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Theo was making a statement with that act in the kitchen. Wonder what is up in the attic? Interesting thing that it was covered over.
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Crazy frat boy antics. Glad Duncan came in before the sharpie writing happened.
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Chapter 7: THE BESPOKE MENACE
VBlew commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 7: THE BESPOKE MENACE
Very interesting twist. Poitr is so confident now. Love the Maybach. -
Seems they were missing each other. Hopefully the waking up together is not a problem for Ash.
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Chapter 6 - Bran the Brain
VBlew commented on Sherye Story Reader's story chapter in Chapter 6 - Bran the Brain
Funny chapter. Nice invented story in a story. -
I love the way you are bringing the perspective of each of these characters together.
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Chapter 9 Your Irresistible Bueaty
VBlew commented on BecSun's story chapter in Chapter 9 Your Irresistible Bueaty
Real actual boyfriends now, no more pretending. Meeting an ex who still has feelings is always hard. Richard handled it well. -
While not tragic news their angry delinquent father is dead, Miles felt he had to leave SF and get to Julian, which will be good for him. Curious like the others if there is any remaining estate with the father’s debts.
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“You Could Just Say Yes”
VBlew commented on Nuno R.F.C.R's story chapter in “You Could Just Say Yes”
Still baby steps for Theo. Still not sure about Ian. Mateo is a brilliant boy. -
Damn bad timing. Their first intimacy in a nice environment and it gets interrupted by an eye in the sky. So it makes me wonder if Kit is the thing that’s being tracked and broadcasting their location.
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Jared needs to make the time to tell Cade about his past, and soon, or Verity is going to and that will destroy any chance of them getting back together. Damn sexy ex got him in trouble, which was his own fault.
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Karl is building a new life with Tom.
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Chapter 8 Next stop, England
VBlew commented on R. Eric's story chapter in Chapter 8 Next stop, England
New tech, brand merch placement, a lot of logistics for their trip. -
Axel is smitten. Jeha is very protective. Moon is a menace, he got away from the police way to quickly.
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Taylor has no gaydar at all… Chris is giving him all kinds of signals. Jason may have too….
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Chapter 3 - A Brief Encounter
VBlew commented on Thirdly's story chapter in Chapter 3 - A Brief Encounter
Why is he being such a coward? Mael clearly remembers him. Maybe there will be some courage to go into the store now? -
Great chapter with the guys interacting with the couples and the boy. I have a feeling children are in their future. Sky always seems to attract curious guys…
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Nick is spiraling. Luke is a complete jerk for doing that to Nick. Completely ignoring him in school. The friends notice something is off. Kit especially notices and does as asked. Since he and Luke are on the football team, I bet there is a confrontation coming up. And yes, I hope Luke gets a bad grade and looses his ability to play. Would serve him right. Hopefully Nick talks with Kit, or at least hangs out with him more.
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The D.O.B. And The Custody Process Begins
VBlew commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in The D.O.B. And The Custody Process Begins
Sorry for your loss. Bernie had a fittingly painful ending. Hope he had life insurance and Loretta gets a big payout, but probably not. The Attorney and the Judge need to get found out. -
Wow, what a change in circumstances for Ichiro. His uncle is a tyrant and sending him on this mission is possibly another test, like the kitten. Is the watch also some kind of surveillance device? The interaction with Notonit is reminiscent of his own past.
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Chapter 8 Winter Is Upon Us
VBlew commented on BecSun's story chapter in Chapter 8 Winter Is Upon Us
This is a great morning after conversation that they had and then made plans for dinner. But I’m confused about richard‘s decision to resign his position. Hopefully that becomes clearer in the future chapters. -
Fascinating, the military not getting needed supplies due to a perceived affront. All of these small changes can have major consequences in the future. Love how this is unfolding.
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Rade wants Shem physically, but seems to have standards. Like not doing it in a bathroom. It seems like a point where they could use the bounty on Rade’s head to infiltrate somewhere.
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That feeling of being abandoned by the person you want is difficult to handle. But he did, and came back to the train they met on and was rewarded.
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Chapter 7 The Approaching Winter 2
VBlew commented on BecSun's story chapter in Chapter 7 The Approaching Winter 2
The secret came out and Tate confessed to why he did it. Progress.
