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Great chapter! It seems that Noah's issues stem from his years of hiding his identity and Lil, like Seth and Lia, has figured out a way to calm him down. Good for Noah for giving his asshole brother a taste of his own medicine. I thought for sure Seth was heading towards beating Brock but glad to see he didn't have to. Loving the cuddles and the vibes of this family.
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Great chapter! I hope the guys' relationship endures - JJ needs some happiness and for things to work out in his favor more than it has.
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Friday, Saturday: Kayden
Modified Cub commented on mastershakeme's story chapter in Friday, Saturday: Kayden
GREAT chapter!!! I'm glad that Kayden cleared the air with his grandparents and that they seemed accepting. We can finally see that Trent truly does love Baby Kay. I'm sad this story is almost over but I certainly understand. It's been a hot one for sure. -
Okay so I totally just binge read all of this story so far and I must say I LOVE it!!! Totally looking forward to reading more.
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Great chapter to end an interesting tale. I feel like there are open avenues to explore a second story with these two and their families. Thanks for sharing your story with us. I truly enjoy your writing.
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Only You Can Set My Heart On Fire
Modified Cub commented on James Matthews's story chapter in Only You Can Set My Heart On Fire
Corbin definitely is like a rollercoaster. I don't understand why on earth he thought Leah would stay? The boys' hormones got in the way (not that I minded lol) of Troy wanting to wait until Corbin's emotions were in a better place have sex. Great chapter. -
Corbin's performance issues before they moved surely had to do with his emerging sexuality and Leah most likely had suspicions of such especially since the guy at school put those thoughts in her head. He sure knows how to make a scene that's for sure. Mom's lack of acceptance hopefully was just due to the amount of extreme changes the family had experienced in just a few short days. That scene in the bed was getting good and then boom, I about had a heart attack myself!
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Powerful chapter! Matt will be an asset to the center! I hope Stephanie is ethical in her reporting and doesn't take advantage of Matt.
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When all is Text and Done
Modified Cub commented on James Matthews's story chapter in When all is Text and Done
Jerry to the rescue! It was big of him to step in and offer Karen a way to stay in town and support the family. Hopefully Don is gone for good. Corbin now needs to grow a pair and at least let Leah know how he's feeling - she's horrible but she at least deserves an honest conversation. Will it suck? Absolutely! But it's necessary. -
Way to go Corbin! Kick rocks Don! Great chapter!!!
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The differences between Don and Jerry are striking. Jerry loves his son unconditionally and will do anything to protect him - probably due in part to having lost his wife - he doesn't want to lose his son too. Mom's admission pisses me off - so if Don wasn't such an ass she'd have never told Corbin that he has a different father?! Jerry is right though - it's not fair for Troy to invest so much in Corbin only to have him go back to canoes. Corbin definitely needs to be done with Leah and send her packing. Although he loves Zoe I think he knows the right thing to do is press charges against his abuser!
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One Day I'll Fly Away
Modified Cub commented on James Matthews's story chapter in One Day I'll Fly Away
Powerful chapter! Corbin's rant was bound to happen and it's horrible that his family seems so detached from reality and unable to see his cry for help. Glad he finally admitted how he felt to Troy and that Troy and his dad are willing to give him time with them so things can simmer down. The family needs counseling at the least. -
Someone Out And Proud
Modified Cub commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Someone Out And Proud
I read the first chapter to see if I was intrigued enough to continue but wow this chapter definitely has me hooked. Looking forward to the developments! -
Great chapter! Good to see that JJ has found a potential first actual boyfriend! Looking forward to seeing how it develops!
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We all knew dear old dad was gonna lose it and go postal on Corbin at some point and while I see his mother's concerns as valid there are ways to make a living without being abused or to have to live in constant fear. And by torching Corbin's most prized paintings the family should see the old dude is mentally unstable to say the least. I see Corbin staying on with Jerry and Troy but not before having a big breakup fight with Leah and tearing his family further apart.
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I LOVE this story and can't ever get enough so thank you for the update! I see where Jackson's coming from in not wanting to be the face of the GSA yet the counselor had a point in that he's obviously revered by his peers or everyone wouldn't have went along with the prank. What's sad is that Cindzilla thinks that Jackson has changed Luke but Luke has actually just decided to be more of a regular teenager and wants to experience the things his peers have throughout their formative years. For Luke the night was probably quite fun although he'll likely blow up once he feels what a hangover is like with his mother hovering over him lecturing him and if she says things about Jackson he might just lose it and just really let her have it. The party was fun although I thought Luke or Derek were gonna expose the guys' relationship to BFA and Conner which would have had a more likely devastating effect on Jackson's plans to stay in the closet. The final scene was emotional for Jackson and he's a momma's boy for sure - which I adore. At the end of the day we all want to be comforted by someone who loves us and after Cindy's latest scene it's no wonder that he needed Mom.
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Wed, Thurs, Friday: Trent
Modified Cub commented on mastershakeme's story chapter in Wed, Thurs, Friday: Trent
What a family dinner! Trent certainly knows how to make an impression! But Mark certainly escalated things and it's a wonder he didn't have a heart attack. What adult acts like that - especially in front of his parents. I think the grandparents were accepting of Trent so far and Mark definitely wasn't going to like having to explain why Kayden wasn't living at home! Explosive chapter that we've been building towards and you delivered! Can't wait to see what happens next! -
What a beautiful chapter! As you typically do, it was full of laughter, sage advice from Mum, and the loving thoughts of good ol' Roman. The vows were heartfelt and the way they both teared up brought joy and pride to my heart. Great job!
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Awe, how sweet! Our boys are getting hitched!!!
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That's an epic prank!!! Great fun chapter!
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Epilogue - For All Our Saturdays
Modified Cub commented on James Matthews's story chapter in Epilogue - For All Our Saturdays
Amazing finish to part 1 and I eagerly await part 2! Such a great story! Thanks for sharing it with us and I love how engaged you are with your readers!!! -
Great chapter! Lots of detailed information but it sounds like the future is bright for the whole family. Glad they sacked Ryan - he came off as creepy to me and his backstory seemed off.
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He'll Always Have Paris
Modified Cub commented on James Matthews's story chapter in He'll Always Have Paris
Spicy chapter! Joey desperately doesn't want to let Jack down - I think that's why he immediately told him about Orca's advances. It sucks about the bullying at school but unsurprising that it goes on without any real involvement from the administrators. -
The way in which you captured Belle's thoughts and feelings was captivating and had me tearing up. She's got a great support system no matter what happens. Best wishes and good health to you and your boyfriend! I appreciate your writing talents.
