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Awe, the reunion happens at last!!! The way those boys reconnected was beautifully poetic. I'm glad Jackson finally called Blake out for the way he flinched and pulled away at the table. Colton made an ass of himself (which surprised no one) and as usual Daisy put everyone in their place. Count me in as a big fan of reading about the hot lovemaking to come! Another masterful chapter!
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Damn, every time I think this story can't get any better, you surpass my expectations and then some! Daisy Bell is a saint with a heart of gold and seeing the difference she's making in Willow Creek is inspiring to say the least! The growth Cash has gone through, the adversity, the longing, has made him prepared to love Jackson even more and to be a fantastic partner to him. The development of Levi & Weston's relationship is so sweet and tender and it's great to see them lean on one another and grow. I can't wait to see what happens next. Another truly remarkable chapter!
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Well, that was a chapter for the books! Maybe it's just me but although the scene with Blake & Evan was hot, it gutted me at the same time! Maybe I'm just naive but I thought the passion and intimacy Jackson & Blake shared was genuine but I guess it's run its course. I guess I'm just down about it. I can see the connection between Cash & Jackson as a life-long true love rooted in their past and that's an exciting path for them to explore. Sorry for rambling I'm just overly invested in the concept of monogamous love I guess? Fantastic writing!
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Hot chapter! Love these guys!
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Jonah's rambunctiousness finally caused a major blowup that I'm not sure the gang can battle against effectively. Some great points were made about the school's responsibilities but at the same time someone has to know this could literally be life-and-death for Jack. I'm glad Nick finally decided to ditch his teacher's pet/good boy status and stand up for him & Jack and all the other LGBTQ+ kids on campus. If we're at the top of the rollercoaster, I hope the ride down isn't fraught with major drama although realistically this is dramatic fiction, so we know it won't all be smooth sailing, especially as it mirrors real life to a degree.
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Incredibly erotic! I'd definitely read a longer story!
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Ironic that the twins were giving Joel shit when they don't seem to have learned to ride either. I knew the coach would want to know where Joel was eventually. Seemed Joel was so close to coming out to Celia - or has she already figured it out? Another insightful chapter @Krista! Enjoying every chapter and layer that's revealed.
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Another masterpiece of a chapter! Again, my emotions were all over the place! I'm with @Seraph28 - I've had to resort to having tissues nearby when devouring your latest offering. You're exactly right @HHP67 - beautiful and heart-wrenching equally!
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The slow burn of this story is torturous but so satisfying 🔥
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"The Man No One Knows"
Modified Cub commented on CasualWanderer82's story chapter in "The Man No One Knows"
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Wonderful chapter! At least Nick's mom cares enough about them to have had the talk! MORE is right! Loving it!!!
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"The Cookout (Part 2)"
Modified Cub commented on CasualWanderer82's story chapter in "The Cookout (Part 2)"
This chapter brought out every emotion known to man for me - laughter, tears of joy and heartache, sadness, disbelief, anger - you name it I felt it. You're such a gifted writer @CasualWanderer82. I'm flabbergasted by Daisy's knowledge of Cash's unrequited love for Jackson - I just didn't see that coming and that alone shows your gift. I now see Cash falling for Weston (hopefully he makes it?) and am cautiously optimistic everyone gets their happily ever after. I have no idea how many chapters are left but for me this has to be one of my most favorite stories I've ever read and I'm a voracious reader. Thank you again. -
What a morning on the pitch! This story gets better and better with every chapter!
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"A Boy Made Of Quiet"
Modified Cub commented on CasualWanderer82's story chapter in "A Boy Made Of Quiet"
What a shitty life Blake endured growing up. It's pathetic kids are treated that way. I agree with @austinbiguy - you definitely outdid yourself on this one -his mysterious demeanor reveals his guarded upbringing and the will to survive. He is worthy of love and has a good heart. He's just got to realize that Jackson is worth the risk and Lord have mercy on him if he hurts Daisy's pride & joy! -
"The Cookout" (Part 1)"
Modified Cub commented on CasualWanderer82's story chapter in "The Cookout" (Part 1)"
My eyes sure were watering during that scene between Daisy & Blake. Daisy loves her Jackson with ferocity and knew he'd been struggling with who he is and even though she had to be disappointed she did what a fiercely protective mom should do - give Blake a good ol' talking-to! I hope Blake takes her advice!- 16 comments
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Entertaining story - unique!
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YES!!!! Glad our boys finally got their magical first kiss! Jack's parents infuriate me! Great chapter @LittleBuddhaTW!
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"Driving Miss Daisy"
Modified Cub commented on CasualWanderer82's story chapter in "Driving Miss Daisy"
I just can't get enough of this story. Love me some Daisy Bell!!! Cash is a great friend to Jackson. Good lord that barbecue is gonna be lit! -
Yay, another great chapter from my @Krista! And thanks for the early release of the last one! At least Joel impressed Colt and I kinda figured Trace would instantly know Joel didn't hit a rock. Joel has to know his 2 worlds will collide more as there really isn't that big of a distance between his old town and new one. I'm curious as to why his baseball coach hasn't visited his old house. Can't wait for more!
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"Ride That Bull, Jackson!"
Modified Cub commented on CasualWanderer82's story chapter in "Ride That Bull, Jackson!"
I'll keep it G rated.... goodness gracious what a 🔥🔥🔥chapter that was!!! I've eagerly awaited the union of those hot Southern boys and did you ever deliver!!! Thank you @CasualWanderer82 for a scintillating story! -
I feel for Nick and glad he sought help. As if the teen years aren't hard enough to navigate, he's had significant emotional trauma that he's not dealt with - which again as an angsty teen is weird since your emotional development is happening and you don't realize certain feelings are having an impact on your overall health.
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Glad that Simon arranged the cafe meeting to clear the air. I too thought that Eli was referring to Rowan as the "he" who died. Interesting to see if that's who it was or if that's too obvious?
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Nick has an amazing group of friends!!! That assembly felt uncomfortable for me and I'm just an innocent reader. Love this story!
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Elijah's a great guy - Simon's lucky to have him in his corner. Powerful chapter!
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First of all, you could never let me down. I enjoy your talent too much. I agree the nuanced interactions helped guide it along. Regardless of how the pace may seem, you're doing a great job of letting the story breathe.
