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Chapter 8: The End of the First Adventure
VBlew commented on PrismaFox's story chapter in Chapter 8: The End of the First Adventure
Loved the bath scene. I personally like a changing POV. So we get an idea of that other person’s perspective. Like was Nari blushing from seeing a naked Ben? They both seem to like each other just a little awkward. -
They finally find some alone time together.
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Comedy of errors in communication going on here. Getting home with this beautiful man, Danny is very nervous and the finally work out some understanding. Will they even sleep in the same bed? Not sure they would both fit in a single.
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Q was being quite mischievous in his actions with the family in this chapter. Aaron is quite a character, hopefully he is accepted into the brotherhood, but that may make him Nave, while Jakob is Skai.. I too can’t wait for the explanation of his new friends to his family.
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Chapter 17 - Regrouping
VBlew commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 17 - Regrouping
They escaped the hotel, but just barely. Now tending their wounds. Hopefully something good will happen soon. -
Beautiful beginning, here’s hoping they have a pleasant journey and some interesting times.
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Beautiful story an excellent epilogue. Thanks for sharing.
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Breaking the Chains (Part 1)
VBlew commented on Jack Poignet's story chapter in Breaking the Chains (Part 1)
This is intense. Quite a cliffhanger. The people don’t understand the magic they are using, and it appears it’s going to come out and bite them. Do hope that through all of this the boys survive and are better for it. The Cardinal is a despicable character, but may be the motivator for Jacques to gain a hand to replace his lost one and change their torment. -
Wondering if when they get to the inner part of this place they will find something that allows them to walk in daylight? That would be a great reward for passing all of the traps. these were setup to keep people away from the treasure and or knowledge contained inside.
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Rod Apologizes and Domenico Returns
VBlew commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Rod Apologizes and Domenico Returns
Domenico seem happier after a few days of psychiatric help. They seem to have given him some tools to help him cope, and be open in his sexuality. Hopefully Rod maintains his wanting to be better and be a friend attitude. Maybe he will be able to have a relationship with his aunt. Jake is elated to have his boyfriend back. -
Nari seems not impressed by his status as a young lord. Ben is all bout learning more of this new world and the good knight is happy to oblige. Getting to the castle is another surprise for Ben. He will now get to have something other than pajamas to wear. What is this tree he is drawn to?
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Sad departure, but the beginning of something new for both guys.
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The black wolf is his mate, and the large grey wolf confirmed it. Now probably to not freak Ray out too much, it waited till he was asleep to chand to human form and snuggle. Love this so far.
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They now realize how much they love and support each other. It may be a struggle to be back to his former active self, Rafa has a lot of loving support around him to help him work through this.
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Why Was Solomon Agreeable?
VBlew commented on Tallguyct's story chapter in Why Was Solomon Agreeable?
With Gladys’ training and possibly some guilt will Solomon and Mary divorce? I’m thinking life would be much better for both of them. -
Their bond is more than strong. And with all the sex, getting stronger. What they learned in the library is life changing. Wonder what else they haven’t learned from the books yet. Rory is a better reader than Kieran! Maybe the prince was not taught that much other than fighting? This trip to visit the Fae should be interesting, and piss off Lachlan when he finds out.
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A very nervous Jonah. At least he was not recalled to NC, the judge was not happy with his antics. The way Will asked him to prom was awesome.
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Great chapter. Marc is at least realizing he is partially culpable in the interactions with Adam. Hopefully that will lead to a quick reconciliation. They both love each other and want to be together, but Marc still has work to do. Wondering now what surprises the other side is planning that they are unaware Marc already knows about?
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Rory looking at Desmond sent Kieran over the edge. Rory is his and told him so when they got back to the castle. Kieran was a little aggressive with the fingers after getting Rory all worked up with the tongue action… in the end it worked out. Was the jewelry bond stronger because of the Fae blood? I’m worried about Desmond after his interaction with the lake. Did he get infected with something evil? I hope Lachlan gets his just reward for being such an asshat. Cloudless when an advisor give him good intel. And seemingly very bigoted toward Fae…
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I had to look back and see if the Faro had done something that caused Leo to loose part of his tongue, but it appears this happened before. He at least will be kept alive. Has no idea he is on a space ship.
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That XXX warning was right on. Mike is more than a friend. Making the first time for Art as good as he could. Now on to round two…
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Those must have been massive helicopters. Kind of like putting a triple wide mobile home together. Just instead of trailers they used helicopters. Excited for the guys to spend a night in the cabin.
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Would You Sleep with Me?
VBlew commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Would You Sleep with Me?
Fantastic start. Looking forward to this. I’ve been missing new wolf shifter stories, and here you share one. it looks like the mate is secure behind security in is glass tower….- 25 comments
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Maybe now Adam will have a better appreciation for Marc and what he was doing to try and save his bonded from having to be a part of the war. Grandma know she messed up and Marc explains his intentions to finish and start a “quiet”, private life with Adam. Adam gets to see war firsthand. What kind of ship did they find being built? Now they will own the tech and the scientists behind it!
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Chapter 6: Strange Bedfellows
VBlew commented on PrismaFox's story chapter in Chapter 6: Strange Bedfellows
Waking up having a wolf garden him, Ben gets out of bed. Meeting the knight who rescued them, and gettin to wake lord Nari up. Now we learn he may be a prince? Great light hearted chapter.
