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    The Victim

    Hayden and Nathan May-Morelli are a gay couple, and both have been interviewing for better jobs. They were recently hired by the same company in a different state, and after moving there, they find a house that they like and purchase it. However, they end up getting more than they bargained for, and you might be interested in seeing what it was.
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    Chapter 33 S1

    I'm surprised the baby opossums got so far away from their mother. And I believe that wildlife control officer needs some additional training.
  3. If we were to rank words in a list of favorites, I'm sure copulate would be one of those words at the top of the list. Of course, actions speak louder than words.
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    Chapter 33 S1

    I'm glad you enjoyed it, Chris.
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    Chapter 33 S1

    Patience, grasshopper, and all will be explained. And hanging over the cliff isn't a bad thing, as long as you don't fall.
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    Chapter 33 S1

    Yes, Terry, the transitions are getting easier for him, because practice makes perfect. There are a couple more chapters to go on the reservation, but the training doesn't end once they return to the cabin.
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    Chapter 33 S1

    I think you'll be surprised when they boys questions the shaman about the conservation of matter and the shaman replies. Thanks for responding, Danilo, and I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter.
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    Spiders

    In that case, I guess I no longer need to watch the channel 4 weather forecasts.
  9. Bill W

    Story

    I know how you feel, because I worry when someone comments on one of my earliest stories. I caught a few mistakes as I was reading it, but the story itself was strong, so it was easy to overlook those few mistakes. Good job.
  10. Chapter 33 – It’s a Small World In the morning, the shaman wanted me to transition into a rabbit next. The others all did it at the same time, but I didn’t have to watch them to know what to do. I’d hunted rabbits with Devin’s dad before, and I’d also seen them in the fields around my house, so I was quite familiar with their appearance and behavior. Once the shaman had evaluated my effort, he warned me that rabbits had to be aware of the same predators as the raccoons, as well as weasel
  11. If members are removed from the active4 category, due to death or some other reason, their comments disappear as well. And thank you for doing all the reviews for The Castaway Hotel.
  12. That's what the story was for. It was meant to get your heart pumping and your blood flowing. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
  13. If you're looking for a story about a young gay man finding love and romance, then give this story a read. It isn't all happiness and good times, but it will make you laugh and cry as you watch the interaction between Daniel and Alex.
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    Story

    An interesting look at a young gay man finding love and romance. It made me laugh at times and cry at other times, and I enjoyed it. A truly fantastic read.
  15. It wasn't a reminder. I was just stating a fact. But thank you for your support.
  16. And thanks for the review, Terry. It's greatly appreciated.
  17. Thanks, @chris191070, and thanks for the review as well. It always amazes me how my short stories get reviews, but The Castaway Hotel doesn't have even one, and there are 13 books in all. lol
  18. I think that only the boy who recited that little spiel, because at least one of the others immediately reacted and didn't think it was a good idea that he'd done it. I believe they all learned their lesson, and fortunately the things that happened to them weren't permanent. Thanks for commenting, Terry, and I'm glad you enjoyed this semi-morbid tale.
  19. Thanks, Danilo.
  20. Thank you and I'm glad you enjoyed this fantastical tale. There's just something about Halloween that seems to inspire my overactive mind, and I'm glad there are those of you out there that seem to agree with what I come up with, and there are more to come.
  21. Thanks, Tony. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I thought we needed a little head start into Halloween, and this is the first of three stories I wrote for this year. Thanks again.
  22. It will be Halloween in a couple of weeks, and since my friends and I are all 13-years-old, we feel we’re too old to dress up and go trick-or-treating in the neighborhood. The problem is, we can’t decide on what we want to do instead. “We can each sneak a roll or two of toilet paper out of our house and then go around TP-ing the neighborhood,” Mason suggested. “That might be fun for a while, but we’d use up the toilet paper really quickly and then we’d have nothing to do for the re
  23. Five thirteen-year-old boys feel they are too old to wear costumes and go trick-or-treating, so they make other plans. On Halloween night, they all go to one of the other boy’s home for a sleep over. The plan is to pig out on candy and Halloween cookies as they watch a horror movie on TV. The thing is, you won’t believe what happens once the movie ends.
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