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Child of the Sun, Child of the Moon
VBlew commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Child of the Sun, Child of the Moon
Interesting dream giving Jack a choice to go to his parents plane of existence. But at the last minute sees the reality of the external conditions, and chooses his friends. With Jack coming back into his body to fight with his pack, the three will be unstoppable. -
Chapter Eleven - Ben's POV
VBlew commented on mastershakeme's story chapter in Chapter Eleven - Ben's POV
The checkin went well, Tessa saw something in the data that maybe she has seen before, and wants them to call her if something changes, not the corporate number… kind of like calling your insurance agent directly, not the claims number which logs the data in their system that can’t be removed. -
Yes, making wooden stakes, sharpening them, and informing where they can best be used to inflict maximum damage, sounds like a great scout outing to me. Especially if the target is Daddy dearest. What does Esca really want Andy for?
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If Shayna wasn’t behind the attack on Mannly she does know who, and she still thinks Jake would be interested in her. This family except for Reed, are all miserable examples of humans.
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Hopefully Sandro will want to talk…. And not show up with another boy on his arm to the party, that would be devastating….
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Christopher’s close friends noticed the attraction to Marcus. Jamie finally confronted him about it. Strange he is going home without saying goodbye.
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Aaron was feeling guilty for Nathaniel getting hurt, because he let his guard down. Xavier was a little upset over Austin being called to be the new Alpha. After reading the file, he leans into him. I am also curious who will be the one to turn him, or is he a latent Wolf, just suppressing his true nature?
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Marcus was an ass who needed to be kicked out. Bullying is not tolerated in this space. I’ve needed some Henry time and it’s was well worth it.
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They have told each other their past history and are supporting each other, I think telling the dad about himself could relieve a lot of pressure and possibly work out for the best. This roundup looks interesting.
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Parents Weekend, Book Two of Five
VBlew commented on Boy Mercury X's story chapter in Parents Weekend, Book Two of Five
Matt is a man with an appetite for sure. Just a man magnet. He does work for it with that workout routine. -
Being in love with both guys. If Charlie hadn’t tried to hide his feelings they would have been together, but Alex leapt first.
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Combat is very hard mentally for the individuals in it, and they try not to bring it home with them, but it doesn’t really work. This is interesting in this story about a group of guys building their friendship, while being marines. Some not recognizing it’s more than friendship.
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The Thing About Konstantin
VBlew commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in The Thing About Konstantin
Konstantine was in another of your stories. Sad that it took him dying to admit his love. Beautiful story even with the sadness. -
Part 7: Ghost of Last Night
VBlew commented on StoriesByTroy's story chapter in Part 7: Ghost of Last Night
Not making it weird, right… -
This is the first time Jessica really took them seriously, and Sakis tells them about his history. Even if she wanted to kill him she couldn’t, and he will protect Marcus.
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Chapter Ten - Julian's POV
VBlew commented on mastershakeme's story chapter in Chapter Ten - Julian's POV
Julian is expanding his knowledge, and Orion just added to it, almost a be careful. There wasn’t a threat, you could be decommissioned if you exceed parameters… but it seemed implied. Was Orion considered a free person because Cal paid a fee? They were not lovers but were very good friends. Seems like Ben would want more but has not asked for it yet. It’s only been 3 days… the visit from Tessa looming, and the family dinner. -
Open Evening at the Centre
VBlew commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Open Evening at the Centre
Alex and Neil are good at supporting each other. Hopefully something shows up for Neil to further his art education, he seems quite talented. -
Interesting dynamics with all of these relationships. Danny really does have low self esteem issues, hopefully he will make good decisions.
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Oliver is discovering himself on this journey.
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Justin is a celebrity, that Greg doesn’t know about, that the photographer is stalking. He’s not out publicly and this behavior of not wanting to be kissed in public put off Greg.
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Jasper really seems to be struggling. And he was oblivious to the interest of his PA wanting to get into his pants..,Ryan is missing him too. Ryan really needs to figure out where they can meet. Maybe he and Beth can go together. That would make both their boys happy.
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I also wondered if they somehow got the original statue instead of a replica. Ali spent the night an slept in his pajamas. Did Bastien already know he was there?
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Poitr is in love, and apparently more powerful than previously known. Flynn is safe with Gary. And the whole of Flynn’s goodwill got called on.
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Lovely short story, but left me wanting more of these guys.
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Beautiful writing. They don’t seem to talk a lot. The discussion about the business is interesting. Cian is very straightforward in his communication. Clearing the way about his health status, and Evan responds with his own. The sex is initiated, and Cian need to know what Evan wants, before ho does it. Seem like Evan is at least staying the night.
