I was almost right about Kim being Kyle's mom. I can't imagine how Kim and the 2 others lived through that hell. I loved ER and the Marc Green name threw me for a loop for a minute. Wow, what an interesting plot twist! Great great writing!
  9. Modified Cub

    Chapter 6

    The Anderson's were hilarious and seem like an awesome family. Nice to see Jett & Kyle building their relationship without rushing. Poor Kim has quite the number of issues. Great chapter!
  10. Great chapter! I figured Kelly's parents were behind some of the BS that Mike had gotten in to. Good on Matt for diving deeper! Can't believe this story's ending soon - it's so damn good!!!
  11. Modified Cub

    Chapter 5

    My immediate thought was that Kim has to be Kyle & Megan's mother. Hmmmm, you've definitely got my wheels turning for sure! Great chapter!
  12. Modified Cub

    Epilogue

    A unique story with a happily ever after type ending. Looking forward to future offerings!
  13. Modified Cub

    Chapter 3

    Great chapter!
  14. Our little Kayden is enjoying his independence and is thriving! Love to see it. And everyone around Trent can tell just how genuine he is with Kayden - his transformation has been quite intriguing. Can't wait to see how much Mark grovels to get Kayden back home for the much-anticipated visit with the grandparents! I hope Kayden sticks to his guns and doesn't remove his piercings or move back home! Awesome chapter as always!
  15. Modified Cub

    Chapter 2

    Great chapter!
  16. Modified Cub

    Chapter 1

    Interesting start to this story. I cackled at hearing Jett and his siblings' names - definitely unique. I'm not an animal person but enjoyed the dynamic between Jett and Bruce. Looking forward to this journey. You definitely have a way of capturing your readers' attention and getting them invested and wanting more.
  17. Modified Cub

    Lost and found

    Only 2 more chapters???!!! Now I'm super sad - I'll miss this sweet little family! Great chapter though and I eagerly await the conclusion. Indeed, you are a superb storyteller!
  18. Modified Cub

    Chapter 16

    Good chapter! I had a feeling either Mayson or his defense team would likely pull a stunt but wasn't expecting this! Looking forward to seeing how the trial plays out.
  19. Modified Cub

    Potato Detox

    Great, complex chapter! The beginning was hilarious. I kind of figured some things would blow up between our favorite guys sooner or later as they seem to resort to two-year-old-esque tantrums in their own minds sometimes. It is like reading a whole new book and I am loving it. Post daily if you want - your devoted readers won't mind at all.
  20. Modified Cub

    Fri: Kayden

    Great dramatic chapter! I thought Mark was going to catch them in the act in Kayden's room for sure but it's probably even more scandalous to him that he caught them at Emma's school! I feel bad for Emma - her spirit is likely to be crushed and she had so been looking forward to that talent show. Mrs. Dee is pure evil for waiting until the day of the show to confirm Mark's permission was legit. I feel like there's gonna be hell to pay from Mark's parents if they discover Kayden's been thrown out of his home and maybe the whole family will finally band together against Mark for his actions! I'll bet Ian breaks the news about him and Audrey too. Love this story!
  21. Modified Cub

    Chapter 14

    Great chapter!!! Love how sweet the two couples are and I'm glad Hunter's parents are supportive.
  22. Action-packed chapter for sure and I love it! I actually thought Maggie might be the one since Trent broke off their deal. I'd find it hard to believe that none of Mark's colleagues or coworkers wouldn't at least treat him differently or say something to him about Kayden. I did suspect Trent to end up getting arrested but Chase likely wouldn't have gone down that road since he's trying to rehabilitate his image after his crash. Great chapter!!!
  23. Another great chapter!!! I read it but forgot to comment, so sorry lol. Kayden in so many ways is so naïve yet so compliant to Trent's whims.
  24. Modified Cub

    Coda

    What a fantastic way to end this unique story!!! Thanks for taking us along on Rick's personal growth and development. Loved the interweaving of those fantastic characters from CJ's world at the end - nice touch! I have very much enjoyed this story so thanks once again for sharing it with the world.
  25. A great chapter!!! Loved it!!!
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