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Chapter 15 When It's All Fireworks
VBlew commented on Grayson Rose's story chapter in Chapter 15 When It's All Fireworks
It seems like Ryan wanted Marcus, but was playing games using Tanner to try and make him jealous. Cameron is way too possessive… that may end up hurting his chances. -
This was a beautiful ceremony of calling and release. The feeling of the grief receding was palpable in the writing?
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Syncopation is happening. The coaches are loving it, it’s winning them games.
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Very philosophical chapter. Marcus loved sex, but so far it was not emotional. Patrick liked it, but seems to be in denial now, and it was very emotional for him. Jessica helped get Sakis back. The conversation with the therapist about the various forms of Love gave Marcus a lot to think about. Jessica has a new boyfriend who speaks Latin, and had no issue with Sakis…
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Chapter 8. What Was Freely Given
VBlew commented on Mark Paren's story chapter in Chapter 8. What Was Freely Given
A beautiful ending, they got to be together in the afterlife. An interesting origin story of Jack’o’lanterns. -
Chapter 29: The Search for Tweek pt. 4
VBlew commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 29: The Search for Tweek pt. 4
Amazing. These Vexlings will get to meet their younger selves from this timeline. That should be interesting. Hollis had a tremendous loss with his son being killed. Tweek is an amazing partner. -
Chapter 2 - Road Trip
VBlew commented on Mark Ponyboy Peters's story chapter in Chapter 2 - Road Trip
Great chapter. Road trips with people you like, and or love can be fantastic. The music selection was interesting. -
This is a good place for an ending to this book… would love to see another one of how their life progresses.
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Very interesting beginning to this story. Sam had not signed the contract before left so not sure why these people think they have any right to abduct him for their mysterious master….
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Awesome chapter and he needs to get over the economic difference. It’s not a problem to Julian, It seems.
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Getting rid of the competition…. I can see what getting creepy texts like that would scare someone away…. The challenge is can they meet in person and have the same kind of connection. This is one jealous stalker. Don’t know that they could even have other friends…
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Chapter 5: Domestic Warmth
VBlew commented on anatta707's story chapter in Chapter 5: Domestic Warmth
They finally get a heart to heart. Even if Adam can’t admit to being a fanboy… and now even more attraction. Wonder what Royr would do with an AI of Adam? -
David was very open about the tragic death of his son. While it was discussed when they were making Lying Low, this hit harder. Wonder if Hector is going to be sobbing as he calls Sky?
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Oliver is learning French by reading Julian’s novel.. he needs to practice speaking with someone willing to be patient with him for good pronunciation. This is something he is doing to get closer to Julian. Hopefully this settles the situation with his dead client for Julian, it’s torture to have to relive this pain all over again.
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Sable has a natural ability to heal, but did it in his sleep. Boars are dangerous and they got unlucky having 2 in the same area. Unfortunately the spores made them have to run away from the area before they could do anti useful with the dead animals. Like cooked meat and possibly made shoes from the hide…
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Great chapter. They are finally talking about their lives outside hockey. Still baby steps.
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Wow, something was definitely not right with Mark. Even with the proper shots, one can catch something that will put you off. We know he lived, but living through it can be scary.
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I keep wondering about the named house that Evan owns but doesn’t live in, if it’s closer to where Cian lives, will they ever move into it?
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Loved the sci-FI short. They got away from the corporate thugs. Now to find a home and continue their work.
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Chapter 28: The Search for Tweek pt. 3
VBlew commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 28: The Search for Tweek pt. 3
Hopefully Melvin gets to Tweek quickly, so much suspense in this cliffhanger, -
Chapter 5: The Net Closes
VBlew commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 5: The Net Closes
This depression is really debilitating for Jonas. Hopefully being out of the city will help. They escaped with their savings. Maybe the estate has gardens and woods with things harvest and to hunt. So they won’t starve. -
Great story about coming out in a bigoted family, Marshall was a great example of positive change.
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Great beginning. Love the banter between everyone. Seems like isolated data was a bad idea, or possibly deliberately done because of the financial impact of the resources on the planet.
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Luke is definitely being flirty, but what does he really want?
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Crazy family dynamics, keeping secrets just to keep up appearances. Glad he sorted it out with his aunt.
