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How did this person find the play room to hurt Kidd? Glad he got burned starting the fire. Now that they have caught one of the perps, maybe they will find the others.
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It’s very interesting to watch Marcus’ development and the subtle changes happening to him and the awareness of the people around him. Seems like he has attracted another potential suitor. And is missing Ingomar. Hopefully they will be reunited soon.
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Sad, and touching.
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There are much worse places to be banished to, than Hawaii. It is far away, and as the plantation owner’s son, managing the place should prove interesting.
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I wondered if them driving to Audi with the broken window. And did they really have permission to drive it? Seems like they organized a little bit of who the potential suspects are but nothing still popping out.
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Typical romcom comedy of errors. Hopefully they’ll actually finally get to talk at some point, but everything seems to be conspiring against them.
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Wow, one remembers everything and the other remembers nothing. But they found their way back to each other.
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The meeting was simple. The conversation intentional, the offer to walk together was easy. There was no flirting. Just something in common from the walking. Yet, there was more. Looking forward to their journey together.
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Wow, Austin’s background is harsh, no wonder he went into the military. To get away from his father. All of this will play into him being a great Alpha. Xavier wants him to stay, and they finally had sex.
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Chapter 4- Sven's Decision
VBlew commented on BendtedWreath's story chapter in Chapter 4- Sven's Decision
Nos had an interesting day. Someone messing with his things. Reporting Orion to the Dean. Getting closer to his mate, who is starting to believe he hasn’t been with anyone else. The departure of one of his fathers with their new mate. Great writing. -
Beautiful imagery in this chapter. They are off on their first day of travel, and everything is going well. The horses are working well together. The discussion under the wagon was interesting. Not wanting to do penetration and dealing with a messy bottom, great ideas for a device to clean out with. Gords are useful for this too, but probably not readily available where they are. They are learning about frotting by experimenting. A rain shower naked will clean them up and be refreshing too.
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Safely arrived and headed off on a journey with their friends.
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Interesting twist to the story. Levi is lying to his friends first, then buying into peer pressure, getting the car, then being with Casey’s crowd of delinquents. Why did Casey stop him drinking a beer, then let him have the hard stuff? I surmise Casey got him home, but knowing where the keys belonged, is highly suspicious. Levi needs to go talk to the priest, for some good advice.
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Iphigenia was bloody hard work
VBlew commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Iphigenia was bloody hard work
Great opening for Alex’s show, and Neil’s work is going to have a show. Everyone seems to be doing well. -
Chapter Twelve - Julian's POV
VBlew commented on mastershakeme's story chapter in Chapter Twelve - Julian's POV
Interesting dinner. Julian was doing what he was supposed to. Being an emotional support companion for his person. Too bad the family dynamics are a mess. Either Ben or Julian need to call Tessa and let her know what met be coming as a complaint. The girls know they have someone they can be safe with. -
Lucas is hilarious trying to help Declan get with his first boyfriend. Space and Lucas doesn’t seem bother at all by the fact that they actually make it together.
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The thought of being lost, and just moving ahead anyway was very interesting, he did find the trail again. The not letting being lost paralyze him was very good. Looking forward to the meeting.seems like staying in this place a second night was important for them to meet.
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Jasper got jealous of Taylor, but didn’t need to. He got to see Ryan on Broadway for the only time Ryan thought he would be performing… hopefully the get more than a tiny amount of face time.
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Child of the Sun, Child of the Moon
VBlew commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Child of the Sun, Child of the Moon
Interesting dream giving Jack a choice to go to his parents plane of existence. But at the last minute sees the reality of the external conditions, and chooses his friends. With Jack coming back into his body to fight with his pack, the three will be unstoppable. -
Chapter Eleven - Ben's POV
VBlew commented on mastershakeme's story chapter in Chapter Eleven - Ben's POV
The checkin went well, Tessa saw something in the data that maybe she has seen before, and wants them to call her if something changes, not the corporate number… kind of like calling your insurance agent directly, not the claims number which logs the data in their system that can’t be removed. -
Yes, making wooden stakes, sharpening them, and informing where they can best be used to inflict maximum damage, sounds like a great scout outing to me. Especially if the target is Daddy dearest. What does Esca really want Andy for?
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If Shayna wasn’t behind the attack on Mannly she does know who, and she still thinks Jake would be interested in her. This family except for Reed, are all miserable examples of humans.
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Hopefully Sandro will want to talk…. And not show up with another boy on his arm to the party, that would be devastating….
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Christopher’s close friends noticed the attraction to Marcus. Jamie finally confronted him about it. Strange he is going home without saying goodbye.
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Aaron was feeling guilty for Nathaniel getting hurt, because he let his guard down. Xavier was a little upset over Austin being called to be the new Alpha. After reading the file, he leans into him. I am also curious who will be the one to turn him, or is he a latent Wolf, just suppressing his true nature?
