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  1. The fact that the work was deemed interference is interesting. It seems like all of this was public information. If someone knew where to look. Maybe they are embarrassed being caught out of principle. Julian has a right to be upset, but he also had an idea that Oliver couldn’t just sit still and not try to help… Julian is in a very sensitive time for himself. Maybe he will talk with his sister and she will get him to see it was done from love….
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    Fort Huachuca

    The Major was injured, were they wearing bulletproof vests? Glad he wasn’t injured worse. This will be the first time Kurtis has had to get news like this. Never a good thing.
  3. October was a good month for the guys… November is going to be a challenge for both if them. But come December it’s going to be a Merry time.
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    Back

    This seemed like an ordinary time off now back to work.
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    Chapter 17

    Interesting that Noah seems to be the runt of the brothers. I wonder if Noah ever brought anyone else home before? Jackson fit right in. Ingrid didn’t seem to grill him too badly. The pick up game was a fun time.
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    What We Aim At

    We have clearly identified that Jared likes men. We Cade was certainly having a hard time concentrating on the instructions with the rifle. Sable just being his adorable self. They got their first exposure to where meat comes from.
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    Echoes

    Karl needs to find his voice and talk with Maria. It’s growing relationship with Tom is wonderful. It is it is can’t last with him not being honest with himself and with her.
  8. Kind of like Robin Hood. They are feeding the poor. And repairing the house. Getting them through winter. Edward is doing what’s necessary for his people.
  9. I love the premise of this story. Looking forward to seeing what is discovered in the diary.
  10. Oh… is Danny in deep. An apprenticeship, a raise, and possibly a girlfriend, but is that what he really wants?
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    12:21 a.m.

    Caught by a reference to a tree. Now being invited in, even knowing you’ve been there for a while.
  12. The deciphering of the diary leads to some interesting ideas.
  13. Excellent work on Poitr’s part. Is he sneaking out another way? I can’t see him leaving Flynn on his own.
  14. Very interesting chapter, first the conversation with his mother which was different from many others. And then the trip down the rabbit hole, finding information about French law that should be protected the man he is in love with, but the people representing him missed and are dragging him through the painful experience all over again. Will they tell Julian of the email from Oliver? This may be a relief, hopefully…
  15. It seems like Ryan wanted Marcus, but was playing games using Tanner to try and make him jealous. Cameron is way too possessive… that may end up hurting his chances.
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    Chapter 20

    This was a beautiful ceremony of calling and release. The feeling of the grief receding was palpable in the writing?
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    Chapter 16

    Syncopation is happening. The coaches are loving it, it’s winning them games.
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    What Is Love?

    Very philosophical chapter. Marcus loved sex, but so far it was not emotional. Patrick liked it, but seems to be in denial now, and it was very emotional for him. Jessica helped get Sakis back. The conversation with the therapist about the various forms of Love gave Marcus a lot to think about. Jessica has a new boyfriend who speaks Latin, and had no issue with Sakis…
  19. A beautiful ending, they got to be together in the afterlife. An interesting origin story of Jack’o’lanterns.
  20. Amazing. These Vexlings will get to meet their younger selves from this timeline. That should be interesting. Hollis had a tremendous loss with his son being killed. Tweek is an amazing partner.
  21. Great chapter. Road trips with people you like, and or love can be fantastic. The music selection was interesting.
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    Another Wednesday

    This is a good place for an ending to this book… would love to see another one of how their life progresses.
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    Chapter 1 Sam

    Very interesting beginning to this story. Sam had not signed the contract before left so not sure why these people think they have any right to abduct him for their mysterious master….
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    Coffee & Dinner

    Awesome chapter and he needs to get over the economic difference. It’s not a problem to Julian, It seems.
  25. Getting rid of the competition…. I can see what getting creepy texts like that would scare someone away…. The challenge is can they meet in person and have the same kind of connection. This is one jealous stalker. Don’t know that they could even have other friends…
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