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What. LOL. I just can't even. What. Okay that was a hilarious story Andy, very blasphemous and I was cracking up the whole time. It kinda reminded me of a prompt comicfan brought up before. You started the beginning with a hook right away, and the whole story was interesting and easy to read without too many pedantic details. This Angel of death sounds super cute. Also at the end, I accidentally read it as : "Call me maybe, my eternal love" and I almost slapped myself. Great story LOL.

Oh my god Theodore "teddy" lewis is one GIANT FUCKING GAPING VAGINA ASSHOLE. He was a huge coward and made all sorts irrational, presumptuous, selfish, dumb decisions based on what he thinks is best for Andy. I hate people like that. Okay now that I have gotten those expletives out, I have to say I actually really enjoyed this story Comicfan. "Lost At Sea" was loaded with action and interesting events that move the plot right along -- nothing boring at all. I think that's the most important part of a story -- to keep things interesting! There were parts of the story where the pacing felt a little bit fast, but nothing major. The ending sequences in particular were well drawn out and very touching. I really like Andy as a character -- calm, thoughtful, kind, mature and vulnerable at the same time. Great story, again. Also, I love the title! Oh one more thing -- I actually thought that Bev was Teddy who underwent a sex change for the longest time and that his sickness was a result of him taking female hormones or something LOL. Also, when Bev said she was an archaeologist I thought Teddy was some sort of ancient Egyptian god who had impregnated her. I am not joking LOL. And honestly this is all good, because it shows that you keep the reader guessing throughout the story. AGAIN, great job!

This was a very interesting story. I loved the ending -- wouldn't it be nice to find a pot of treasure in my own home! You are very good with details -- I think that's one of the strong points of the story. I also really like how you introduced Justin and Andrew's first meeting and plans to move in together. It was intriguing and well written. I would have liked to see more of their relationship development from that point. Nonetheless, I still really enjoyed "At the End of the Rainbow."

Omg that is adorable @_________@ Also jailbait.

That was a interesting story. The writing was excellent in many ways -- the details, the pacing, and the characters were all top notch. You really brought Jamie to life -- he was a character that really exploded into vividity in my mind through the way that you described him. The story itself is interesting in the way that it really made me think and pushed the boundaries of what our laws and social norms really mean. The relationship between Jamie and Michael itself is very controversial and the way you described the sex scenes even more so, but I think you explored the theme, "Love knows no bounds" well. The age of given consent is a socially constructed rule that prevents indecent exploitation of youths, but that doesn't mean that love can't exist between a boy who's 14 and a man of 25. Great story in general. I enjoyed reading the interactions between Jamie and Michael even though some of it made me uncomfortable.

Hahaha ungh idk man, Teen Wolf is probably the most cheesy I can take, and that's pretty cheesy, and Degrassi is on a whole 'nother level!

OMG DEGRASSI I can't watch that LOLLLL. Haha I'll be sure to check out more stuff on your forum

It's okay man we haven't reached our prime yet. Live fast and party hard! ...... and write fiction like sensible men we are LOL

Holy fuck LOL. My first story here was like.... holy shit 6 years ago too LOL I WAS LIKE 15. And you were like... 17. Wow we were such lbs, what happened to our youth bro?

Wow you have been around for long time my dear. It's okay so have I. We're so old but so young

YOU HAVE 11 ANTHO STORIES WTF i must check them all out

Thanks for the kind comments Ieshwar :3 I haven't yet read the fluffy puppy's entry and comicfan's but I think I'll be doing that today.

YOU'RE THE MAN IESHWAR, MARRY ME

I disagree. Being gay and young is not always full of angst, and sometimes children just need sometime on their own to figure it out. I think it's respectful, mature, and trusting to let the child tell the parents first. And I don't think it's dismissive. It might seem assumptive from an outsider's perspective but ultimately it is the acceptance that matters. Not everyone likes to make mountains out of molehills, and even if the child is worried about how the parent reacts it doesn't mean that he wants his dad to gush all over the issue.

Howwwwwwwwww interesting! Reminds me of a music video I have been watching these days. Thanks Ieshwar for reviewing, I'll be checking this out.

This was a great story yettie. Your prose was very detailed and I thought your use of questions was very effective in drawing in the reader. You have a way of describing pain that makes it very realistic, and through it I thought you explored the theme of drawing from your own strength and overcoming the brinks of death very well. I felt Damian’s pain as if it was my own. “Darkness is black” was a very visceral, confounding, and vivid experience. Also Storm is hot. I’m a sucker for emerald green eyes, although I have to say that is an extraordinarily rare eye colour :B I am glad it ended on a good note, and that something bright came out of all the darkness after all!

Oh my god Celethiel I am creeped out, I'm reading this at night and now I feel like there's something cold behind me gaaahhhh. I didn't expect that even though I saw the tag "ghosts" in your story. I have to say, the ending REALLY made the story. It brought a whole new element to it. Besides the ending, I really enjoyed the beginning with the hunt scene. That was a very effective way in drawing in your reader. I thought there were a few moments where you should have showed more than told (like "acted like an older brother") but overall I thought the writing was very smooth and the world imaginative. I liked both Edain and Marcus (Edain is hot hot hot). I always enjoy a good fantasy story once in awhile and this was good!

Hello Finn, thanks for reviewing! Yeah I was just reading your story, funny how it was at the same time. It was interesting because I discovered some minor overlapping concepts of parallel universes in both stories. Thanks for the kind words and thank you for reading.

Hello Percy, thanks for stopping by. I'm glad the transitions and conversation were sound -- I did spend a bit of time reading out Sage and Callen's conversations in my own weird and wacky voices so they would sound all natural. The story was largely based on Schrodinger's Cat paradox, but kinda within their own minds, but that's open for interpretation. I'm glad you enjoyed "Six Seconds," and thanks again for reviewing.

I don't see how your personal experience has anything to do with this, but okay bro! To each their own

STAHP FINN the fluffy puppy is mine >:C

Finn, I quite liked this story. Your prose is good and you have some great ideas here. I read this story several times in order to better understand it, but I only have a few interpretations. I'm assuming these alternative "me's" are ones from another dimension, an alternate reality, a demonstration of quantum, and they were somehow called across these realities. I'm not too sure I understand that particular process in your story, but you explored the intangible questions of what it means to exist in your body, whether there are others out there, while tying in tangible human emotions. I like that.

Well.... it is yahoo news, LOL. But aside from that, I think that's the thing about the internet. You have to suspend suspicion sometimes because everything and anything could be potentially fake. Take GA for example. I choose to believe that the things members say they are, are what they are, unless I have a reason to believe otherwise. I think it's the same basic concept with this viral letter, and I don't think there's any harm in it whether it was fake or not.

Thank you RJ. I tried to bring some hope into an otherwise very tragic ending.

I tend to believe in these sort of things unless I have a reason otherwise. This message could be fake or it could be real -- it's all a matter of perspective. I choose to believe it's real and I think it's sweet. And so what if it's fake? Like Celethiel said, I think it's still a great message and a great thing that everyone is so happy about it. That's what matters. Thanks for sharing this Celethiel; it brightened up my morning.