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  1. VBlew
    I really like your writing and having both the Prequel and Sequel here would be good for continuity of the stories. Would give us the knowledge of how the hand came to be. And for sure the Sequel to see what kind of world Alex and Jacques create together.
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    Insecurities

    VBlew commented on empath's story chapter in Insecurities

    Interesting chapter, rich pretentious girls, and boys hiding in the closet. Who is the Wolf’s target? Walter? Interesting to see some of these familiar characters in this new story. Looking forward to where it goes.
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    Nice ending for this part. I agree Marcus needs to go home. Jacques and Alex have an alliance, it may still take some time for them to be lovers, after the torture they went through.
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    Chapter 40

    VBlew commented on KKirk's story chapter in Chapter 40

    Calvin is a lot bolder now that he has come out to his Dad. Curious about why Alan said Fuck, just as Jordan was leaving for work? Is he realizing that he has feelings for Jordan? What will happen waned Jordan tells him he doesn’t want to expose himself at the parties?
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    Great mystery, the defense was pretty good getting him off the murder charges… glad there was enough to get him locked up. That was his undoing.
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    Chapter 2 (3/6)

    VBlew commented on RedMoon's story chapter in Chapter 2 (3/6)

    Seems like they are setting Zorro up for home to get info from Porthos. To avoid seeing him tortured more… shivers from the absolute cruelty of the goldens. Much like what happens in the future, still torturing.
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    Interesting they decided to go out but are disconnected from the people around them.
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    Nice chapter.
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    Chapter 13

    VBlew commented on Albert1434's story chapter in Chapter 13

    Reginald now has his membership card to parliament. The Lord Chancellor backing him should help with the bank audit and apprehending the perpetrators. Reginald is willing to personally cover the theft. That shows true integrity.
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    Chapter 4

    VBlew commented on Josh Aterovis's story chapter in Chapter 4

    Aiden, a very good listener, has taken the time to research Christian beliefs, and what is I. The Bible to be able to refute claims about homosexuality. This should be a great help to Will in the future as he addresses his own coming out and possible dealing with his father. He is an Artist and now has a possible place to show his work.
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    Loved this chapter, guardian Gabriel, against even his own father to protect his mate. Was it just their proximity to Ray that allowed the to shift without pain? Ray did not transition back to human like the others yet, but this was his first shift.
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    Beautiful togetherness, now maybe the guys will be able to be together. There is still something to deal with Marcus. They have tamed their magic. May need some more training, but there I no longer a threat from the others.
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    Chapter 16

    VBlew commented on Mark Ponyboy Peters's story chapter in Chapter 16

    Loved their stroll around town, releasing more of the past, looking forward to their future together, maybe even a trip? It’s an interesting small town, and definitely more gay friendly than 5 years ago.
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    Tyler took his father’s advice again either his best friend. I was right about him knowing about Brandon, didn’t expect him to have actually have witnessed them in the act. Now that’s all out in the open the can go back to speaking in public. Not sure how well Devin is going to treat Brandon as the boyfriend though….
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    Both Alex and Jacques had to deal with inner struggles to get control of their magic, and once they did, it was very different. Now that they are in control the fight is going to be very different, and maybe the lies Caroline told to get it started will have it ending with some better agreement between the magical factions?
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    Loved this chapter, things going well for everyone. The brothers are growing closer. Loved Gray asking Vince about how Peter took his being so hairy..,
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    Christian unknowingly set Miguel on a mission to clear up his past.
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    A Loving Memory

    VBlew commented on Ticklishboy30's story chapter in A Loving Memory

    So, true!
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    Legends

    VBlew commented on Ticklishboy30's story chapter in Legends

    Lovely, three mythical creatures working together.
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    Awesome battle, they are all fighting for their lives and the house.
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    WalteR responded better than José expected. And they each got double deserts 😏
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    Chapter 41

    VBlew commented on P. E. Knapp's story chapter in Chapter 41

    Yes, swift and quick, the corporation deciding surrender was a good option after such a swift assault and defensive tactic. Nice new toy, and it led to some sales to the Navy. With such a small death toll, Marc was less affected with the battle, and returned to Adam quickly. Their friends are now starting families too. Love the bond these guys have. 14 kids is a lot, even having 2 at a time. They have the resources to do it and will be leaving quite the legacy.
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    Excellent chapter, round 2, and Tyler decides he likes receiving better, but is flexible. I love Brandon’s let’s not label it attitude. And it seemed like he was happy that Tyler told his parents. So no hiding their relationship.
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    Some progress, they have food now, and the interview will go live, the boys will be famous, for a little while at least. Still no scientific backup to say if it’s still a dangerous area to come into. So, people are staying away.
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    Wedding

    VBlew commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Wedding

    Beautiful intimate ceremony, and a nice calm reception. Very nice. Now on to the honeymoon.
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