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Did C.O. Get occupied by someone else? Or did his phone die? It’s got Thayer in a mood. Deck needs to pick an offer and soon, or maybe end up like his brother.
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Excellent chapter, Zach was found safe, the people behind the plot to hurt Dante are found. Did they also have something to do with the meeting between Sunu and Anit? Possibly a reconciliation between father and son? Will Dante be allowed to go to the immortal realm with Tani?
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What an ending to an amazing story. It’s a sad thing that exists in society and you have lit it up with a floodlight, bringing many factions together. Looking forward to any other stories you write.
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Chapter 5: A Close Encounter
VBlew commented on PrismaFox's story chapter in Chapter 5: A Close Encounter
Dang, Nari was attacked by the Boar, and there is a mystery knight coming to the rescue. Great cliffhanger. -
Reconciliation at last. Once Roman was able to explain, and they had a mutual dislike for Derek, things seem to really improve. Max the Boy Scout? How would he explain condoms and lube in the chair to Emma if she found them on a visit? 😂 The sex was amazing, now some sleep, and waking up together, so no more misunderstandings!
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I sense a road trip coming up…
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That was a quick save for Nari grabbing Ben before he went off the cliff. Now heading to Nari’s home.
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Patience seems to have paid off, hopefully. Maybe the guys can find a way to help the Dine since they are technically part of the tribe.
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A Dance of Death and Other Revelations
VBlew commented on Jack Poignet's story chapter in A Dance of Death and Other Revelations
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Chapter 5 - Roses and Violets 5.2
VBlew commented on RedMoon's story chapter in Chapter 5 - Roses and Violets 5.2
Interesting chapter with Richter taking Aether to the ball. Interesting room design. The learning of other wolves, and a dog. The part about Aether making his own drinks at the bar was interesting, no bartenders here? Richter also realized that the music was letting his guard down. -
Luis is a terrific father, and very open and loving with his son. Definitely going to be fireworks if Matt has to use that prepared speech…
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Chapter 2: Trouble in Gael and Carlos' perfect lives
VBlew commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 2: Trouble in Gael and Carlos' perfect lives
Gael needs to get away, what will the father do to him if he finds out??? Lying by omission is just as bad as outright lying Carlos. -
Chapter 1: Beyond the Bathtub
VBlew commented on PrismaFox's story chapter in Chapter 1: Beyond the Bathtub
Through the bathtub instead of through the wardrobe… interesting transition between worlds. Looking forward to this story. -
Fun story about getting over heartbreak.
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This was an amazing chapter pulling a lot of pieces together. There is so much more that can be told, and you’re already at an epilogue? Maybe some spinoff stories?
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This bond is powerful. In the vision Rory pulls Kerian back from the dead, but what is the cost going to be… “The bond is still there” statement seems like they may have been apart for a while. Lachlan is a total asshole. Seemingly knowing how powerful the bond can be, making them stay apart is just cruel. Or maybe he thinks they’ve already had sex, because they have spent the last few nights together.
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Chapter 7: Sun, Surf, and Strife
VBlew commented on FV2112's story chapter in Chapter 7: Sun, Surf, and Strife
We find out Desmond may be having a physical reaction to Bryan, and he is open minded about gay topics like gay marriage. -
Interesting background story… so much to process and so many questions. Does Nate still kill his father? What about the woman? Drug addict? Are they Caleb’s parents. What caused Nate to run, and keep running?
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As bad as it was for James to break up with him, the get some closure. Now he is free to pursue a relationship with Will. Hopefully the repercussions fro leaving without telling anyone will not be too bad. He does have a loving family now.
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This is all from Marc’s perspective, and his explanation makes sense from a self preservation rationale, he is hurting Adam by not even talking with him. Hopefully Adam will get some tutoring on what it means to be a spacer, and they will be able to be together in the future. Maybe Hugo being with Marc will speed the healing. We’ve seen what I believe is Marc and Adam together in the future in a vision, so I have hope that this works out.
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For clarification, I just meant Desmond taking Rory away from the castle for the time the party was happening, to distract him as a friend.
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They are getting along better, even some tenderness from Kerian before Desmond interrupted them. This “engagement” party is tearing up Rory, he does need to learn to speak up, but there probably isn’t anything he could do anyway. Maybe Desmond will take him away? I think this is all going to blow up on the king for hiding Cian’s will of having the boys be together. If Rory is Fae, will they be able to train him to focus his magic?
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Maybe their bond will save them. Scarlett is such a b-tch, thinking she could even be princess…. Rory is very strong, internally. Does he possibly have Fae heritage? He definitely has strong untamed magic abilities. Rory had never had etiquette lessons so, had no clue about the utensils, and his instructor leaves a lot to be desired. The party will be interesting. Wonder if Kerian will be able to go through with the charade?
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Thanks for the refresh, I went and reread it all. Wondering if the negative images Kieran dreamed were things were from Oeus? That death scene seemed like it was missing additional context. Looking forward to more.
