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Act II - When You’re Good to Mama
Darryl62 commented on Jack Poignet's story chapter in Act II - When You’re Good to Mama
My, my, my... if touching alone while thinking about shifting can make it happen, and drinking 🍸 the essence of Ray gives Gabriel magical qualities, can it be diluted. ( a New Zealand on air TV series called "The Creamery" comes to mind.) How many drops per litre? Honestly, my mind is just in overdrive! And helping the Vampires instead of fighting. Who knows?!? Author, make haste!!! -
Zorro I feel will never see his parents again, lost friends due to spies. Thrust into a position of power that he never thought would happen. Where to now for our group of heros?
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Act II - The Bitch Is Back
Darryl62 commented on Jack Poignet's story chapter in Act II - The Bitch Is Back
Dear @Jack Poignet, you must let us know what you are updating! So many! Is ir just spelling and grammar,? Comprehensive change? Should I start from the beginning? -
The golden house seems full of maniacal idiots, yet someone has the brains to do this. Outstanding work 👏 👌 👍
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Act II - The Bitch Is Back
Darryl62 commented on Jack Poignet's story chapter in Act II - The Bitch Is Back
Mother may be like Ray, part Shifter, part Vampire, part human. She also could be part of a long term plan that necessitated her having 2 children in exchange for something with the provisos of not having contact until the oldest was mated. I also think she will be a linchpin in the future 🤔 😏. Just a guess, and you can be sure no one will be happy with her return, especially those damnable witches. -
I an fearful that this delightful, calming and interesting interlude is actually the eye of the storm, not the safe harbour implied.
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Ahh, sadly I wonder if Fay was Dorothy when the Three Musketeers were young.
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Aramis & Chapter 3 (1/11)
Darryl62 commented on RedMoon's story chapter in Aramis & Chapter 3 (1/11)
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I'm looking forward to Kris and Claire crossing swords. Finn needs a strong reality check about being young and unattached. I see much drama ahead, Travis mentioned Jack (Meredith co actor boyfriend). And my ears pricked up immediately, our author doesn't name a person for nothing...
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I also think that Zorro is so young, caught up in events that he was not properly prepared for by his father looking to protect his son. Sadly in reality this happens. He has though, found either lifelong friends or will be so traumatised by the whole awful experience that he will withdraw from the world. We can guess that its option 1. Wonder if some of the Herbivore nano tech might include bionic eyes.. like the dragonfly drone...
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Act II - For The First Time In Forever
Darryl62 commented on Jack Poignet's story chapter in Act II - For The First Time In Forever
@Jack Poignet is indeed very very good at angst with his characters. Here, I'm looking forwards to the lovely dope ( Ray) being a Mr. Bean while attempting to get this Big Paws reality integrated with his viewpoint! -
At long last...a bit of sunlight in very dark story. Perhaps it is the dawn over the horizon 🤔
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Dr. Bob?!? From the Muppet Show? My my, a man of many unexpected alliterations
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Like...wow...very imaginative!
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Based on your other stories alone, im going to dive in. ...
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Rinse and repeat, I see what you did there.. hahaha, love it when a phrase has double meaning 🤣
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I am surprised by your comment actually, though it flowed well, the sense of foreboding in the previous chapters, a hint that it might turn out well only for the day to turn worse. Excellent writing, and slightly hair-raising (no pun intended) about the sense of danger 😀
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When they were in the alleyway, and spotted dog was "supposedly " looking for something, planted then I suspect
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I'm not liking these golden retrievers at all. Smith is going to save him, worse outcome to be beholden to a madman honestly, I remember a story made into a film called " Sleeping Dogs" about a dictatorship in New Zealand( 1970s?), and planting evidence on innocent people was a given, to make up quotas issued. As a school child we went to see it to learn about how easy it was to lose democracy.
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Sitting her between my husband and mother in law watching "Bergdoctor" on ZDF here in Australia, while they argue about medical knowledge in German. Hubby was a teaching doctor at a hospital near by. Schmalzy Haimat at its peak. Your update was most welcome
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I admit that I read it more than once, but failed to see one of my favourite words appear..."scudding "
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All for one, one for all! Forward my leader!
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Humm,I do declare.. humour and information. A most welcome morsel. I felt a little guilty pushinh for more, and yet.. here we are! You delivered!!! Bewitched, bewildered and bothered..
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Our Fox is treading a very fine line, which I fear is only going to become almost microscopically thin. Trust the author to walk us along the path, but do be mindful that your allegories are well hidden, in case the GA overlords become concerned, no political grandstanding! Your a marvellous writer 👏 😀, and I know you have just published this chapter, but...ready for more!
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Porthos & Chapter 1 (1/5)
Darryl62 commented on RedMoon's story chapter in Porthos & Chapter 1 (1/5)
Oi Oh, I am going to be so troubled by this story, but I know that it will be good for me.
