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They are out to Tom’s family and it went really well.
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Richard hadn’t come out to Stu, not sure why.. and his phone is dead. So if anyone was trying to reach him, they could not. Nicholas’s continued behavior dismissing Richard is for sure not what a best friend would do. In the beginning of the story Nicholas was trying to distance himself, but Richard did not get it… Will be interesting to see the reaction to the self portrait.
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Jillian and Sam make commitment to be together after Sam’s time aboard the ship is done, in 2 months time. It almost seemed as if the Captain was going to offer for Jillian to continue aboard for some more time. But he does have things to put in place on the plantation. He was seeming a little codependent with his new love, and I get that feeling of wanting to be together at the beginning of a new relationship.
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Chapter 11: The Honeymooners, The Hound, and The Hearings
VBlew commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 11: The Honeymooners, The Hound, and The Hearings
This is my favorite chapter yet. The disguises they chose are fantastic, yet their personalities show through, and they speak English to the staff… Mr. Hartley did his homework to get Nigel to do the accounting work. Go attorney Pip. Looking forward to Cecil presiding. Is he going to revert to his 3yr old self? -
This is a fantastic ending. For a moment there at the graveside I wasn’t sure. Everyone except Sophia got a happy ending. Julian and Dean are a beautiful couple. Thanks for the roller coaster of a story. Well done.
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Awakened, as in the book title, is coming, just not how any of them expected. Xavier is hurting and afraid. Why haven’t they mated? Seems like that would be something to spur the wolf in Austin out? Now with them being apart it’s going to just get worse. They love each other and have said some really hurtful things to each other. Hopefully Aaron can help.
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Nos got an apology from Orion, and an explanation about why the guy was such a jerk. Karma got him too, his mate is in this realm and they can’t meet. Nos and Cal are reunited and Cal is very interested, not sure why Nos is holding back, is it trauma from how his biological parents are? Nos is tripping all over himself having not paid attention in class. Now Cal knows this he can help educate him. I don’t see Cal leaving this plane either.
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This isn’t titled in the Killian series, so not a murder mystery? Jake deserves something good in his life. Looking forward to this story.
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I wonder if his dad also heard him when he tried coming out at the same time mother announced the divorce??? Dad is fine with him being gay. Very anticlimactic. Richard should tell Nicholas his dad saw them kissing and see what reaction he gets…
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The world around them is changing, a physical manifestation of the hard choices to be made. First was the extremely low tide, now this storm and a rising sea.
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Interesting that the chap up just up and vacated the flat. Will be interesting if it is being done so that Neil could have the space… the orchestra performing Alex’s work is great news, and a good payday too. Neil really wanted to be with Alex on the concerts they were talking about. Will be interesting to see what Uncle Edwin comes up with next.
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Tyler is jealous of Daniel getting Peter interested in him. This whole scene at the pizza shop is very passive aggressive on Tyler’s part. Peter is not willing to just have sex without feelings, and he has had feelings for Tyler for a while and this request while Tyler is in a relationship with Peter’s best friend is just not kind. Hopefully something good will come of the relationship with Daniel.
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Great chapter, life is moving on. The camping trip should be interesting. Getting the guys from town together is good, although it may not leave a lot of father/son bonding time.
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Chapter 10: The All Is Lost Moment
VBlew commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 10: The All Is Lost Moment
Angelo and Cecil are a great team. The amount of interconnectedness in this is crazy, the accountant Angel is a tool, and formerly Angelo’s father. Pip with his powers back is turning Charlie on, but that will have to wait. Matt is a rock for Simon. They will all survive. -
We’ve known for a while Blake and Ryan were working on the song. It came off beautifully. Hope they get another night together. Having Ryan’s mother, Jasper’s sister and niece there was special too. That whole weather delay must have been excruciating with coordination getting them all there. Hopefully they don’t have to spend as much time apart in the future.
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Chapter 14 The Eyes Have It
VBlew commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 14 The Eyes Have It
Grandma is a very perceptive lady, and wearing pants. For sure she and her friend are in a relationship. And as the boys share their truth they will be accepted. Is the land more than they expected. Is there possibly a mine? Or oil on the land? Depending on the timeframe and location that could be something. And Gran never would have let the father know of it, given how he is. Looking forward to whatever it is.- 22 comments
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So I wonder with this mating if Jack is an omega and will get pregnant? But they have to mate first. And Jack seem all on board this time.
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Chapter 23 ~ Midnight’s Warning ~
VBlew commented on Vcs's story chapter in Chapter 23 ~ Midnight’s Warning ~
Rhett and Frank are getting along well, and maybe dinner will show some more attraction. This was one unwelcome visitor scaring Midnight. Hopefully the cameras picked up something, and the footprint will be a clue. -
So Nicholas only spent a little time with Richard at the dance, kissed him then ran back to his “girlfriend” and kissed her in public to keep up appearances. Right. You don’t get to keep having a nice guy like Richard on the side for long, no matter how clueless they are. Why did Vicki punch Darren? Was he getting to handsy after the kiss? Or was she not wanting to be kissed and fought back. I was hoping it was Nicholas with the black eye, he does deserve it.
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Chapter 9: Obstacle Courses and Office Politics
VBlew commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 9: Obstacle Courses and Office Politics
The Hartley’s takedown of the angels was awesome. Of course Pip and Matt with their kids won the contest. Lynix is a terror in his own right. The ministry will give Simon a commendation for his excellent work with the gremlins. -
Love, Death & Lattes, Part Three of Three
VBlew commented on Boy Mercury X's story chapter in Love, Death & Lattes, Part Three of Three
Fantastic ending. It was Drew who captured the bad cop. And with intention saved Connor from being killed by Danny. Great plot twist.Drew and Connor are both happy working at the cafe and being with each other. -
Love, Death & Lattes, Part Two of Three
VBlew commented on Boy Mercury X's story chapter in Love, Death & Lattes, Part Two of Three
The plot thickens. Connor is an innocent man just wanting a relationship and stumbles into a mess. As clumsy as he is I bet that helps him and Drew in some way. Hopefully Danny takes Rossi’s bait to go to the lobby, or maybe Danny and Prosky shoot each other and the young lovers get a HEA. -
Love, Death & Lattes, Prologue: The Professional
VBlew commented on Boy Mercury X's story chapter in Love, Death & Lattes, Prologue: The Professional
Driver, assassin on the side, Danny has many talents. Interesting beginning to a story. -
Powerful. The change in physiology was different from what they know of other Alpha transitions. Maybe it’s the military training or something that made him a super soldier. With his new strength he can probably take Calder wolf form or not.
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The arrival at the house was almost a non event, it went so well. No more secrets. Will be interesting to hear the Major’s reaction to the graphic novel. He may have gay personnel on his staff. Christmas dinner is going to be interesting.
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