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Chapter 10 - Our Story
Modified Cub commented on ChromedOutCortex's story chapter in Chapter 10 - Our Story
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Magnificent!!!
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What a complex, beautiful, deep, sensual, tear-jerker this story was! I am in awe of your mastery @Nuno R.F.C. Rendeiro ! I had to read this chapter twice because of the tears rolling down my face. Magnificent!
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"Cartography Of Skin"
Modified Cub commented on Nuno R.F.C.R's story chapter in "Cartography Of Skin"
WOW, what a chapter! I can hardly find the right words to describe the need, the want, the unbridled passion, the release of all that pent-up tension, leading to seismic explosions! Whether they choose to accept it or not, they're inseparable. Seems like it's time for a heart-to-heart with Camille! -
Just binged this entire story and while supernatural stories aren't something I'm usually in to, this one was fantastic!
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Another masterful chapter! We had lots of background on Elias's upbringing, the disconnecting from his mother, Camille's confrontation and realization that there wouldn't be reconciliation, Marcus's insight regarding Elias's change of demeanor, and Rowan returning as predicted, but with the henley Elias didn't even know was missing. Rowan's tear-streaked face and his admission that "I can't smell you on it anymore" was quite the declaration and had me holding my breath.
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Chapter 10: Belonging
Modified Cub commented on Soren Kraft's story chapter in Chapter 10: Belonging
Just binge read this story and it was so precious and romantic and felt organic, not rushed or dramatic, and I thoroughly enjoyed it! Thanks for sharing! -
Jody seems up for trying anything! It'll be interesting to see if he reaches his limit or continues to push past what he once thought was impossible.
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WHAT A CHAPTER!!! I don't quite even know what I just read but it was needy, chaotic, cathartic, full of wanting and hesitation, and anger and the releasing of pent-up feelings, in the absolute best way. Goodness. I'm going to re-read it now and take a breath. Masterful to say the least.
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More incredible sex for Jody!
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Thank you @Lozza and @lthrchopper ! And great observation @drsawzall - that could help thaw the mother-son relationship somewhat.
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First, you write impeccably well. It felt like I was experiencing what each man was feeling as though I were them. The vast descriptions of Rowan's scarred body and the ruggedness of Elias's were magnificent! I'll admit the hetero sex scene through me for a loop in the first chapter, but I see it as but a small detail now. I'm fully invested in this one now and can't wait for more.
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Wow what a start! Looking forward to the developing story!
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Opening Night and Closing Thoughts
Modified Cub commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Opening Night and Closing Thoughts
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I can see how Hunter could love Miguel - he's handsome and charming and tender especially when they're alone. Hunter does seem to have a tendency to sabotage his relationships though. Lots of background info in this chapter about the country, which I enjoyed. I was impressed with Miguel's discussion with Hunter's dad.
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Seamen depositing their semen! Jody has great tastes and a penchant for finding willing guys full of testosterone to share with him!
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WOW! More twists and turns! Simply unbelievable!
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HOT night so far for the insatiable Jody!
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"Will It Always Be Like This?"
Modified Cub commented on Nuno R.F.C.R's story chapter in "Will It Always Be Like This?"
An absolute masterpiece of a chapter, ending a story that had me engrossed in from the start! A beautiful, powerful tale of two souls who endured such divergent trauma only to find their true love in the unlikeliest of places and through wild circumstances! Bravo and thank you @Nuno R.F.C. Rendeiro- 26 comments
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Seems like Jody's life in the Navy is working out just fine, and he'll get plenty of sea-men lol!
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"All The Trees Of The Field Will Clap Their Hands"
Modified Cub commented on Nuno R.F.C.R's story chapter in "All The Trees Of The Field Will Clap Their Hands"
A monumental victory for Liam and the future child actors was established in that courtroom. Marina finally got a dose of reality by the judge's epic takedown of her years of manipulation. Liam's indie movie was a smash hit, earning him accolades he probably never envisioned achieving without Marina's oversight. Matteo, glorious, hilarious Matteo, is Liam's manager in a role he was born to do! And sweet Hudson is still there for Liam in all the ways that matter, including a surprise birthday party while running a successful restaurant! Kudos for another spectacular chapter and another sizzling sex scene!- 20 comments
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Great chapter! Hunter is so reckless - I kept thinking something was going to happen at the park. He may think he passes as just another gringo but I'm sure the locals know how to spot someone tied to a "diplomat" quite easily. I was surprised somewhat that Miguel is really into Hunter and that he's a bottom. I'm unsure why - just didn't line up with the vibes but I guess it makes sense. The panic bracelet seems like it would make Hunter more of a target too.
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Damn, what a hot weekend! Hopefully Jody found his new sex-mates!
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Yet another powerful chapter full of... everything! More about the legal wranglings, the interview years later, the quick-witted Mateo and his man, Liam's fierceness towards Hudson's safety, Hudson's calm yet authoritative way of earning a promotion, and finally, more HOT sex! Thanks for another masterpiece in this series @Nuno R.F.C. Rendeiro !
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Chapter 16: Dean feels threatened
Modified Cub commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 16: Dean feels threatened
Goodness, I hate Sofia and Aiden with a vengeance! The levels that they stoop to are absolutely cruel. Please don't do anything to Dean!
