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Ewww! He Touched Your Junk?
VBlew commented on Jack Poignet's story chapter in Ewww! He Touched Your Junk?
I had a feeling the hand was still in Alex, now for Jacques to retrieve it and make good use of it. I took another closer look at the cover and just noticed that the left hand on Jacques is not quite connected. This was an interesting chapter with understanding more of what powers they may have. With Solomon with Alex and Marcus, they should be ok at the mall. -
Love the start, they are interested in each other, have similar likes in being out in nature. Looking forward to where they go.
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Loved the push and pull, all of the pomp and circumstance. These guys make an awesome working couple, but they need some alone time, they have yet to have. Maybe tonight?
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That was some interesting play with the sounding rods. I didn’t know they went that far in. Interesting prostate massage. Scott wants a Prince Albert too?
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Glad the mystery is revealed, now Jordan can get on with healing. Maybe even surf again. Joshua is being a good friend, and there are more coincidences happening here. Did Joshua’s family have a place in the area too? Thinking if the did, it was probably sold after the death of Adam. Cameron know he is loved and Adam was the past.
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Chapter 7 Reading Jane Austen
VBlew commented on JLynch's story chapter in Chapter 7 Reading Jane Austen
Well now. Lindy seems to be the gambling connection, and we know she brought out the deceased. C.O.’s cover for that night is blown by the Agent, now Thayer has questions…. -
Did The Devil Make Me Do It?
VBlew commented on Tallguyct's story chapter in Did The Devil Make Me Do It?
It’s good the boys spoke up, so that Tom could talk with Matt about the sexual things he was seeing and doing. It’s a much better approach to learning than what he was previously taught. -
They managed this year and are planning the next. It’s been a very entertaining journey with Ralph coming into his own. Great ending on an upbeat looking forward view. Well done.
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Some fun banter. Both feeling more intimate.
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Chapter 7 - Roman POV part 2 & Ben Epilogue
VBlew commented on JJQuinn's story chapter in Chapter 7 - Roman POV part 2 & Ben Epilogue
Wow, that was amazing…. I don’t like how Roman left without saying something… and Ben did call him out on that… Bali sounds amazing. Looking forward to the next book. -
Sounds like a sacred mountain. Maybe a place for David to build a home, as long as the trees are willing.
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Terrific humorous ending. So that wraps up the parents and children. Loved the series.
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Everything around them is moving at faster than light speed, and Marc and Adam are taking their time to get to know each other. It’s like two princes joining their kingdoms into a larger one. It keeps getting more interesting. Adam has some self-doubt about what he is bringing to the relationship, but Marc assured him, he himself was enough. Will be interesting to see what happens when their dreams of their mate becomes reality.
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Be Careful What You Wish For
VBlew commented on Wombat Bill's story chapter in Be Careful What You Wish For
Scott is not a caring person. He just wanted sex, and didn’t really appreciate who he invited home with him. Joshua did good to leave him hanging. The fantasy didn’t match the reality. -
That stupid Leviticus quote is always taken out of context to control people’s beliefs. Unfortunately Matt has lived a very sheltered life to this point.
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This was an interesting self guided tour. The narration for guide training they received was better than the guides explaining at the previous site. I had a brief thought about the evil skinwalker at the beginning, and got so involved in the plot that when it made an appearance it was a surprise. The guys did what they needed to protect themselves and the parents. Now for the fallout. Hopefully the parents are accepting and will keep their gifts secret.
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Loved the part about this being real life and not an HBO show. It’s getting interesting.
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This appears to be a wonderful new world to explore. Looking forward to reading it all.
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Seems like something magical is in the air, and it affected his work today.
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Chapter 30: A love that heals. A journey complete
VBlew commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 30: A love that heals. A journey complete
That was an explosive ending chapter! Pun intended. Glad for the HEA with all of those couples together. Thanks for this intriguing story. -
Can the both survive in brackish waters? Or is this an impossible boundary? I don’t think freshwater beings can survive saltwater for long. Interesting background about being a traveler, and now wanting to settle down.
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Great chapter, the guys just happen to befriend and save a young man from killing himself, and then Jordan recognizes him as the younger brother of his own “friend” who was killed in a shark attack. Now we know why he was so reluctant to go to this place… hopefully it will bring some healing for both of them. The coincidences in this story are very compelling.
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That was some crazy flying. Who did they rescue? And who are they meeting and why the need for formal dress? Looking forward to the next chapter?
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Chapter 3 We’re Gonna Be Here Awhile.
VBlew commented on JLynch's story chapter in Chapter 3 We’re Gonna Be Here Awhile.
Still trying to figure out who the victim is. And was the killer sneaking up on C.O. ? Or was it someone else, does he remember? Thayer is one horny dude… -
Funny that the intent particle bounced off the armor…. Maybe it will need to wait till bedtime? Sounds like it was aiming for the heart, not the head. Would love to read more.
