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Way to go Corbin! Kick rocks Don! Great chapter!!!

The differences between Don and Jerry are striking. Jerry loves his son unconditionally and will do anything to protect him - probably due in part to having lost his wife - he doesn't want to lose his son too. Mom's admission pisses me off - so if Don wasn't such an ass she'd have never told Corbin that he has a different father?! Jerry is right though - it's not fair for Troy to invest so much in Corbin only to have him go back to canoes. Corbin definitely needs to be done with Leah and send her packing. Although he loves Zoe I think he knows the right thing to do is press charges against his abuser!

Powerful chapter! Corbin's rant was bound to happen and it's horrible that his family seems so detached from reality and unable to see his cry for help. Glad he finally admitted how he felt to Troy and that Troy and his dad are willing to give him time with them so things can simmer down. The family needs counseling at the least.

I read the first chapter to see if I was intrigued enough to continue but wow this chapter definitely has me hooked. Looking forward to the developments!

Great chapter! Good to see that JJ has found a potential first actual boyfriend! Looking forward to seeing how it develops!

We all knew dear old dad was gonna lose it and go postal on Corbin at some point and while I see his mother's concerns as valid there are ways to make a living without being abused or to have to live in constant fear. And by torching Corbin's most prized paintings the family should see the old dude is mentally unstable to say the least. I see Corbin staying on with Jerry and Troy but not before having a big breakup fight with Leah and tearing his family further apart.

I LOVE this story and can't ever get enough so thank you for the update! I see where Jackson's coming from in not wanting to be the face of the GSA yet the counselor had a point in that he's obviously revered by his peers or everyone wouldn't have went along with the prank. What's sad is that Cindzilla thinks that Jackson has changed Luke but Luke has actually just decided to be more of a regular teenager and wants to experience the things his peers have throughout their formative years. For Luke the night was probably quite fun although he'll likely blow up once he feels what a hangover is like with his mother hovering over him lecturing him and if she says things about Jackson he might just lose it and just really let her have it. The party was fun although I thought Luke or Derek were gonna expose the guys' relationship to BFA and Conner which would have had a more likely devastating effect on Jackson's plans to stay in the closet. The final scene was emotional for Jackson and he's a momma's boy for sure - which I adore. At the end of the day we all want to be comforted by someone who loves us and after Cindy's latest scene it's no wonder that he needed Mom.

What a family dinner! Trent certainly knows how to make an impression! But Mark certainly escalated things and it's a wonder he didn't have a heart attack. What adult acts like that - especially in front of his parents. I think the grandparents were accepting of Trent so far and Mark definitely wasn't going to like having to explain why Kayden wasn't living at home! Explosive chapter that we've been building towards and you delivered! Can't wait to see what happens next!

What a beautiful chapter! As you typically do, it was full of laughter, sage advice from Mum, and the loving thoughts of good ol' Roman. The vows were heartfelt and the way they both teared up brought joy and pride to my heart. Great job!

Awe, how sweet! Our boys are getting hitched!!!

Loved it!

That's an epic prank!!! Great fun chapter!

Amazing finish to part 1 and I eagerly await part 2! Such a great story! Thanks for sharing it with us and I love how engaged you are with your readers!!!

Great chapter! Lots of detailed information but it sounds like the future is bright for the whole family. Glad they sacked Ryan - he came off as creepy to me and his backstory seemed off.

Spicy chapter! Joey desperately doesn't want to let Jack down - I think that's why he immediately told him about Orca's advances. It sucks about the bullying at school but unsurprising that it goes on without any real involvement from the administrators.

The way in which you captured Belle's thoughts and feelings was captivating and had me tearing up. She's got a great support system no matter what happens. Best wishes and good health to you and your boyfriend! I appreciate your writing talents.

It was nice for Dad to take Joey out for breakfast and to have a heartfelt talk with him. It took Ryan's backstory for him to connect the dots a little but still he supports and loves Joey no matter what and is rooting for him and Jack. I don't know why Joey is so shaken by Jack finding out about him and Roman unless more happened that hasn't been revealed? Great chapter!

Joey's insecurity and inability to see things rationally are a weakness but he's a teenager and we all were there and acted in much the same way probably. Roman is indeed the best. I see where Joey's coming from regarding his pay but he does get taken well care of by his parents and so while he thinks it sucks it's actually quite even with the other workers.

Whew, that dream at the beginning was 🔥!!! Glad to see that Joey's mom eased up on him regarding the punishment. It seems that the brotherly bonding was innocent although it seems odd that Joey didn't realize his sexuality was leaning in the male-male direction. Maybe Ro's bi-curious? Nice of the family to surprise Joey by bringing Jack home a day earlier but I'm sure the honeymoon phase will end at some point. Great chapter and nice to see some happiness again!

It's sad to see how Shaun's parents are treating Joey especially considering how close they were but it does appear that they'll make Joey out to be the reason why Shaun did it. It's rather mature of Joey to not attend the funeral although I think he'll regret it at some point. Good to see Joey & Dean bond and really embrace their feelings rather than bury them. Dean's mom is hilarious and was a bright spot in this dark but necessary chapter. Great writing as always!

When I saw the chapter title I immediately thought Shaun was gonna hurt Jack or Joey or maybe embarrass Joey in some major way, but not suicide. Although the numerous missed calls and texts to Joey did ring alarm bells. As well as his messages to Dean. It's tragic and obviously Shaun had much deeper problems than just being jealous of his best friend getting with his crush. His injuries and the treatment by his "parents" didn't help the situation either. I love Orca! He's a refreshing character and maybe will fit in to the friend group - not as a replacement for Shaun obviously - but maybe someone else Joey can turn to for support and friendship. Another strongly written chapter full of various emotions. Bravo Mr. Matthews.

So Shaun was pining for Jack for 2 years and didn't have the balls to pursue him and when Joey lets things happen naturally and Shaun sees how happy J&J are, along with his physical altercation with Joey and having to come out to his parents (or the school outing him in a letter), he literally lost his mind. I think Joey was justified in the way he reacted to Shaun's pathetic excuses for his lies and although he needs to tame his own temper at least Joey had enough foresight to not react physically again. Good on Roman for having Joey's back again. Superb writing and wow the rollercoaster ride continues - I hate rollercoasters but this one is too good not to enjoy!

Ah, the classic cliffhanger. Shaun's parents are disappointing to say the least. Toby seems like a good friend. Joey needs to speak up to his parents - I think he works pretty hard for a high school student. Loving Roman's character more and more. Great chapter!

I can see how Jack might be hesitant to be with Joey if he thinks he'll be violent towards him if they have even a basic argument. Joey's mom is a great one and although teenagers often take mom's for granted in their adolescent years I hope he'll eventually realize just how much she loves and cares for him. Shaun is pining for Joey and has been for years in my opinion. I'm rooting for Joey & Jack.

What a revealing chapter! Shaun has lost his mind. Great chapter!