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Welcome back to this story. The beginning of the treatment, the house progressing. A little sad, but family has come to be supportive.
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Excellent story and a cautionary tale to hubris. Viruses don't really care and destroy civilizations. Even advanced space travelers. The two explorers take what they are given, with a vow to share this with others. Not quite the treasure they started out to find.
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Glad the aircraft carrier stood down. They didn’t have much choice with the British ships there. The president can’t accept responsibility for his actions, it’s always someone else who caused the problem. Can’t wait to see what Andrew finds at the CIA.
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Amazing chapter. It doesn’t seem like anyone let Will know that Andrew is physically safe…. That drug was brutal in how it changes the physical mapping. Hopefully it will work out ok in the end. The possibility of that level of gene manipulation for two men to have offspring is very interesting. The retaliation for the drone attack will be devastating. Possibility of a real impeachment happening for attacking a friendly nation. The takedown of Abernathy and the order is going to be interesting. Did the sub disable the carrier? They had orders to do so upon kinetic attack, which happened.
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So he did physically change. That may help with his other abilities too.
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Chapter 51: Worst Timing Ever
VBlew commented on astroguy's story chapter in Chapter 51: Worst Timing Ever
Seems like that upgrade was just in time. Did something attack the ship? With this fuel leak how will they get back to earth? Derek is now on the inner circle of knowing Shawn is special. -
Looks like Alexander got Lyn to the emotional place he wanted so they could have a longer term relationship. Who is going to reveal this to Brad? That should have some interesting repercussions….
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Chapter 17 - Truth Be Told
VBlew commented on ChromedOutCortex's story chapter in Chapter 17 - Truth Be Told
Very good for Dean on finally accepting himself enough to start sharing honestly. The was a hard thing given his background. Kris got the longer story of what he went through, and as another gay man knows what the society expects of people. Also he is setting boundaries so that Dean can think about things and figure out what he wants and needs, but there is a time limit that Dean is not aware of and they really need to have that conversation soon. Before Kris moves. -
It seems like Cory’s experience is very much like Rick’s nightmare…. So hopefully the are on the right trail.
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Chapter 50: Routine Training Mission to an Asteroid
VBlew commented on astroguy's story chapter in Chapter 50: Routine Training Mission to an Asteroid
Wow, it’s like someone knew this was going to happen and locked them in… -
Fortuitus timing on Andrew's decision to break out.. Enrico's men hitting the compound. Now to capture Hale and get him to talk, in addition to destroying the order from within.. Hopefully someone can communicate with Andrew in this state of mind and get him home and help. He has a weapon so it would be challenging to get him to stand down now that he is out of the cage. The tool his mind is using with Jacob as a guide is amazing.. I'm wondering if there is deep training in his mind for possible capture and torture that he got in the military or special services, that is at least keeping him focused on getting out and home?
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This chapter, so much emotion, Elias is out of jail and a free man again, he disagrees with his father about the future. Theo has an amazing offer to attend university, which he is unsure of and Abigail helps him sort out what he truly wants.. To be with Elias, wherever they are. The brutal reality of the wild west in Silver Creek greets them on their arrival back in the area with a descicrated corpse of Theo's mother. That ignites a fire with in them both for vengance.. Hopefully they can deal with the situation and then leave this area and move on to making their own way in the world "Canada". From the fact there is a sequel I'm assuming that is true.
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A Catholic Gay Boy’s Guide to Emotional and Eternal Limbo
VBlew commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in A Catholic Gay Boy’s Guide to Emotional and Eternal Limbo
Ryan is being an ass. Sky is beating himself up over something the has no control over.- 65 comments
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This is the second appearance of a person, with a mom, tinkering with AI. Eitan’s strange behavior, and his prior use of some software that gAI was suspicious of, makes me think he has some part in the attack on Shawn. Looking forward to the space mission.
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Good news on their prior manager, and them getting out of their contract with him, hopefully they’ll also get funds too.
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He is going to have to be more aware of his surroundings in the future. Seems like this military school, has random fighting as part of their culture. But the intent to kill seems like it should be addressed, aren’t they going to be fighting an external threat, not their own people?
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Limits and Confessions
VBlew commented on Littlelovestories's story chapter in Limits and Confessions
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Part 9: I'll Just Watch (Finale)
VBlew commented on StoriesByTroy's story chapter in Part 9: I'll Just Watch (Finale)
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S2 E14: Who Do I Choose?
VBlew commented on StoriesByTroy's story chapter in S2 E14: Who Do I Choose?
Dylan came all the way to Paris, and I don’t see it just being for the photo shoot… they both need to have a conversation they have not had yet, and maybe dinner would be a good time for that… -
Amazing chapter, so much happened, in just a day. Shaun is still way too caught up in his perception of what others think of him. Brian was kick ass defending Shaun from a playground bully. Then the surprise of Quinn… Looking forward to the show and wrestling. Maybe Shaun will even apologize to Quinn?
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Chapter 18: A Place of Love
VBlew commented on Jason D. Karl's story chapter in Chapter 18: A Place of Love
Seems like telepathy is being blocked in this facility. Hopefully Reece is ok. Owen really is brainwashed by the cult programming. But probably better him to be a chaperone than someone else…. And he has 11 powers? -
Theo is a very brave young man. Fighting for his love in a time that it was very difficult to be yourself as a gay man.
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Another amazing chapter. Quite emotional the internal battle that is going on within Will. That king of the North persona is a brutal master at this current time. Hopefully he will retreat once the threat is over and Will can have a good relationship with his children and husband
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Brilliant emotional chapter, they are no longer alone.
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Chapter 43: The Breaking of the Fellowship?
VBlew commented on astroguy's story chapter in Chapter 43: The Breaking of the Fellowship?
It’s interesting, the professor stirred all of this up, and it’s easy to see the correlation between the old AI, and gAI, they are both confused about what they learned. Hopefully some more info will be presented to shed light on their unique situation.
