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Chapter 1 – My Special Friend
Bill W commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 1 – My Special Friend
Thank you for the feedback and I'm glad you enjoyed this first chapter. I also thank you for your kind words. I hope you enjoy the rest of the story. -
I've not encountered it yet, but it sounds like an absolute nightmare. Of course I've got an ad blocker as well, since some ads have caused me computer problems in the past, so maybe that's what I encountered not just the ads themselves. I hope that format doesn't spread.
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It was a tough choice, but my vote has been cast.
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Chapter 40 - May This Love Always Remain
Bill W commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 40 - May This Love Always Remain
Thanks, Greye, and there were a lot of things up in the air when Josh was shot. First, was the injury serious enough to prove fatal? If it was, what would happen to the kids.. Would one of the biological children step in and help out/take over, possibly Robert Scott, or would they all be split up into other foster homes. Second, was when Josh was going to notify his biological family, since there seemed to be some hesitance there, but that was settled when he contacted Robert Scott. Now the question is: what's going to happen in Book 3? Thank you for the feedback, Greye, and I'm glad you're enjoying this series. Oh, and if you want, you can always leave a story comment or review, not just a chapter comment. -
I was wondering if you can choose the family saga sub genre for another genre, say Historical Fiction or Paranormal, and not just with the contemporary literature genre.
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Can you choose another category, say Historical or Paranormal and still choose Family Saga?
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I went back to edit my Castaway Hotel Series, because I feel that's a contemporary family saga, but I didn't see anything that I could change that would put my story in that category. What would I need to change?
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Yes, Luella has the potential for being a major problem, but the boys only have to avoid her for another year and a half until they graduate. Let's cross our fingers on this one. As far as JTT goes, you are correct. He looked better and was more appealing when he was younger, but isn't the same true for most of us? Thanks for the feedback, Anton.
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In the back of my mind, I wasn't sure if he was trying to kill someone inside the house or possibly trying to cover up a murder, since he was so persistent. Now that I know he did fifteen, I'm wondering if it was just to clear a particular area for a construction project.
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I realize that, Tony, and that's why I've allowed Devin tp go from 5' 7" to 5' 10". I might let him grow one more inch to 5' s 11", and then he'll be the same height as Mac. Thanks for the feedback.
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After two failed attempts, it would be hard to convince anyone that the fire was accidental on the third try. I don't think the insurance company would pay up.
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She's the neighbor from hell.
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Yes, you have to be careful about transitioning into recognizable people, like JTT. and I can't give you number for that shaman, since he's a fictional character.
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Yes, you can vary your height that way, bvut then you become more obvious to other people and then t;hey'll wonder what you're up to. .
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Yes, and even those with limited power can become to feel self important and that they have more power than they actually have. That's when they become dangerous.
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Yes, Luella Parsons wrote a gossip column, that's who I named the neighbor after.
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Thank you, Danilo, and happy Valentine's Day to you tomorrow.
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Chapter 40 - A Nearly Perfect Ending
Bill W commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 40 - A Nearly Perfect Ending
You're welcome, Greye, and I'm glad you're enjoying this story. This book was started in 1998, so I'm glad it doesn't seem outdated and still proves interesting. Thank you for the feedback. -
You're absolutely correct.
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The problem with a skinwalker's height is that he's easier to spot in a crowd, and if he's wearing the same clothes, it might make people question to similarity. You know what they say on many TV shows: there's either no such thing as coincidence or the done believe in conincidence. He's not like Odo from Star Trek Deep Space Nine and can change his clothes when he transitions as well. And the problem with gaslighting is that no only could they make her look nuts, but her claims would drow even more attention to them, maybe sympathetic attention, but it's attention just the same, and someone else, who has known Luella for a long time, might pay more attention to the boys to see if there might be a basis for her accusations.
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That's always a possibility, Al. Let's just hope the boys don't screw up andd give her any more of a reason than she alreadyf has about disliking them. She seems to be one of those people that think they have a little power and some stature in the community and she seems seager to use it, justified or not.
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Chapter 03 – Immediate Concerns Classes started on Monday and the professors began at full tilt, so there was a considerable amount of reading we had to do before the next class met. Some of the professors assigned additional work as well, so we were very busy and had a lot to do. Despite the hectic pace, we managed to remember to purchase the tickets we’d need for Saturday’s football game, and I’m certain Gramps and Pops would have been very disappointed if we hadn’t done that. We
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When investigating 1991 VG, I discovered this is not a unique occurrence. According to the article I read, similar events have occurred many times in the past and they'll probably happen many more times in the future. These objects, however, are usually far too small to be seen or considered a moon, but it's still very interesting.
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I hope you have the strength to do what needs to be done to finally break free of everything you've been addicted to. It's painful enough to reach mid-life and your body refuses to do the things you were capable of when you were younger, or even a few years before, but I'm sure it's considerably more difficult to deal with this crisis when other issues get in the way. My thoughts and prayers are with you and I hope you're successful this time around.
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Was this object actually in an orbit around the earth, or merely orbiting the sun? If it wasn't actually orbiting the earth, then it wouldn't have been considered a second moon.
