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The two armies stood only a hundred meters apart, nervously anticipating the commencement of hostilities. As they waited, the soldiers shifted their weight uneasily from one leg to the other, anxious for the battle to begin and this torturous lull to cease. At various intervals, each warrior also let his sweaty fighting palm drift across the hilt of his sword, so he could test how easily it could be removed from its scabbard. Instinctively, he would continue to experiment with each of his wea
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SOK: 1 - A Destiny Revealed
Bill W commented on Bill W's story chapter in SOK: 1 - A Destiny Revealed
Thank your very much for the feedback and I'm glad you are enjoying the story thus far. As far as any similarities with Global, I'm not familiar with that work, so any similarities are purely a coincidence. As far as the prologue, so were correct in interpreting that I did this to show the utter evil portrayed by the protagonist. -
“Do you really think it's safe for us to sleep here?” Garreth wondered aloud. “I imagine spending the night here is safer than anywhere else within these tunnels,” Quintain responded, while eyeing Garreth’s reaction. Even though Quintain's comment should have answered the teen’s question, Garreth wasn't completely satisfied with the dwarf's answer. “How safe can it be to spend the night here?” Garreth added. “Aren’t we in the Dark Lord’s dungeons?” “We’re not in the dung
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Happy Birthday, Houdinii! Hope it's a great one and may you enjoy many, many more! Sorry I was so late getting this posted.
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Happy Birthday, Paul!
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Happy Birthday, Yettie! Hope it's a great one and may you enjoy many, many more!
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Happy Birthday, MrM! Hope it's a great one and may you enjoy many, many more!
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Happy Birthday, Steve! Hope it's a great one and may you enjoy many, many more!
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Commander Elgin was still groggy from being awakened again, but he got up to see what was wrong. The dwarf military leader was beginning to think that being aroused before the night was over was becoming a far too frequent occurrence, as he prepared to listen to the guard advise him about the current situation. “I was on duty when I noticed a significant glow in the east,” the sentry stated, while pointing toward the brightness. “I thought you would want to know about it, since it appear
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Happy Birthday, DaddyDK! Hope it's a great one and may you enjoy many, many more!
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Congratulation to both of you. I hope you have a great time raising that precious bundle of joy!
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It had been a long day, so shortly after he'd finished speaking with the minstrel; Daimon, Beraut gave in to his exhaustion and finally fell asleep. Unfortunately, it wasn't a very restful slumber, because his dreams were plagued by unanswered questions. After learning about some of the incidents Daimon had reported on, it prompted Beraut to wonder what the various occurrences might actually mean. Beraut was also curious if the situations he had heard about had any implications beyond the obv
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Happy Birthday, TJ! Hope it's a great one and may you enjoy many, many more!
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Thanks for the feedback, Gary. Yes, there can be unstable and evil members of the gay community too, so you must constantly remain on guard. Always be prepared for the unexpected.
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Thanks for the feedback, Gary. We not only have to be concerned about the impossible situations we find ourselves in, but also those we might be putting others in. A cornered or wounded animal (or victim) can be the most fierce.
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Thanks for the feedback, Gary. This battle can't be won unless we know what we're up against. We made have made great gains, but now we must fight to keep our hard-fought victories and not slip backward again.
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Thanks for the feedback, Gary, and I'm glad you see what I was attempting to do with this piece. Even though I don't have a deep understanding with what they go through, I hope I shed some light on this issue.
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Defiance, thank you for the wonderful feedback. This is definitely an issue that people need to be educated about. I feel badly hearing about that boy and hope he ends up with someone who understands him.
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Thanks for the feedback, Dolores. It was a current topic I felt should be addressed.
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Thanks, Dolores. Growing old can be scary and hard to accept. Thanks for the feedback.
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Even though some views are changing overall, there will always be groups that won't grow and change with the times and will continue to cling stubbornly to the past.
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AC, thanks for the feedback and kind review. There is still a lot to be accomplished in the LGBT community, and unfortunately the transgendered is the group that's lagging farthest behind. Let's hope that situation improves quickly, otherwise a bunch of young kids will be dealing with situations that even people far older would find difficult to deal with.
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Were they at the wrong place (Amber vs Ember)? Where was the other couple? Was this an early Halloween story? Inquisitive minds want to know. lol I certainly won't be visiting any elegant, old hotels in the near future. Definitely short, to the point and no mistaking the mood.
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Thanks, craftingmom. I'm hoping this might help one or more of the young transgendered kids out there who are suffering from a lack of understanding from those around them. Maybe someone will read this and finally come to the realization of what they're going through. Thanks for the feedback.
