You've created a beautiful piece Rosenkrantz. I love how Eli approached this subject matter -- full of hope, resolve, and strength. There was a simplicity in the language and emotion that I really felt -- Eli just wanted to get better, to stay on top, in the name of love. There was sadness yes, difficulty, yes, but it wasn't bogged down with angst, which I liked. The ending choked me up, but the letter was appropriately wonderful.
You're writing is good too. Someone's definitely an up and coming author